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Stick With U: Chapter 9 (Part 2)
– What? Oh you guys are unbelievable – Carmen said rolling her eyes and started to walk out of the kitchen – and who said something bout love? – She added before leave the other 3 women
– no se a quien cree que engaña…- (I don’t know who is she trying to Fool) abuela said as a matter of fact
Carmen walked to the backyard and grabbed her phone
Sounds good…my family it’s killing me can’t stand anymore…would you save my day???
XOXOXO
C
She sat down on the stairs watching her niece and nephews playing and her aunts and sisters where putting the table ”am I falling?? Am I that obvious?? Maybe it’s just a crush I mean it can’t be love already we just met but the way she’s smiles and her kisses oh my god, the way she touches me, her voices…”
Do you want me to just show up and kidnap you???
XOXOXOXO
S
Carmen smiled…
That depends on the way you treat you hostages…
XOXOXOXO
After a couple of seconds her phone began to ring
– Hey –
– I think you’d like the way I treat my hostages – the sexy voice of Shane came out her phone and she couldn’t help the smirk on her face
– Oh really?? – She asked throaty – oh now I remember you owe me something…- she said remembering the too hot game the other night
– Oh, and I don’t like to owe anything to anybody…so I guess I’ve to come for you and pay you…don’t I? –
– Yes, you’ve to…I’ll text you the address and I’ll be waiting –
– Kay –
Carmen hung up, closed her eyes and couldn’t help the smile she was about to jump and scream of excitement, when she opened her eyes she found her sister Isabel, her mom, and her abuela standing in front of her with a smirk on their faces
– Oh you guys are just worst than Alice – she rolled her eyes and walked into the house again
TBC
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(34 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
haha! I loved this update! Carmens grandmother cracks me up! PPS!
Domt read spanish but can speak and understand some if a two yrs old is speaking. thanks
good chapter keep it coming
great chap…I wouldn’t mind being kidnapped by Shane :D
more! :)
That was cute. I liked the text messages, especially Carmen’s last one. And I’m super glad I speak (and read) Spanish; it makes the conversations realistic. =)
Nice update! :)
great chap…and the argument sounds just like my gf’s younger sisters…lol…PPS
lovely update… pms.