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    Soul Singing 3

    “Shall we?” Alice asked as she extended her arm for Dana, obviously undeterred by Dana’s comment. “I made reservations at Michael’s. Do you know the place?”

    “Know the place?” Dana remarked as they walked out to Alice‘s car. “Who doesn’t? Al Michael’s is awfully expensive. You shouldn’t have gone to so much trouble.”

    Alice was quick to reply.

    “I wanted to.”

    “Well in that case let’s hop to it,” Dana replied goofily as she got into the car, cursing herself the second after for tarnishing her ‘cool’ image so early in the night.

    “It’s beginning to rain,” Alice commented as she shut Dana’s door and went around to her own. “Thank god I reserved seats inside.”

    “Smart thinking. Just touch wood that the car doesn’t break down or anything like that,” Dana replied as she looked out her window. The rain had come down fast and it had come down hard.

    “This car?” Alice asked. “Never.”

     

    Ten minutes Later

     

    “I can’t believe we broke down,” Alice said in an exasperated tone as she leaned her head against the steering wheel. “I mean c’mon! What are the odds!”

    “It’s because you didn’t touch wood,” Dana commented in an ‘I-told-you-so’ fashion.

    “Noohoohooo missy. It’s because you mentioned it in the first place.” Alice got out of the car and pushed up the bonnet and tried to look like she knew what she was doing.

    “How does it look?” Dana yelled from the car window, contemplating whether to get out and join Alice in the rain.

    “Ahhh” Truthfully Alice had no idea. But that wasn’t going to stop her. “Ah the dilator seems to be busted and the titanium prongs are damaged.”

    Dana may have be seen as a little nave but she wasn’t stupid. It took all her energy to exit that car and stand next to Alice without laughing.

    “See? The dilator is totally screwed,” Alice said pointing.

    “The dilator? Wow sounds expensive,” she stated as she looked down to where Alice was pointing at the engine. “So, of course you knowing so much about cars.. You’ll be able to fix it right?”

    *****. *****. *****. “Right.”

    Alice looked around once more, desperately trying to remember anything she had ever learnt about cars. Unfortunately her experience with cars was even less than her experience with tennis. Which didn’t leave much.

    Comments

    1. Wow, that was a perfect chapter. I loved everything about it, so much I can’t pinpoint anything in particular, it was truly everything. Maybe say that I love Liam as well, I hope he gets to meet Howie =) Thanks for updating, I missed this story! Can’t wait for more.

    2. Awww..”I’m crazy about you too.”, I got a silly grin on my face. How sweet was that? I’m enjoying the side story of Liam as well. Great update!

    3. aaaaaaaaaaawwwww That was SO Pretti..BEAUTIFUL oh, ooo0o SO Beautiful!!!THNK u4writing, that was such a Cute chapter..I was waiting4this&I thnk it was a Grt update..

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