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Stained – Chapter 11
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Chapter 11
Tina was not having a good day. Firstly, it was a Monday and Mondays are generally not people’s favorite days. Sorry Monday, but it’s true. It wasn’t that Tina didn’t like her job, because she really did. It has something to do with human nature. Somewhere deep down our savage nature, free spirit or whatever you want to call it is realizing every Monday that it has been caged again for a number of days to come. It’s not that our free will leaves us during the week, but we are in the end creatures of habit. We can change our habits, but not effortlessly. Every Monday seems to tell us that we cannot just pack up our things and leave; that we have responsibilities and things tying us down. It’s not that we do leave everything behind on weekends, but it somehow seems more like a possibility. It seems within our reach. And then another Monday comes along to painfully remind us that we are not the free spirits we had wished to be. That our Apollonian nature has once again taken over the Dionysian. The savage beast is crying and the free spirit dying.
‘Shit, now I have just downright depressed myself. Thanks a lot, Nietzsche. Like your life was so goddamn great.’
Secondly, and all philosophy aside, Eric had called and Tina had been short and grumpy in dealing with him, which left him feeling wronged and her feeling guilty again. ‘If you call talking to your boyfriend on the phone ‘dealing with him’ something is not right. Damn it! Why is it so difficult to treat him better? It really shouldn’t be this hard… What am I saying? Every relationship has its difficulties. It can’t all be fun and games and it’s time you start investing in your relationship again.’ But why did investing in her relationship sound like that nasty task on your to-do-list that you keep postponing? Tina decided to file that feeling away and deal with it some other time because she was already feeling miserable enough as it was.
There was of course a ‘thirdly’. Tina was not prepared to deal with that third one either. The one about never seeing Bette again. The one about her knowing that she had become one of the numerous people adoring Bette, although she felt her crush was a little more personal – and maybe a little more valid too – than those of the adoring fans. And perhaps it was this repressed one that was in the end responsible for the big thundercloud hanging above her head today.
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i love your interruptions…sheesh they are so fuckin funny …..this story is goin so smooth..love it
I’m with violet_rose, were cuttng the cord so you can write. Love this, you crack me up. Ali has to be Alice. Come on we know Tina’s already falling for the Porter charm and heck Bette hasn’t even really started yet, what more. I don’t know if I can take it.
Now i’m addicted to your story AND your interruptions… You’re a genius! post soon
even fan fiction has commercials… love this… please continue
Bettina pectoris ha good times always a joy
just wonderful, can’t wait to see tina’s journey to get her earring
IC doesn’t need to be laid she just needs to be part of the slaughter house that Ali has set up. I have been summoned a couple of times to the principals office this year myself. Damn out of the years in school this year I get called down more than any of those years put together. I am going to blame it on IC’s abuse of her characters and show. Yeah, that’s it, it is all IC’s fault that I keep getting into trouble. If I was in Tina’s class I would be drooling also. Now, I hope that Tina is able to get to the set to see the one who is sending her into a tailspin. But I have this feeling that Tina has also sent Bette into a tailspin.
this is a beautiful story. please post soon.
Awww how sweet was that ending – I love this….more and now please :o))
You’re killing me here…I swear! I can take the wait anymore….but its a killing and sweet agony!
God you are hilarious! I was rolling of my chair with laughter on the Ali thingy… OMG… I love this story! Even the interruptions are cool LOL
I was sitting here trying to figure out who the hell was doing the Ali thing. Then I realized it was a “time out.” LMAO!!!! One of my friends used a fake answer message once. “Church of God…God speaking.” It was her grandmother calling. OOPS! People have mentioned “Notting Hill” being on cable all month long. I was driving home yesterday after a weekend outing and heard a song on the radio from the movie. Of course I thought of this story and I’m shocked I didn’t wreck my car from some of the, erm, thoughts I was having. ;) LOVED the use of “warm and fuzzy.” It’s one of my favorite phrases. =D
yes you posted!!! love it can’t wait to see what happens when Tina visits Bette. You writing keeps me so entertained, post soon please, like right now! cheers
Loved the ending U keep writing your story and I’ll keep writing mine =)
LOL! Love your interuptions, classic! This stoey is very charming, romantic and comdedic! I wouls so watch this on t.v if it were a movie!
that Ali thing on the voice mail was Alice wasn’t it???!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!!
I am going to lead a stealth mission to cut the phone line to your house so that no one can ring you and interrupt your fantastic writing – anyone going to join me? Keep it up, I get more excited with every chapter!
Um… have I ever mentioned that your interruptions COMPLETELY make my day?! Right, story… Well, I love it. That’s why I’ve been reading. And I’ll be looking forward to my next fix. ;)
You are soooooo funny!! Yes I would like a sheep to go please..:)
Good chapter. Your interruptions is so funny and maybe I can use your line when the phone call bothering me. Anyway Tina is going to see Bette and let see what’s next, thanks!