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Strictly Roommates – Chapter 19
Previously:
“I guess before you, I just saw everything in black and white. I looked at the world in terms of necessity. But you are a breath of fresh air. You are the spirit of every piece of art in this room. You inspire me, you move me, you are beautiful to me. You are what I want. You aren’t just something I need or something I can easily replace. You are one of a kind. And I’ll do whatever it takes to keep you in my life.”
Tina stared intently for a moment at Bette, even after she had finished talking. She saw so much passion in Bette’s eyes it nearly drove her to tears. Placing her hands on either side of Bette’s face, Tina leaned in and their lips met for the first time. Surrounded by hanging mobiles of glass, the women shared their first kiss.
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When Bette and Tina finally made their way home, it was close to midnight. Both women were still buzzing from the excitement of the night. Bette offered Tina a glass of wine, which she accepted. As Bette went to pull two glasses down from the cabinet, she heard Tina’s voice from behind her.
“Bette…”
She turned around to face her, and waited expectantly.
“Tonight was really perfect,” Tina said, causing Bette to smile. She went on. “What you said back there was beautiful. Even after yesterday, it seems that you have more of an effect on me than—“.
Bette held up her hand, silencing Tina.
“Can I stop you right there for just a second?” Bette asked, walking slowly over to Tina. Her heels clicked like a metronome on the tiled kitchen floor. When she reached the blonde, she drew her hands up and rested them on Tina’s hips. Without giving her a chance to react, Bette pulled her gingerly into a kiss.
Tina responded by wrapping her arms around Bette’s neck. Their lips met slowly, in the way that first-date kisses often do, when the goal is to convince the other person that this kiss is right, that this kiss is real. That this kiss and these lips should be the only ones you ever know, from here on out. They barely used their tongues. They were content to kiss simply with open lips. It was steady and sensual and both women kept their eyes closed, like teenagers discovering sensation for the first time. It communicated everything that needed to be said.
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Now, without a mate,I am glad that I didn’t see this last night, there was no way I would have been able to sleep. Great update.
FUCK… i’m exhausted… but loved it.. pps
You really should give a warning on a chapter like that to not read it while at work. WOW!
geez! i didnt see that coming! that was.. wow! i..just..wow..okay..now i have to bury my head in the fridge to cool down..
wow, so worth the wait…i guess they are not strictly roommates anymore LOL
If I smoked, I’d need a cigarette! Sweet Baby Jesus that was so sexy!
So every morning i get up and on my phone before i head off to work i check the site to see what’s beeen posted. I was soooooo excited to see this was up, so at like 2:30 in the morning i got a goofy grin on my face at work. I usually drive the forklift while reading this (I know, I know a terrible habit, But all I can is that i’m addicted. A shameless junkie if you will.) so as usual i have an order on my forklift and i’m driving, before i knew it i was not even paying attention and almost lost $58,000 order worth of special order merchandise. BUT GOOD GOD, THAT WAS AMAZING. I have no other words except, Damn!!!!Please, for goodness sake post again soooooooon. Thanx.PEACE.
O.O Where on earth did *that* come from? good gosh. That was damn well worth the wait.
dear god why can’t i find a roommate like that!! what a smokin chapter, can’t wait to see what happens next!!
BRAVO! Guess they aren’t strictly roomates anymore. That was so hot and sexy….can i be jealous of fictional fan fic characters? So glad you came backa dn hit all your fans with some updates to this fun story. Sow what’s going to happen next? PPS!
Wow, I can’t seem to keep my jaw from hitting the floor. Shower time.
Holy f ing smokes! Was that hot or what? I take a little vacation and look what happens…I gotta get home to that cold shower. How about round two?
Tag I’m first.
Holy Moley, how hot was that? Thanks for the great updates, you made my day!
okay time for a cold shower. :)
WOW! That was so hot! I’m glad you found your motivation, thanks for the post.
Damn! That was hot!!! Can’t wait to see what happens next. PPS
pff that was hot! thanks! love it
OMG OMG OMG cold shower quick. I shouldn’t have read this at work GOSH. this was hot. PPVS
That was incredibly hot…..now I need a cold shower before I go to work this morning.
WOW worth the wait…
Ok, I know there is somewhere I am suppose to be this morning, but I can’t remember….somewhere called work maybe?? Maybe it will come to me.
Oh my god! That was so freakin hot – I need a few cold showers now. :) Damn hot! Thank you!
Atlas I think that post should have come with a disclaimer.Warning potential readers this story may cause heart palpitations, shortness of breath,flushed skin and incredible warmth with the need to take a cold shower before and after.You def brought back some good times.I really missed this story.PPS.
Holy shit, well that was a very nice way to start the day! Thank you for all these wonderful chappies, keep ’em coming!
Wow!! That has to been the most erotic, sexiest NC-17 that I’ve ever read on this site.
I think my monitor just melted! That was so damn hot!!! Motivation restored:)
these lady I am at work here…i need to take a walk outside the building…LOL
DAMN!! Tina was like a porn star. She totally topped Bette. I like it!
Man as much as I hate to admit it taking a break agrees with you…..Dam that was hot……friggin HOT
WOW! Atlas, for you on the Olympos your place! Please post ΔÏήγοÏη! :o)
That was incredibly sexy! Great chapter!
Holy freaky, that was freaking hot and awesome, love it. Please post more, thanks!
“For a moment they stood there, posed as dancers without the movement.” – you have a way with words, your turns of phrase are so striking without being trite. Erotic and very well written chappy, thank you atlas :-)
AWESOME chapter and story…. PPSHope all is well.Thank you
no update yet ?