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Stained – Chapter 19
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Tina stepped back and held the door open for Bette.
“Come on in.”
As Bette got inside, she couldn’t suppress a smile. The apartment looked just like it had the first time she’d seen it; cozy. This time Bette felt even more at home, because she recognized some of the people in the photo’s on the wall as Tina’s friends.
Bette turned back to Tina.
“Oh, almost forgot. I brought you flowers.”
Bette handed the bouquet to Tina, whose face lit up.
“Aw, they’re beautiful! Thank you, Bette. Let me put them in water.”
“Sure,” Bette said, turning back to the pictures on the wall.
“Oh, there’s a card!”
The brunette rapidly spun around.
“There is?” she mumbled with a mortified expression on her face.
Tina gave her a weird look.
“Uh…yeah.”
She put the flowers down on the table and retrieved the card that Bette could now see was pretty much hidden within the bouquet.
Uh oh… not good.
As Tina opened the card and read it, the smile faded from her face. It didn’t take her long to read the message the tiny card contained and when she finished, she looked… well, she definitely didn’t look too pleased.
“You know, it’d be real easy to take offence at this…”
Bette looked extremely uncomfortable.
“Can I…ehm…maybe have a look at that?”
Tina, one eyebrow raised, held the card out for her.
Bette wasn’t sure if she wanted to know what it said. She took the card from the blonde and, after taking a deep breath, opened it.
One sentence was scribbled on the inside.
I’ll pay you in the morning.
Bette’s eyes widened. Somehow her friends had managed to pick the one bouquet that not only had a card attached to it, but a card that made it look like Tina was a hooker and Bette expected them to have sex tonight. Definitely not good.
“Oh,” was all she managed to utter. She suddenly remembered the bouquet’s origin. She had lent money to a friend whose bag, containing his wallet and checkbook, had been stolen. It had been his way of saying thanks.
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nice job, Noc… now I’m going to have to go back and read the other earlier chapters… ;-)
I don’t care if it’s a hole in the ground; if it makes you smile like that, I wanna see it.” I’d laugh if it was a Marine Corps-style fighting hole. LOL! Dammit we need to find a way for you to be able to give us a chapter more often. :(
ok so 2 things…..1) what took u so long, and 2) when’s the next posting??????????!!!
What would Tina have said if Bette’s favorite place was her bed? Hmmmm…that would have been interesting. This story is interesting and we want you to continue.
Its been so long, I will have to go back and read a few chappys. I really enjoyed this one, but bring on more sooner, so I don’t forget. I have CRS(can’t remember shit).
BBR3…I get that all the time…sometimes it’s hard to remember all the stories.
This is such a good story I don’t need to go back and refresh my memory…it’s all up there…tks noc…pls post soon, and that wasn’t near long enough!!!!
Good chapter. They are so cute and sweet, funny. Ok post soon please, thanks!
nice… loved the look into their minds… please continue
it’s about time we get a new chapter…hole in the ground LOL, i wonder what place made Bette smile like that…post soon
It does not matter how long it takes you to post because when I do see a post my heart speeds up because I know that I am going to enjoy it. Something about those anatomy classes that at times make you laugh, or blush.
is good to read another chapter from you, i like the date but Bette should be more careful with her presents.
I’m ecstatic to see another post from you, I love this hilarious story….I wish the author was just as funny LMAO!!! I’m only kidding, I always look forward to your author notes, they have me in stitches :o)) There is no risk that I’m forgetting this story, but it would be nice with more posts. Have a great Sunday :o)
Thanx for the chap noc…The b-day party is still my fav chap, but I love what these are possibly lesding up too? Keep up the good work kid!
Okok how about ‘cat’ and ‘dog’ as names for your goldfishes? Actually, mommy had goldfishes once and we called them ‘appelmoes’ and ‘stoofpeer’ LOL Ok as for the story: ‘wow’ the sentence ‘It started with a kiss’ comes to mind… I love this story! I love this selfconcious Tina ;) Very nice! And I was right about the card! There was a silly line inside! Not as bad as ‘I want to have your baby’ but then again one who could defo fit into my story Pretty Women LOL! Thanks so much for this chapter! Now lets see what this fav. spot is… And off course I want to know how T will handle the fans!