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Summer Vacation. Chapter 12
“What …?” Bette mumbled,
“Her bag …” said Tina, motioning in the direction of the bag Lottie had set down, “… maybe there’s medication in there or something …”
Slowly Bette crouched to the floor, opening up Lottie’s bag. It seemed like ages since she’d first fallen to the floor, minutes … hours … it couldn’t have been more than a few seconds, her face peaceful, but pale, her eyes closed and relaxed …
“I don’t think she’s having a seizure T …” said Bette, finally realising the lack of movement, “I think she just fainted,”
Following Tina’s instruction she rifled through the contents of Lottie’s bag, pulling out a thin long-sleeved shirt and a document folder which she rapidly tossed to one side, some of its contents then spreading out across the hardwood floor. She peered inside, a lipstick, her purse and phone and pocket pack of tissues … some gum, she gave the bag a shake, no rattle to suggest there were any pills,
“Nothing …” she mumbled to Tina,
Tina continued trying to rouse her, “Lottie … Lottie … can you hear me …?”
Tina glanced at Bette, together they returned their gaze to Lottie, how long was it exactly that a person was out for after a faint?
Bette used the silence to take in her surroundings, they seemed stuck rather strangely in the middle of the house, not quite in the kitchen, not fully in the lounge either. She must have hit her head when she fell, thought Bette, she’d managed to fall right where there were no rugs ….
Her eyes glanced over the contents of Lottie’s bag strewn out beside her head, the folder lay half open displaying papers and some photographs and what looked like a collection of letters …
“Lottie …” sighed Tina, relieved as she noticed Lottie’s head begin to stir, Bette’s eyes were drawn away from the letters, watching Lottie as she floated back in to consciousness.
“Hey …” said Tina softly, her hand moving towards Lottie’s shoulder for reassurance, “hey … you fainted …”
Lottie slowly opened her eyes, squinting as if staring into an intense bright light, groaning she raised her body up onto her elbows, looking at Bette and Tina.
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(39 votes, average: 3.82 out of 5)
WHAT A PLACE TO STOP THE STORY WOMEN! ITS GETTING GOOD AND YOU WILL CONTINUE…LOL SOON PLEASE
They definitely need to sit down and talk about their mother and what exactly are those documents are all about.
it’s nice to see that tina was there for bette after the news, and the sisters totally have to talk
Argggggg…I need more…more I say. I agree with Pattifloatn…they need to talk…you can definately tell they are sisters…both stubborn. More please.
“Sorry I don’t have time to reply to individial comments… ” Don’t worry about it, and as far as I’m concerned you never need to. Remember, never apologize, never explain. ;-)
This is such a great story. Thanks for the wonderful writing
WOW!!!! Both chapters are Great!!!! Bette and Lottie need to sit down and talk to each other very soon. This stroy is Great. Thank you PPS
definitly Lottie and Bette should have a big talk without fainting or running away. Good post!
I’m so hooked on this story. I’m always pleased to see another chapter from you.
Great! Great!… I’m so addicted to this story! I love that Tina took care of Bette after the bomb was dropped. I really really like your Tina. I mean, appart from her psychological expertise, she’s definitely very present and intelligent about the whole situation. And I love that after her first priority that is Bette, she still makes sure that Lottie is okay, for both’s (Bette and Lottie) sakes. After all, she IS Bette’s sister. I guess I love that she’s being Bette’s rock in this confusing time. Their relationship is so well balanced, something that we’d all love to see in the show at some point hopefully… Thanks sofasitter, PPS!
yay bring on the talk
the talk between bette & lottie will be very interesing :)
Oooo great post, love this story. I know Lottie looked up Bette, but Bette is the adult here, so she can just as well go talk with Lottie….coz Lottie has now taken the first BIG step. I’m really looking forward to more and how you’re going to do this. I hope they become good sisters one day :o))
This is awsome and let see sisters talk!