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Something so right – chapter eleven
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“I never thought I would feel sorry for Bette Porter – that’s cruel “
Tina smiled “ Bette does run but not as much as me and not to the intensity “
“Or with the amount of pain you like to inflict “
“By the time we finished I thought she was going to throw up. She looked green. We went to the supermarket and she had to wait outside because she felt so sick. I had a bacon sandwich when we got to my place – she had dry toast “
“Better than I managed “
“You took to your bed for two days “
“I was in pain “
“You were being a wuss “
Helena nodded “Okay Kennard – you win. I will not have you sectioned or have you fitted with a chastity belt to protect your honour. You are probably one of the few women who is capable enough to hold your own against Bette “
Tina laugh was dirty as she said “ You know what I am looking forward to holding against Bette”
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That evening Bette was working late. She was sitting alone in her office looking through some emails – the gallery was doing well and she was beginning to make a decent return on her investment. She had sold her house and bought a much smaller studio apartment to free up the capital she had needed to get her business off the ground. That sacrifice had been repaid – she could think about maybe buying a bigger place. But for now she was happy where she was.
She glanced up and her heart leapt with joy
“Hey gorgeous “ Tina was standing in the doorway grinning at her.
“You are a sight for sore eyes “ Bette said
Tina walked into the room and placed a coffee and a paper bag at Bette’s desk “I was out getting myself something to eat and I decided to drive by with a gift to help you with your work “
“You work 15 minutes in the other direction “
Tina shrugged “ I am very particular about my coffee and I thought to myself – who do I know who is a bigger snob than me when it comes to coffee and here I am “
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another great chapter allie! Thanks! You just validated my vote for me once again. Oh, and there are tons more exervise women to oogle if you go to the gym! Good luck with getting fit.
Too cute:-) can’t get enough of this sweet story PPS
i wanna go on ‘holiday’. all this coming and going, makes a girls head spin. thx
It’s about fucking time! Interpret that any way you wish.
HEy Ally, Thank you for showing the sweetness and romance that Bette and can share. Their partnership here lights up my heart and soul to the wondrs of true love. Both gals are playing this tune perfectly. As ever it is your writing that sparkles and shines. Thank you so much for this and all your other tales. Happy New Year and will try to so better in the feedback stakes. My gratitude and appreciation. Your Loyal Fan.
awesome as usual :D
WOW, this story is amazing ! Thanks! Hope to read the trip to Hawai soon ;-)
Great update, frankly spell anyway you want,lol. i think we get the idea,lol… now i can’t wait for them to go away for a week! :)
Great as usual – love Tina running Bette down to size – surprize who is the athlete in this relationship??
I truly can’t get enough of this…and “you are dating someone who has the biggest reputation of any lesbian in a very lesbian city” makes me grin. Hope the trip will not spell gallery trouble for Bette though
Hi Ally – I’m with you on the spelling; can’t text for the life of me. I love this story, this Bette, this Tina. All I can say is, God you’re good!
OMG, OMG, OMG!!!! I can’t wait to go to Hawaii!!!!!! This story just keeps getting better and better. PLEEEEEEEEASE post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Once again, one of your loyal fans checking in. I loved this chapter. Can’t wait for the Hawaii trip…looks like Tina is up for the task! PPS
Glad Helena didn’t blow a gasket when Tina told her who she was dating she needs the support of her friends. Can’t wait for the girls to get to Hawaii and lose a lot of clothes. PPS
oh yay! PPS
As usuall Allyemmerson , great job and I cannot wait to read the Hawaii trip… bet its going to be a sizzler
This is so good, B&T are so cute and sweet and can’t wait to see they at Hawaii. Glad to see Helena didn’t freak out when Tina tell her she dating Bette. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
I love the sweet and oh so love the dirty! :) Tina and Bette are so fun in this story. I can’t wait to read about Hawaii.
geezzz Ally, they better rent some scuba gear in Hawaii, I think they’ll need the oxagen tanks. Md
of course, where tina leads bette will follow…that ass…is hot!!!! pps
Great update Alley! Finally Bette and Tina on a holiday together. They hardly ever leave WEHO even in the fan fics. Bring on Hawaii!
Hi Ally, I had such a horrid day at work today. I’m so glad to find that you have posted this chapter when I got back. Reading it makes me feel a whole world better. Thanks a million! Hope you’ll post the next one real soon. Can’t wait to read about them in Hawaii…
Lamentamini – when i write it its “come” because i am such a pedant that i cannot use predictive texts – so all my text messages are 2-3 pages long because i have to use the proper word – mind you i am an old so and so. i know that doesn’t clear anything up but i thought i would offer my opinion.
I really, really love this story. I like that Tina has all this cool stuff in her background like being a great athlete. Bette would admire something like that.. as long as it came with brains as well. Can’t wait for Hawaii. How exciting.
“The answer is yes Tina – of course I can come on holiday with you ” And come you shall, Ms. Porter. or is it cum? Anyone care to settle this once and for all?
LOL@ogling the exercise lady. XD