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Soul Mates – Chapter 15 ((Final Chapter))
Story written on May 4, 2012 by Liah x Doll.
Her stomach churned as she took note that some of those clouds were greying. The smell of water was also in the air but it was hard to tell if it was due to a possible rainstorm or the river beside them. Tina really hoped it was the latter, it would suck to have all her luck run out now.
"Damn Tina, this looks amazing"
Alice’s voice pulled Tina from her thoughts as they stood on the finished runway to admire the result of all their hard work. Tina turned to look at her friend with a wide smile that equally matched Alice’s, they were both beyond impressed with the end result.
Everything was finally done and set up, the last few chairs were being put in place by a few scrambling men. The tables for the banquet were neatly set up beside the river, small lanterns were lined up around it and set to an automatic timer, they would turn on once the sun sets. Bette added her own personal touch to the show and Tina couldn’t be happier about that. Beautiful hand crafted designs hung all over and took the place of anything Tina could ever hope to buy in a store. Colored lights were placed behind the clear shells hanging from either trees or the lining of the runway, each shell having its own unique design which would illuminate the area in different colors and also in different ways. The lights were currently off since it was still daylight but would be turned on as soon as the show starts and the sun begins to set, Tina couldn’t wait.
The runway was set up so that it was facing the river, Bette’s shells and the lights would further awe the guests as they reflected off the still water beside them. Carmen’s DJ booth was also set up and beautifully decorated with Bette’s unique crafts. A pair of handcrafted yellow baby booties hung off the side of the booth, a small gift from Bette.
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slntrdr says
Brava! :-)
virginiagirl says
I absolutely enjoyed this story. Amazing ending…would love to see you take this farther and do a sequel.. love ur writing..
favcouple says
Fabulous ending. This has been one of the most wonderful stories I have read. Excellent writing and amazing story. Thank you for this. Looking forward to the epilogue and more stories from you.
mette hartmann says
Excellent!
AmandaMG says
loved this story and so sorry to see it end… maybe you will give us a sequel/// now i do love peggy but loved to see she got what she deserved too… i could just see them both in the river… priceless… thanks for your time in writing this… pps
jp22 says
This story has had a bit of everything… it’s been fantastic and a joy to read. I can’t wait for the epilogue, and whatever you choose to write next, I’ll be reading. Thank you, Liah! :)
falcongirl says
I loved this story too. I am looking forward to more stories from you. You are an excellent writer and can’t wait for a new one from you. Thanks again, I loved it.
Tibetter24 says
Fantastic ending!!!!
didi1956 says
Excellent.Thank you.Please continue writing.
Tanishaa says
WOW!! just amazing enjoyed this story so much didn’t want it to end please if possible continue with a sequel!! Thanks :)
foreigner63 says
Thank you for sharing this story. I hope you still have many more ideas and care to share them with us.
Dainty says
Fantastic chapter. Wonder if we could get you to write the remake of Sweet Home, with JB and LH starring in it. It would be a fantastic number one at the box office. I’m ready to contribute to that production. The story was wonderful. So happy that Tina decked one of them. Can’t get over peggy being an obnoxious bitch, glad Tina hit her and got two for one. Do we get a sequel or an epilogue? Thanks.
Merlion says
Wow Liah!! BRAVA!! … ^o^ I do enjoy reading every sentence in your story! And I simply love this story! :-) Thanks for sharing your story and talent! I do appreciate that! :-) please bring on the epi ;-) lol :-D
talaula says
😱 we’re getting an epi too?!!!!! I haven’t been this excited since NASCAR. Loved this beautiful update. Thank you Liah 😘
don70 says
I love this story Im sorry to see it end. I hope you have more for us.Thank you so much for writing it.
Ozgal says
Thanks Liah for writing this story. I loved it from the very first chapter. I eagerly wait for the epilogue and hopefully for a new story from you.
supershock says
Loved this story!! Thanks so much for sharing
cvu says
How could I missed your story?.. Thank you for the journey what a wonderful ride you took me.
BnTinmyhead says
Beautiful loved every bit of it so cute and full of stubborn ads love lol…great story thank you.
BnTinmyhead says
Ok I just read it again.. still love it thank you.