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Sugar and Spice ~ Chapter 9
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Bill smiled above his daughter’s head. He had been right. It was a matter of the heart and his little girl was in love. Since he remembered how certain he had been at her age that Dotty would be his forever love, he took the child’s feelings very seriously. “So, you have a valentine?”
He felt Tina violently shake her head. She whimpered, “I didn’t get to ask.”
“Oh, pumpkin,” he rocked his heartbroken child. He then loosened his grip so that they could look at one another. “Teenie Beanie, tomorrow is Valentine’s Day. Let’s find where your valentine lives and deliver the card tomorrow.”
Tina hiccupped a little as she tried to reply “Really?”
“Uh huh.” Bill hugged Tina again. “Feel better?”
She nodded against his chest. “When can we go?”
He laughed. “Well, let’s see. I’m going to the florist, and don’t mention it to your mother, in the morning, so let’s go on the way back from the florist.”
Bill felt his daughter’s head nod again against his chest.
“Daddy, are you buying flowers for Mommy?”
“Uh huh. Roses for my valentine on Valentine’s Day,” he answered and then began to tickle the child.
Tina giggled. “Stop, Daddy!”
“I love to hear you laugh, pumpkin.”
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Porter residence
The two sisters had removed the dishes from the dining room and had loaded the dishwasher in silence. It was a Friday night, and Kit was rushing. She was meeting Roger at a club where she might be given a chance to sing.
Bette was quiet because she was heartsick. More than heartsick, though, she was angry with herself for not planning better. She only had to deliver a card and she couldn’t manage to get that done and Monday would be too late.
“Fuck Ms, Failla,” she muttered.
“What did you just say!” an amazed Kit asked.
Bette stopped placing a serving platter into one of the machine’s racks. She stood and faced Kit. “I said ‘Fuck Ms. Failla.’”
“Daddy better’d not hear you.”
“I don’t care.”
“You’d care plenty if he heard you.” Kit tilted her head as she looked at the younger girl. “Well, that Ms. Failla must have done something bad if it turned you into a potty mouth,:
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Your private Valentines Day story is priceless an this story is really,really cute.PPS
Ok, this is good that they will get to meet up on V day, but please don’t let them miss each other, ie: Bette goes to Tina’s house while Tina is at Bette’s house. You wouldn’t do that, would you? Can’t wait for more.
Can’t help but thinking do they still being supportive, when Tina’s dad and Kit found out the little one’s valentine is a girl! lol.. love your story, PPS!
Awwww, this story is so darn sweet and I always love your AN. Our girls are just precious and I hope it all works out for them. They are so lucky to have a father and big sis that understands what they are feeling. Just hope the father doesn’t go sour on Tina when he finds out who she wants as her sweet Valentine. They are just too grown to know their own minds at this early stage of life. Too bad IC didn’t have something like this in mind as a backstory for them, it would have been perfect and explained so much more. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us. You have a wonderfully imaginative mind.
please don’t let them miss each other again… this is so cute…
This is so cute. I wonder what Teenie Beanie’s father will say when he realizes that his daughter’s Valentine is another little girl. What will Kit say when she too realizes that Bette has the hots for Tina?
Spumonimoni I’m sending you my next dentist bill because all this Rivetted sweetness has got to be giving me some serious cavities! I loved this installment. Gimme more, gimme more…you’ve given me a sugar rush that’s for sure.
just so cute!!! i loved bette’s attitude and loved that the adults wanted to help the love-stricken kids LOL oh, and i loved your comments tale, especially the part that were not true ;)
Ugh, it’s just sickening sweeeeet…However, based on your “flying colors” record, now I am seriously worried whether these two can get their Valentine’s cards :)Spumoni, please redeem yourself and be a good Cupid!
I hope Tina’s dad is understanding…
Tina’s Daddy nickname was just the cutest thing, but then when we went to Bette’s home it was just too funny, LMAOL. I could just picture an eight year old Bette with attitude and that potty mouth.
Okay, Teenie Beanie is just too cute. It’s like when my mom calls the cats and me “love muffin.” XD
Wowwww how cuteand sweet. I am now an addicted lol. Please feed my addiction. PPVS
ooooh, this is getting sweeter than a hot radiator in Feb with a V-box on top… ;-)
awh Tina dad is awesome and thank goodness for Kit
you are hilarious! :D
I commented, am I your Valentine now?? =D This is soo cute, and so sweet. and your tale wasn’t lame, it was welcome relief from my intense studying, so thanks so much and looking forward to the next one!! =]
Aw, to be a kid again & feel like your world is crashing down around you, I can feel Teenie Beanie’s pain :( I think my eyes were about as wide as Kit’s probably were when I read Bette dropping her first F-bomb – could not stop chuckling over the lil potty mouth & her big sis out-attituding her. Like the others I was also wondering what their families reactions will be to learning that the hopeful Valentine’s are of the same gender. I have no doubt though that all will be well in your Tibette fluffydom :) Thx & PPVS!
Hey Spumoni, That was ab-so-lute-ly adorable. I just loved the disappointment in Tina and Bette’s moods after their Valentine’s cards were thwarted.Good that they have a caring father and sister ready to help them out.Just precious.Thank you for showing there is always a way to make your dream could true when it is meant to be.Your Loyal Fan.
This is an adorable story. I’m so loving it. Thank you.
I really shouldn’t be doing this, but I couldn’t not comment on this much cuteness. Despite Glenn and David’s current lifestyles (I refused to read that second bracket. It made the story much less interesting), that was so beyond cute, both the AN and the actual story. I love Kit as a teenager whenever you write her. She’s cool but also loving and it makes S1 Bette even suckier because of all the love that Kit gave her at an age when the most logical thing is for the rebellious teenager to hate her perfect little sister. I bet Mrs. Cadoniz wouldn’t be happy to hear you’re naming some other random girl your Valentine. Multiple others, maybe, but just one? Nah.As always, I remain awed at your awesomeness (see what I did there? See, see?). Thanks, Spumogan!
With a daddy like Bill, why would you even need a teddy bear? I quite enjoyed Bette’s exploratory foray into cursing, she’s advanced in every way. I’m enjoying the story, as I hope you know, but I think I enjoyed your author’s note even more. You can leave my chocolates on the radiator, they’re pumping AC now, thanks.