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Stained – Chapter 12
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"Well, I have water, water and hey, whatta ya know more water! And Chinese left-over, but it’s probably got its own ecosystem by know."
Bette looked over at Tina, waiting for her to respond.
"EhIn that case I’ll have some water, please."
Tina had to jumpstart her brain in order to deliver a sentence. She just couldn’t take her eyes off the actress. Even in black sweatpants and a plain white tank top she looked glamorous. Her hair was pulled back, but some of the curls hadn’t allowed the rubber band to tame them. Bette didn’t have any make-up on. ‘She probably just removed all of her movie make-up. She looks even more beautiful without it. She’s got great skin, too and those eyes don’t even get me started.’
Tina’s eyes were glued to those wonderful brown eyes. It was like the rest of the world had disappeared and Tina didn’t care, she just wanted to look into those eyes a little longer.
"Alrighty. You can sit down if you like."
Bette’s voice awoke Tina from her reverie. She walked over to the couch and sat down. Bette was getting them both a bottle of water. She was bending down to get them, which gave Tina another great view. ‘I think I really need that water now.’
"There you go."
Bette handed her the water and joined her on the couch.
"So, did you have trouble finding the place? Or wrestling through the loony crowd to get in?"
Bette chuckled and took a sip of her water. Tina was still amazed at her ability to make light conversation when Tina had to put so much effort into forming a response. It was even worse with Bette sitting so close. There was that heart rate thing again and her throat was just parched.
What Tina didn’t know was that Bette’s heart was beating so loud that she wondered if Tina could hear it. She just wanted to reach out and touch Tina. She wanted that so badly!
Bette was on cloud nine because Tina had showed. And being so close to her made her even happier. She could see Tina was a little nervous, but even with that tense look on it, her face was still perfection to Bette. How she wanted to cover those soft, pink lips with her own!
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Nocturnal! My mind’s eye! My mind’s eye! I like to believe I would be able to do more than barely form sentences if I were in a trailer alone with Bette… but, then again, I probably would die on the spot, so I guess not. Tina, go back, you fool! Sorry… I’m slowly losing it, but not enough to forget that I want to see another chapter from you soon! Wonderful as always! (Wow… Maybe I’M kind of a nutter)
Incredible chappy, noct!!! Wow!!! LOL… Buuttt ermm.. Make up your mind about your neighbours age allready… LOL I loved the romance in this one and I am glad you posted even though you… and I will say it again (lol) SHOULD BE STUDYING!!!!!! LMAO
wow, cant wait to read the next chapter
there has to always be the flee-er tinas a dork shell come around tho! the whole time i was thinking!! close proximity good time for a kiss!!
Woohooooo! Yeah!!! That was sooooo good! Thank you. The build up to that kiss was pure torture, but OH SO WORTH IT! First kisses just make me melt. I love it! Great chapter! Please, update soon. I have got to see what kind of excuse Bette is going to come up with in order to see Tina again. This chapter was a great treat! Ok, now I have to get back to work.
* Roll eyes * @ MistakeMistake my A$$ lol .. plz continueI wonder if I had a sign sayin, Im Bette’s younger half sister, I bet they would let me through
Ok I’m hooked…gonna go back and read all 12 chapters now :)Looking forward to chap 13!
First of all were you on a lunch break or something when you posted, cos aren’t you suppose to be in school. Other than than great update, love this story. Tina what are you nuts, go back, alone in a trailer w/Bette, OMG we should all be so lucky. As for your neighbor, unfortunately I’ve experienced that before, why anyone guys/gals walk around in things they shouldn’t too scare the crap out of the rest of us is beyond me. Though there are times when I threaten to do the same, but have been warned of great bodily harm by those who love me. Hoping you post quickly.
Hey Nocturnal, they need a little more of a push. You know like placing their lips on a pole in the middle of winter so that they are stuck together. Damn Eric, he keeps popping up when he needs to be jumping off of a bridge or maybe a building. Lamentamini is sooo correct about JB’s mouth and tongue. Can’t get enough of seeing that tongue in action. Now, lets see if Tina’s tongue can match Bette’s. LH’s tongue is not too bad either. Now, lets put them together and you have Bette and Tina my favorite couple.
damn man make it longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mmmm fuzzy happy brain full of gorgeous women with amazing tongues….mmmm….*thunk* (Thanks!)
oh the kiss, oh the scared tina running away…it’s not over and it was hilarious…thanks
Again NocT! Do it again! I luved this chapter – maybe Tina’s running off to find Eric to break up with him??? (We can only hope.) Oh! Good luck with that view of your ‘favorite neighbor’…you may never be able to cleanse that picture from your brain! You can delete it but it’s never really gone!
Come on, Nocturnal, a little more action. after all this is BP we’re talking about.
Come On Baby Girl, time for some B&T lovein!!! Post soon and don’t look out your window!
Good chapter. That kiss is hot!
Gene Simmons = one helluva tongue O.O *runs off to read*
Okay so we didn’t get that hot tongue action, but we all know JB’s tongue is…I can’t explain it. lol So your neighbor has a poster of a guy with a boner huh. Sounds like a fan of Mapplethorpe’s work, or a guy who just likes looking at another guy’s wang all day (Shit, did I just say wang?). I’m sorry all of that burned your eyes. *chants* Happy place! Happy place! *hug@u*
lamentamini that was my first thought too…TONGUE..and then looked again and saw the pg rating..damn!!! love this story nocturnal, and i feel your pain, i had a neighbor across the way from me who would lay out at the end of his driveway, directly across from me, wearing only a thong,and do leg exercises, waving them in the air…its traumatic to even think of it!!
Loved the ending can’t wait to read the next chapter
You gotta post another chapter really soon, i love your story (well and your style most of all)! I’m done with the wracko fan fic fan thing so anyway just to say the sole thought of your neighbor in a g-string was scary. Last time i saw a guy wearing a g-string, it was a drunk rugbyman doing a lapdance 5 days ago. The guy was about 6’3, 55 pounds, i have to say it was pretty fun to watch but i’m not hangin out near a clubhouse sober anymore.
JBs tongue..lament tht is a very happy place trust me ihave been runnin away to tht place when ever i see sumthin distractingly gross…Nocturnal ya gotta really post soon and get tina off erics clutches so tht she can get sum portercharm workin on her
Yeeeeeesssss finally, so fucking sweet :o)) I’m loving this story and I’m addicted, so please post soon. You just crack me up with your comments – especially about your hottie of a neighbour LOL. I think Tina did the right thing, but she will be back after saying “Goodbye Eric” right???