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    Something so right – chapter five

    Story written on December 16, 2007 by allyemmerson.
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    Another day – another date

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

    Chapter Five

     

    Bette was looking at the menu working out the bill while Tina was in the bathroom. Bette had suffered a terrible morning at work – two solid hours trying to smooth talk an artist who could dither for America in the Olympics and at the end of the 120 minutes she would not make a call about her work -still no agreement for the Bette Porter Gallery to display her work. Bette could put up with arrogance and rudeness – two traits that she possessed – but what she could not deal with was bloody indecision. It was only when she got back to her desk that her assistant James had given her the message that T. Kennard had been on the phone.

     

     

    It had come as a shock to Bette that just hearing Tina’s name lifted her mood so much. They had chatted and agreed to met for lunch. Bette looked up as Tina came back to the table – Tina dressed fantastically. Today she was wearing a light grey business suit and killer heels – it made her taller than Bette who was in flats today. Her long blonde hair was tied back in a ponytail and she looked terrific. Bette had sat and admired Tina’s ass on the way to the bathroom – she definitely had a great body – very sexy. As Tina threaded her way back to Bette, the brunette looked at Tina again.

     

     

    There was just something about the way that Tina moved – her hips wiggling just enough to be noticeable but not enough to be tarty. Bette looked upwards from Tina’s legs and her eyes fixed on her chest – Tina had fantastic boobs – breasts that Bette had got enough of a glimpse of to know that she wanted to taste them. She wanted to taste everything of Tina – to kiss her mouth and move lower and lower.

     

    “You look distracted “ Tina said sitting down

     

    Bette rubbed her face “ Sorry – as I said – its been a bad morning – this afternoon is all about paperwork “

     

    “What time you finishing ?”

     

    “Aiming to finish for five – you ?”

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    1. I really like your take on this story. Bette and Tina are having a clandestine relationship that they are keeping secretive. It’s full of electricity. Bring on Bette romancing Tina!! PPS

    7. Another great one AllyE.So happy that you are off for a couple weeks and have the time and desire to write. Thank you for taking the time to write, we do enjoy your diverse writing.Oh talented one. You should be writing romance for a living, you would be hugely successful. Seriously. I would but any and everything you write. PPS

    8. Great post. I am glad they are taking the time to get to know each other without the added stress of thier friends butting in. This is slowly becoming my favorite over AYNIL. PPS

    12. Ally, beautiful doesn’t do justice to describe this story. You are an amazing writer. This is my new favourite beginning story. It’s simply amazing. Please post soon and more. Merry Christmas and God bless you!

    13. Please let Dana take on Alice. Soon. Is would be soooo good for everybody. Bette could live her own life then. Now what are you going to do about Alice’s counterpart in Tina’s life, namely Helena? Jesus, such busybodies!

    15. I love this story. Its a beginning..which is the best kind because its not messed up by cannon like the affair, Tina going back to men, and all that BS. Plus, watching B/T fall in love in this clandestine relationship they aren’t sharing with anyone is interesting. Can’t wait for more of the date.

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