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Soul Singing 10
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“W-What’s up guys?” Dana asked, a weak smile still evident on her face, with half of her hoping this was some joke on their part.
“Um,” Shane looked down at the table and took a breathe, closing her eyes in an attempt to visual what it was she had to say to Dana. “I Dane you don’t happen to read L.A. Star do you?”
Dana moved her sight from Shane, to Jenny, to Carmen, trying to find any hint that they were just fooling around with her. After finding nothing, Dana finally conceded that something was wrong.
“No I don’t. Why?”
Carmen looked at Shane, silently indicating to her to continue.
“N-No reason,” Shane stated quickly after a few moments of silence, somehow managing to smile at Dana. “There was just a little article in it a few weeks back about your backhand, and we were all wondering how that was. It said that you were sort of faltering a bit.”
Dana didn’t reply at first, her expression displaying her initial disbelief that this was what Shane wanted to talk about. Luckily though, the gullible Dana soon gave way, and she began a somewhat long discussion about her tennis style, to which the other three feigned interest.
“OK guys, I’m off,” Dana said finally, about an hour later. Carmen kicked Shane’s foot underneath the table to persuade Shane to go as well.
“Ouch fuck!” Shane cried, looking over at Carmen who gave Shane a deadly stare.
“Are you ok Shane?” Dana and Jenny both asked at the same time, alarmed at the sudden outburst.
“Y-Y.. Yeah I am,” Shane eventually replied. “I-I just kicked my knee on the table.. Really hurt. But Dane wait up because I have to leave as well.”
“It will be ok” Liam whispered to her, gently nudging her arm. “Dana loves you dearly
“She shouldn’t have to understand Liam,”
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ARGHHH! Well hopefully all will get better. Greater chapter and great cliffhanger.
Quick and great update, wooo hoooo!!! Oh the drama, it was nothing like I thought but I love it. I wonder, is Gabby really good? Really, really? Hmmm. Thank you!
aww…poor Dana. At least she’s taking the lead. Alice definetly has some explainin to do. Great update.. :)
Ahhhhh oh man Dana had a double wammy of hurt. I hope Alice figures somethng out, shes a friggen musician write a song or somethin, hope Dana forgives her tho. Thanks for the post, keep up the great work!
Nice way to keep people hanging. I’m more sensitive than I thought, I almost cried when Dana found out. Hopefully, ur a nice person n will make it so that Ms. Fairbanks forgives Ms. Piszecki. Great update.
Oops, I did it again. From:Stripes
Crumbs!! It was awesome, can’t wait for the next chap. KIU…Peace
This is great! So different. I was hoping for a couple of more pages, but I guess I’ll have to wait.
You’ve sure got my interest. I’m excited to read the next one. I apologize if this is rude, but I can’t help but notice it, I’m nitpicky that way; watch the tenses. It could just be typing mistakes, but just thought I would let you know. :)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Why oh why did Alice have to do that!?!? I hope Dana forgives her – love the fic btw :o)
Oh My GOD!!!! So good! And I’ll admit that I do like this “new” Gabby. She is using her powers for good…I can’t believe you left us hanging like that! I can’t wait to see the big, romantic 100%-in-love-with Dana gesture! Please update soon!
I can’t wait to see what gabby does to help alice but I hope it works because this might just do some damage to alice if dana won’t have her back please post soon I love it
Hey, I knew the kiss would cause problems. I wondered how they would play out. Nice update. I hope to see another chapter soon!
My internetconnection has been really bad the last couple of days, so I couldn’t comment on part 9. Ok, I officially ‘hate’ you for bringing Gabby back into the story. :P But then again, Gabby is coming to the rescue for the Danish love…isn’t she?