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Summer Vacation. Chapter 12
Ten minutes later she and Lisa were ordering their lunch, relieved to be inside the cool air-conditioned confines of The Planet.
“You know what …” said Tina as she spied Alice walking in, “I think I’m gonna get this to take out …” she said to Kit, casting a sidelong glace at Alice who slowed upon seeing Lisa waiting at the table, “I wanna pop in on Lottie …” Tina added, sensing Kit look up,
“She okay?” Kit asked,
“Uh huh …” replied Tina, “she’s not feeling well … she fainted” Tina added, making it only a half-lie,
“Aw … poor thing …” sympathised Kit, “and all on her own too …” she added, giving her sister-in-law a smile which indicated her approval of Tina’s proposed get-well-soon visit, “hang fire …” said Kit, “Lara’s in, I’ll get her to fix up some chicken soup”
Tina smiled, settling back to lean against the counter with her coffee to wait,
“You’re not staying …?” mumbled Alice, sliding up alongside her,
Tina shook her head, “no sorry …”
“TK … pleaaaasseee …” begged Alice, “this is *so* uncomfortable … this thing between us …” she continued, nodding in Lisa’s direction,
Tina smiled sympathetically, rubbing Alice’s arm gently to signal her understanding. She still wasn’t staying though, it just wasn’t worth it.
Kit was soon tapping her on the shoulder, passing over a brown bag containing the chicken soup along with a couple of rolls and container of chopped fruit, Tina smiled at Kit’s motherly concern,
“Where are you going?” asked Alice, wondering why all the food …
“To see Lottie …” said Tina, “she’s not feeling well …”
“Oh …” said Alice, her eyes suddenly looking hopeful of a reprieve, “is she okay … maybe I should come with you …? Y’know … to cheer her up …?”
“Er … no …” said Tina, caught on the spot, “er … I don’t know how well she’s feeling …”
“You gotta give the girl a chance to get her strength up before a visit from you …” Kit joked with Alice, seeing Alice display mock hurt at the suggestion …
“Fine …” said Alice, “I guess I’ll just go back and sit in uncomfortable silence with my girlfriend then” she delivered, in the painfully funny self-derogatory way only Alice could.
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(39 votes, average: 3.82 out of 5)
WHAT A PLACE TO STOP THE STORY WOMEN! ITS GETTING GOOD AND YOU WILL CONTINUE…LOL SOON PLEASE
They definitely need to sit down and talk about their mother and what exactly are those documents are all about.
it’s nice to see that tina was there for bette after the news, and the sisters totally have to talk
Argggggg…I need more…more I say. I agree with Pattifloatn…they need to talk…you can definately tell they are sisters…both stubborn. More please.
“Sorry I don’t have time to reply to individial comments… ” Don’t worry about it, and as far as I’m concerned you never need to. Remember, never apologize, never explain. ;-)
This is such a great story. Thanks for the wonderful writing
WOW!!!! Both chapters are Great!!!! Bette and Lottie need to sit down and talk to each other very soon. This stroy is Great. Thank you PPS
definitly Lottie and Bette should have a big talk without fainting or running away. Good post!
I’m so hooked on this story. I’m always pleased to see another chapter from you.
Great! Great!… I’m so addicted to this story! I love that Tina took care of Bette after the bomb was dropped. I really really like your Tina. I mean, appart from her psychological expertise, she’s definitely very present and intelligent about the whole situation. And I love that after her first priority that is Bette, she still makes sure that Lottie is okay, for both’s (Bette and Lottie) sakes. After all, she IS Bette’s sister. I guess I love that she’s being Bette’s rock in this confusing time. Their relationship is so well balanced, something that we’d all love to see in the show at some point hopefully… Thanks sofasitter, PPS!
yay bring on the talk
the talk between bette & lottie will be very interesing :)
Oooo great post, love this story. I know Lottie looked up Bette, but Bette is the adult here, so she can just as well go talk with Lottie….coz Lottie has now taken the first BIG step. I’m really looking forward to more and how you’re going to do this. I hope they become good sisters one day :o))
This is awsome and let see sisters talk!