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    Something so right chapters 118&119

    “Yes she is and she is going to apologise to Bette “

     

    “Its okay “

     

    “No “Tina said firmly “Willow – that was out of line and you are not coming in here saying whatever the hell you like – that comment is never going to be repeated “

     

    “Since when did Bette become one of this family ? “

     

    “Since she started dating your sister “

     

    “Well it would be one hell of a family if we let in all the girlfriends and boyfriends that the three

    of us can count up “

     

    “Bette is part of this family on account that I have been living with her for two years – she is my life partner and what was the other thing – oh yeah – we are getting married. So college girl watch your mouth “

     

    Willow glared angrily at Tina

     

    “Okay – no harm done “ said Bette “Though a congratulations would go a long way to making the atmosphere in here easier “

     

    “Congratulations “ Willow said “I’m going to take my bags upstairs “

    “Your breakfast is nearly ready “

     

    “I’ll be five minutes “ Willow said with bad grace and stomped out.

     

    “That went well “ Bette said pulling a face

     

    “She’s going to get a slapped ass “ Tina forecast

     

    “Tina ! “ Sarah said

     

    “Well – what the hell is wrong with her ? “

     

    Bette was tempted to point out how damn angry Tina had been only a month ago but if she

    was playing the part of UN peace keeper that was a comment that would only inflame the situation

     

    “Damn kid “ Tina cursed “Needs to learn some manners “

     

    Tina exited the room

     

    Bette looked across at Sarah who was trying hard not to laugh – Bette walked across to her and poked her in the ribs causing Sarah to laugh out loud

     

    “She’s trying to protect you “ Bette said

     

    “I know but Tina was the ultimate rebel when she was an undergraduate and I can hardly claim not to have been just as bad at her age ”

    Comments

    1. I love all your stories,but I have to say that this one is one of my favorites!! I love how Bette and Tina are so in love and respect each other!! Just great writing!! Love Bette telling Tina’s dad the way it is- go Bette!!! Good job girl!! PPS

    2. Willow needs to get out all her anger just like everyone else, maybe she can throw some hay bales around or something. Thank goodness for Bette the peacemaker, she has lent an air of calm and commonsense into all this and so far they have been listening to her, hope it continues. They all need a resolution and Niall is the only one that can give it to them. I just hope Willow doesn’t deck him when she sees him, although I couldn’t blame her if she does, he does deserve it. He also needs to clear the air with Sarah before he talks to his children then he can say whatever he wants then get the hell out. If he insists on giving a share of the farm, and profits, etc to the new child, he just might not come out alive. He needs to leave that the hell alone and excplain his actions to everyone and leave them in peace. Everyone knows their parents have not been happy in a very long time so this may be the only way that they can live peacefully. By living n an open marriage they were able to explore being with others until they found that special person for themselves, which Niall found first, unfortunatley he was a coward and did not go to Sarah with the info and just walked away leaving everyone upset and to imagine whatever their minds could conjure up what had happened and with no real resolution. Maybe this meeting will not end in his murder and he can walk away peacefully and his children not totally hating him. For Sarah this is probably good riddance. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Thanks so much for posting. PPS

    3. Oh you’re back!…how’s the vacation? I love this story [as much as “The Wing”] I can see why Willow is angry.. Can understand what she’s feeling.But to direct that to someone you’re not angry off?..Kinda unfair to that person?..And what kind of person you are, if you allow that to happen? Your family is not the enemy here, and so is Bette …Be waiting for the showdown, Niall and the rest of Them!

    4. I think they should Willow go and vent her Anger at her dad, Niall deserves it. If I was them i would have disown him. He was so unhappy, he should gotten the divorce and not hide like a kitchen and then demanding that his new baby gets a share of the farm after leaving his wife alone to take care of the farm. Go willow! don’t let the others stop you from telling your dad off.

    5. First of all let me say how hyped I was when you returned early with post of ITL (You said that you where taking a month off and I was counting the days). It’s GREAT to have you back. CONGRADULATIONS and we all wish you continued success and strength. As the lyrics to one of my favorite singer son say “Life is a journey, not a destination”. Thank you for allowing use to take this journey with you through your writing.Now to this story, I feel that it is VERY IMPORTANT that Willow is allowed the same oppurtunity to vent her feelings to their father taht Tina and Finn were given. Being the youngest does NOT make your feeling or voice less valuable or valid. Bette is right that Naill’s need to step up and take responsibility for his action, but part of that should be hearing Willow out and taking the heat from her. Because at the end of the day, being the youngest of this older children, she will have to deal with the consquences of his actions the longest. I understand Tina’s reaction, but she needs to be mature enough to step back and realize that her initial reaction was just as bad as Willow’s and Willow has had to live with her frustation longer and with no way to relieve her anger because Niall’s was hiding out. While Bette and Sarah admitted this to each other, they should have been brave or supportive enough to point it out to Tina. This would have helped both Tina and Willow. Thanks for the update. PPS :o).

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