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Soul Singing 3
Alice nodded silently and the two of them followed the doctor through a seemingly endless array of white corridors, all laced with the smell of disinfectant, urine and flowers.
“I hate this smell,” Alice said quietly as they walked through the corridor. She had always hated this smell. The rather large amount of people Alice had loved and known who had passed away in rooms filled with a similar stench had caused the smell to be almost stomach churning to Alice. It was inextricably linked with death.
“I hate it too,” Dana whispered as she untangled her hand from Alice’s to place it around Alice’s shoulder. “He’s alright Al. Nothing bad is going to happen.”
“I know,” Alice said with a smile as they continued to walk down another corridor. “Thanks to you.”
Before Dana had a chance to comment, the doctor stopped, turned around, and pointed at a door to their left.
“Mr Taylor’s room,” he said, his voice dull. “Now remember that he is very tired after his ordeal, so keep talking to a minimum. I’ll come and get you in about twenty minutes.”
The doctor then walked back down the corridor they came, his shoes making a loud echo even when he was out of sight.
“Nice doctor,” Alice mumbled as she and Dana opened the door to Liam’s room.
The room was brightly lit and Alice could at once make out Liam’s figure in the bed towards the end of the room. There were at least six other beds in there, all empty, and Alice subconsciously grabbed Dana’s hand once more as she made her way over to Liam.
“Liam?” She stated quietly as the two reached the side of the bed.
“About ***** time someone visited me,” Liam replied in a course whisper. “This place is a bore.”
“Well what purpose do we serve apart from being your entertainment?” Alice replied dryly, a small smile appearing on her worn out face. “What happened Liam?”
“Are you going to introduce me?” Liam ignored Alice’s question.
“***** yeah, of course,” Alice replied suddenly as she realised how rude she was being. “Um Dana this is my best friend Liam and Liam this is Dana.”
Liam pull one of bruised arms out to shake Dana’s hand.
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(41 votes, average: 3.41 out of 5)
yay! silly grin time over here as well. :D so cute! drama filled chappy but excellent!!
Wow, that was a perfect chapter. I loved everything about it, so much I can’t pinpoint anything in particular, it was truly everything. Maybe say that I love Liam as well, I hope he gets to meet Howie =) Thanks for updating, I missed this story! Can’t wait for more.
We’re all crazy in love with your fic…Good,cute ole D&A. *cheesey grin*
I have been waiting for the follow up of this story. Again, a huge smile on my face. :D
AWWW! That was adorable!! My heart is smiling! Great update! Keep it up.
What a sweet story. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
That was a crazy, yet wonderful night. I love all your story but this has to be my fav.
That was a crazy, yet wonderful night. I love all your story but this has to be my fav.
I was so excited to see your update. I’m really enjoying this story. I like Dana as a “wierd, perverted psycho who likes hospitals.” LOL!
Great Update!
Whoa what an intresting first date. loved the ending, and the whole chapter, can’t wait for the next post, Hope you post soon!!
Awww..”I’m crazy about you too.”, I got a silly grin on my face. How sweet was that? I’m enjoying the side story of Liam as well. Great update!
aaaaaaaaaaawwwww That was SO Pretti..BEAUTIFUL oh, ooo0o SO Beautiful!!!THNK u4writing, that was such a Cute chapter..I was waiting4this&I thnk it was a Grt update..
Really nice and interesting :D
yay! great way to start my morning. thank you.