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Summer Vacation. Chapter 11
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“At eighteen I gained access to that trust fund from my father” she continued, trying desperately to be clear, “with a bunch of legal stuff were personal items belonging to my mother … photographs …” she added, “newspaper clippings … marriage certificates …”
Bette shook her head in wonder, she still didn’t see what any of that had to do with her … and not Tina, why specifically was she telling this to her and not Tina … she still ignored the fear growing within her in favour of thinking Lottie might just need someone to confide in …
Lottie fingered the photograph lightly, it was square and the edges were tattered and bent, it’s size fit perfectly inside her pocket. She looked at it, the beautiful young woman holding her toddler child upon her knee, their eyes the same, gazing into the distance, captured forever in time. She ran her thumb across it, feeling the cracks in the surface, saddened at the way they distorted the beautiful image, reluctantly she handed the picture across to Bette …
Tina sat up straight, it had suddenly got serious …
Bette took it from her, not yet realising. Slowly she began to look at what she held in her hand, actually see it, finding herself gradually staring at a photograph of her mother, her young mother and … well … her, as just a baby, maybe six months or just a little more. She remembered the picture, another one similar to it and larger had adorned the mantelpiece in their drawing room for years …
She looked to Lottie, unable to comprehend what it meant, “This is my mother …” she stated, showing her back the photograph, “and me … as a baby”
Tina sat transfixed, watching as Lottie bit her bottom lip tightly, forcing herself not to cry, she leant back for a second, steadying herself against the wall behind her. Tina waited anxiously for her to speak, her eyes darting from Lottie to Bette and then back to Lottie again, their faces complex. She saw Lottie move to stand unsupported, her arms fiddling in front of her as she left Bette’s gaze, dropping her eyes stare at the floor …
“She’s my mother too …” whispered Lottie, just loud enough for them both to hear,
Then … exhausted … she fell limp to the floor.
to be continued ….
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thank goodness! i was so worried she was going to be bette’s daughter… thank you that she’s not!
Crikey. I expected it, and didn’t… I don’t think Bette could ever hate Lottie, be confused, maybe, but hate, never. BTW, the rest of the chapter was way hot… I’m glad you’ve posted, and I can’t wait for the next chapter.
I was so right. I can’t believe Tina passed out. This story is so good and addictive. I love it. PPS
Finally answers!!! For a moment I thought she was Bette’s amnesia baby. You now like in the soaps when someone had a baby but forgot until it shows up on their door step. Glad to see it’s her sister.
sofasitter….This chapter was awesome. Only 3 pages but it read like so much more….lots of detail and I like the way you described what Lottie and Bette were doing at the same time but different locations. Very intriguing.PPS.
well im glad the truth has came out finally it took you long enough.lol tina was starting to piece things together and the sex scene WOW.. p.p.s.
Sofa, you saved me from dying! Sex =VERY HOT; Lottie= there is still more to come and I am anxious! Post soon!
omg, you are the first author on record I think that did not leave that cliff hanger ending…well kind of, but you can have been so much more cruel to cut it back a few paragraphs…omg thanks, that was a fantastic chapter…all of it!!!
I knew it!! I knew it!! *doing happy dance* Great! And now, explanations…please??
AT F… LAST !!!! But torture right to the end!!!!! Hell now what u gonna do with 3 sistas????? Great story, post soon.
oh yeah…the sex was okay too (in my best droll voice)…actually gyrl u’ve got that down pat so there best be more.
i doubt they had the same dads… besides didn’t she describe lottie as a blond… anyway… i was right… she was bettes sister… love this… and so glad its out in the open… now i wpnder how old lottie was when her mom died… i think bette was under the impression her mom died thats why she left her… (BTW… i read this at work last night and i had to come back to it and post my comment…) please post soon
after all this time with a lot of think on her shoulders lottie told Bette the true, it will be better how Bette will react and Tina! great post
I’m with dalloway i thought that she was gonna be Bette’s daughter that Melvin made her give up all those years ago. Her sister huh? Do they have the same dad or diff? Thanks, PPS.
AMAZING!!!!…. Finally, we get to know who she is… I’m really looking forward to the unfolding events from there. And I’m also curious to see what Tina’s role is gonna be in that situation, being a psychologist and all. I mean, appart from being there for her Bette, who will definitely more than ever need her. But, I think you gave her a very interesting personality in this story and it will be interesting to see her interaction with both Bette and Lottie. Lottie seems so vulnerable in that last scene, it’s heartwrenching. Oh, and thanks again about this magic touch you bring to B&T’s relationship. That scene in the kitchen where Tina pretends to be crossed and Bette reaffirms her love is priceless for a hard tibetter like me! So much love and tenderness there. Thanks!
FINALLY!!! This is so addictive!
Everyone pretty much said everything I was thinking. lol PPS!
Hey I’ve just caught up on this great story, I really like your writing and the plot – you’re doing great. I’m your latest fan :o))
finally…it took you 11 chapters to tell us what we already knew LOL…just kidding, i’m glad she’s bette’s sister though, now they can all be one happy family :)
*wink*; The age difference between Bette and Lottie is 20. Now the question is; who is Lottie’s dad? Same as Bette, which makes her Kit’s sister as well? But she didn’t seem interested in Kit; so does that mean, different dad? Another Black man since we know Bette’s mom is white and she supposed to look exactly like Bette. Interesting. Thank you for posting your story.
so the next question is ……who is Lottie’s father….is it Melvin? are they 100% full blooded sisters or 50%….IS THE NEXT POST UP YET!!!!!! I DOUBT IT CONSIDERING THE CLIFFY AND ALL!!!
Oh my god you threw us a bone…as I was rounding the 3rd page I was like she’s gonna leave us hanging again…but you let the cat out of the bag…kudos to you…now we need to see how Bette is gonna react to it…and Bette & Tina were so hot in this chapter. More please. It was Lottie that fainted right? Not Tina.
Finally Lottie had the courage to tell Bette that they are sisters. This had to be so hard on Lottie knowing that for some reason she never got to know her sister. And then for Bette to really never know her mother. It is a tragic situation and hopefully time will heal some of the wounds.
Oh, thank god. I thought for sure you weren’t going to tell us again! I’m sure it’ll all be ok, and three Porter girls?! Lord help us all. ;) As for B&T… smoking.
There is so much going on in this chapter. Just wonder what is the age difference between Bette and Lottie? Bette’s mom gave birth to Lottie around in her mid-40s? Can’t wait to your next chappy. PPS. thanks.
Finally know who Lottie really is and this is so good@