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Soul Singing 10
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“We were talking and suddenly she just went like this,” He explained, or tried to. He had no idea what was going on. They were just talking about Dana and then she just.
“Dana.” Liam said her name out loud as it clicked in his brain what this was all about. “Holy crap,
“Didn’t what?” Gabby demanded to know, not liking to be kept out of the loop on anything.
“Dana had a big dinner last night,” Liam began, his eyesight not leaving
“Whoa hold up,” Gabby exclaimed. “You’re telling me that all of this is over Al missing one dinner. Dana hasn’t died or become involved in an accident or anything it’s just that Al missed a dinner. Talk about an overreaction.”
“You don’t understand,” Liam replied quietly. “This meant a whole lot. It probably killed Dana just as much as it’s killing Al now maybe even more.”
“Well then we should start fixing it,” Gabby stated, wondering why neither of the others had bothered thinking of this solution. “We’re finished here, so I’ll change around our flights and get the nearest one out. We’ll work on it from there, yeah?”
“Wow you have changed,” Liam said, surprised by Gabby’s show of compassion. “No more wicked witch of the west.”
“If you call me that again, I’ll kick your balls,” Gabby replied as she walked out of the room to find her phone.
“Talked too soon”
Dana walked into The Planet with a giant smile on her face, having just been congratulated by an elderly couple on her award from the night before. She quickly spotted Jenny, Shane and Carmen at their usual table and after collecting her coffee, walked over to join them.
“Hey guys,” she said brightly, before sitting down and picking up the newspaper on the table. She had read the entire first paragraph when she realised that no one at the table was talking, and that none of them had even said hello back to her. Dana slowly pulled down the newspaper in front of her to reveal her three friend looking grimly back at her.
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ARGHHH! Well hopefully all will get better. Greater chapter and great cliffhanger.
Quick and great update, wooo hoooo!!! Oh the drama, it was nothing like I thought but I love it. I wonder, is Gabby really good? Really, really? Hmmm. Thank you!
aww…poor Dana. At least she’s taking the lead. Alice definetly has some explainin to do. Great update.. :)
Ahhhhh oh man Dana had a double wammy of hurt. I hope Alice figures somethng out, shes a friggen musician write a song or somethin, hope Dana forgives her tho. Thanks for the post, keep up the great work!
Nice way to keep people hanging. I’m more sensitive than I thought, I almost cried when Dana found out. Hopefully, ur a nice person n will make it so that Ms. Fairbanks forgives Ms. Piszecki. Great update.
Oops, I did it again. From:Stripes
Crumbs!! It was awesome, can’t wait for the next chap. KIU…Peace
This is great! So different. I was hoping for a couple of more pages, but I guess I’ll have to wait.
You’ve sure got my interest. I’m excited to read the next one. I apologize if this is rude, but I can’t help but notice it, I’m nitpicky that way; watch the tenses. It could just be typing mistakes, but just thought I would let you know. :)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Why oh why did Alice have to do that!?!? I hope Dana forgives her – love the fic btw :o)
Oh My GOD!!!! So good! And I’ll admit that I do like this “new” Gabby. She is using her powers for good…I can’t believe you left us hanging like that! I can’t wait to see the big, romantic 100%-in-love-with Dana gesture! Please update soon!
I can’t wait to see what gabby does to help alice but I hope it works because this might just do some damage to alice if dana won’t have her back please post soon I love it
Hey, I knew the kiss would cause problems. I wondered how they would play out. Nice update. I hope to see another chapter soon!
My internetconnection has been really bad the last couple of days, so I couldn’t comment on part 9. Ok, I officially ‘hate’ you for bringing Gabby back into the story. :P But then again, Gabby is coming to the rescue for the Danish love…isn’t she?