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Something so right – chapter five
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Dana stopped the running machine and looked at Tina – was her friend gradually accepting that she wanted to act on her feelings ?
“Nothing beats it – it is the most amazing feeling. Yes you have kissed men and had sex with them. But for me “
Dana gazed into the middle distance for several seconds
“For it was a revelation – I never knew anything could taste as good or as sweet or as soft as a woman’s lips. There is no going back Tina – be sure because once you make love with a woman — there are very few women who can go back. Has Helena ever said that she could date a man ? No because no feeling is as wonderful. Take care with the leap Tina because even if you did think that you had feelings for men – a woman would spoil you forever more “
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Bette was standing outside the gallery waiting for Tina – she was wearing black Wranglers, a plain white tee-shirt and a black leather jacket – she knew that she looked good. James had looked at her when she had emerged from her office. Her plan to leave work and go home and get changed had been over taken by work so she had only had time to have a shower at work and dip into her reserve wardrobe of clothes that she left in her office. She was pleased with the effect – she would pick her briefcase up the next day – well that depended on whether she could spend the weekend with Tina – she knew that she wanted to see the blonde – the weekend before had been great. She wanted more of the same – though a kiss would also be good as well but she was pretty sure that Tina was still wrestling with her demons.
She saw Tina’s car pull into the car park and cruise to a halt in front of the building. Bette climbed into the car and looked at Tina very nice. The blonde was wearing tight black canvas trousers and a baggy yellow shirt -yellow suited her colouring.
“Good afternoon ?” Tina asked
“Glad its over you ?”
“I finished early and went to the gym “
Bette nodded – Tina reached behind her and pulled a red rose out
“For you “
Bette accepted the flower with a smile
“You flatterer “
Tina laughed “Well – I have been thinking about the way that two women romance each other – and I wasn’t sure if there was a protocol “
“Gay women are no different – some like to be romanced and some don’t “
“You don’t ?” Tina looked anxious
“Its “ Bette looked at the flower “ No one has ever romanced me “
Tina bite her lip “Damn – sorry “
“No – honest Tina – I am flattered. No one ever has but – but well I like it “
Tina looked at Bette who was looking at the flower
“Sure ? I would rather you tell me now “
“No – honest Tina – its lovely “
“Really ?”
“Honest – it’s a lovely touch “
“I can do it again ?”
Bette looked at the blonde and swallowed – Tina could do anything and it would be fine by her.
She reached out her hand and touched Tina’s face – Bette could feel the electricity between them
“Yes – as long as I can romance you “
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I really like your take on this story. Bette and Tina are having a clandestine relationship that they are keeping secretive. It’s full of electricity. Bring on Bette romancing Tina!! PPS
oh my……..will they kiss tonite…nice story…ally….bring on tlwing
It’s a breath taking story but honestly did you have to stop here Ally please post another one soon
I love this. Alice is sooo nosy. I hope Tina starts to crumble & at least gives Bette a kiss soon.
You are so good at writing all different kinds of stories. This one has a gentle and measured progression. PPS.
Tina romancing Bette WOW…love is in the air…:)
Another great one AllyE.So happy that you are off for a couple weeks and have the time and desire to write. Thank you for taking the time to write, we do enjoy your diverse writing.Oh talented one. You should be writing romance for a living, you would be hugely successful. Seriously. I would but any and everything you write. PPS
Great post. I am glad they are taking the time to get to know each other without the added stress of thier friends butting in. This is slowly becoming my favorite over AYNIL. PPS
I’m really enjoying this story
funnyone, thats kinda funny. jesus as a busybody!!! a little romance never hurt anyone. dont know what you might get from it. thanks.
Talk about building a solid foundation. This story is great!
Ally, beautiful doesn’t do justice to describe this story. You are an amazing writer. This is my new favourite beginning story. It’s simply amazing. Please post soon and more. Merry Christmas and God bless you!
Please let Dana take on Alice. Soon. Is would be soooo good for everybody. Bette could live her own life then. Now what are you going to do about Alice’s counterpart in Tina’s life, namely Helena? Jesus, such busybodies!
Ally, this is a marvelous story… love the way you portray Bette falling for Tina… please post soon!!
I love this story. Its a beginning..which is the best kind because its not messed up by cannon like the affair, Tina going back to men, and all that BS. Plus, watching B/T fall in love in this clandestine relationship they aren’t sharing with anyone is interesting. Can’t wait for more of the date.
That was beautiful!