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Stick With U: Chapter 9 (Part 2)
– Que pasa por que tanto escándalo? – (what’s the wrong? Why’s everybody screaming?) A plumb golden skin woman walked into the kitchen
– Mercedes tus hijas, están peleando otra vez – abuela said and Mercedes rolled her eyes
– Do you girls have to fight todo el tiempo? – Mercedes asked as she was grabbing things from the fridge
– Not all the time mamita – Isabela answered
– Just every time we see each other – Carmen showed her tongue to her sister
– Carmen, where have you been? – Mercedes asked
– well mami I’ve been uhm…eh estado…pues…around hanging out, con mis amigos – Carmen shrugged and she felt an odd vibration coming from her pocket, she reached her phone and saw her new text message
Tonight 8 @ the planet? Miss ya
XoXO
S
Carmen forgot for a moment where she was or the complete audience she has having and couldn’t keep the smile across her lips or the dreamy sigh when she read the message, she bit her bottom lip as she zoned out again remembering all her moments with Shane she was about to reply the message when her mom cleared her throat
– Awe, seems like someone have a crush – Isabel said mocking her sister
– What? Of course not! – Carmen answered pulling her phone on her pocket again
– claro que si no lo niegues tienes esa sonrisa boba y no dejas de quedarte pensativa, no engañas a tu familia, mejor dinos como se llama? – abuela said (of course you’re, don’t deny it, you’ve that goofy smile and you zone out every time…you can’t fool your family…so tell us what’s her name? –
– carmen eso si no…como que estas enamorada y no nos has dicho nada? – mercedes asked (carmen what? How’s it that you’re in love?? And you haven’t told us??? )
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(34 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
haha! I loved this update! Carmens grandmother cracks me up! PPS!
Domt read spanish but can speak and understand some if a two yrs old is speaking. thanks
good chapter keep it coming
great chap…I wouldn’t mind being kidnapped by Shane :D
more! :)
That was cute. I liked the text messages, especially Carmen’s last one. And I’m super glad I speak (and read) Spanish; it makes the conversations realistic. =)
Nice update! :)
great chap…and the argument sounds just like my gf’s younger sisters…lol…PPS
lovely update… pms.