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Strictly Roommates – Chapter 19
Tina broke contact and took a step back, keeping her hands connected to the back of Bette’s neck. Bette slowly opened her eyes. For a moment they stood there, posed as dancers without the movement.
“I want to make love to you,” Tina whispered, barely audible.
Bette froze, paralyzed by these words.
“Are you sure?” she asked. “I don’t want to rush things with you Tina.”
“I’ve been waiting since the first time I saw you, Bette. I’d hardly consider that a rush. Do I not turn you on?”
“Of course you do, Tina! More than anyone else ever has.”
“Then let me love you,” Tina pleaded.
Bette wanted this more than anything, but wanted to be sure that Tina had restored her trust in her since yesterday’s events. Finally, Bette nodded slowly, saying yes. She took Tina by the hand and led her to her bedroom. Tina’s heartbeat was pounding in her ears with both nervousness and excitement. Bette had to keep reminding herself to breathe.
When they reached the bedroom, Bette lit several white candles for light. She then sat down on the bench at the end of the bed and started to unhook her heels. Tina watched as her calves flexed and released in the process. It was unsettling, in the best possible way. Tina then bent down and unstrapped her own heels. They stared at each other for a few seconds, wondering how this would transpire. For both of them, it was scary. This was the moment that signified for them that there was no going back. Once they opened this door again, they’d have to take the long way out.
“Come here,” Bette whispered.
Tina closed the gap between them and found Bette’s lips with her own. Bette covered Tina’s bottom lip with both of hers. Tina’s tongue met the soft canvas of Bette’s lips. Soon, the women allowed their tongues to come together, lapping them slowly against one another. Tina’s hands tangled themselves in Bette’s hair. In slow, languid strokes, they piqued their arousal by kissing alone.
As they kissed, Bette slowly ran her fingers down Tina’s sides, feeling the sleekness of her dress beneath her fingertips. All of her senses were heightened. Bette’s strong hands made their way down Tina’s hips and slid slightly to the back, grazing her ass. She went lower still, and found the bottom of the dress with her fingers. Slowly, gently, Bette ran her hands up the outsides of Tina’s thighs, under her red dress. The material rose up as Bette’s hands climbed higher. Bette could feel Tina’s panties pass under her hands, and then she firmly spanned Tina’s lower back. The skin was taut and she could feel the muscles contracting beneath the skin.
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Now, without a mate,I am glad that I didn’t see this last night, there was no way I would have been able to sleep. Great update.
FUCK… i’m exhausted… but loved it.. pps
You really should give a warning on a chapter like that to not read it while at work. WOW!
geez! i didnt see that coming! that was.. wow! i..just..wow..okay..now i have to bury my head in the fridge to cool down..
wow, so worth the wait…i guess they are not strictly roommates anymore LOL
If I smoked, I’d need a cigarette! Sweet Baby Jesus that was so sexy!
So every morning i get up and on my phone before i head off to work i check the site to see what’s beeen posted. I was soooooo excited to see this was up, so at like 2:30 in the morning i got a goofy grin on my face at work. I usually drive the forklift while reading this (I know, I know a terrible habit, But all I can is that i’m addicted. A shameless junkie if you will.) so as usual i have an order on my forklift and i’m driving, before i knew it i was not even paying attention and almost lost $58,000 order worth of special order merchandise. BUT GOOD GOD, THAT WAS AMAZING. I have no other words except, Damn!!!!Please, for goodness sake post again soooooooon. Thanx.PEACE.
O.O Where on earth did *that* come from? good gosh. That was damn well worth the wait.
dear god why can’t i find a roommate like that!! what a smokin chapter, can’t wait to see what happens next!!
BRAVO! Guess they aren’t strictly roomates anymore. That was so hot and sexy….can i be jealous of fictional fan fic characters? So glad you came backa dn hit all your fans with some updates to this fun story. Sow what’s going to happen next? PPS!
Wow, I can’t seem to keep my jaw from hitting the floor. Shower time.
Holy f ing smokes! Was that hot or what? I take a little vacation and look what happens…I gotta get home to that cold shower. How about round two?
Tag I’m first.
Holy Moley, how hot was that? Thanks for the great updates, you made my day!
okay time for a cold shower. :)
WOW! That was so hot! I’m glad you found your motivation, thanks for the post.
Damn! That was hot!!! Can’t wait to see what happens next. PPS
pff that was hot! thanks! love it
OMG OMG OMG cold shower quick. I shouldn’t have read this at work GOSH. this was hot. PPVS
That was incredibly hot…..now I need a cold shower before I go to work this morning.
WOW worth the wait…
Ok, I know there is somewhere I am suppose to be this morning, but I can’t remember….somewhere called work maybe?? Maybe it will come to me.
Oh my god! That was so freakin hot – I need a few cold showers now. :) Damn hot! Thank you!
Atlas I think that post should have come with a disclaimer.Warning potential readers this story may cause heart palpitations, shortness of breath,flushed skin and incredible warmth with the need to take a cold shower before and after.You def brought back some good times.I really missed this story.PPS.
Holy shit, well that was a very nice way to start the day! Thank you for all these wonderful chappies, keep ’em coming!
Wow!! That has to been the most erotic, sexiest NC-17 that I’ve ever read on this site.
I think my monitor just melted! That was so damn hot!!! Motivation restored:)
these lady I am at work here…i need to take a walk outside the building…LOL
DAMN!! Tina was like a porn star. She totally topped Bette. I like it!
Man as much as I hate to admit it taking a break agrees with you…..Dam that was hot……friggin HOT
WOW! Atlas, for you on the Olympos your place! Please post ΔÏήγοÏη! :o)
That was incredibly sexy! Great chapter!
Holy freaky, that was freaking hot and awesome, love it. Please post more, thanks!
“For a moment they stood there, posed as dancers without the movement.” – you have a way with words, your turns of phrase are so striking without being trite. Erotic and very well written chappy, thank you atlas :-)
AWESOME chapter and story…. PPSHope all is well.Thank you
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