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Summer Vacation. Chapter 13
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Lottie watched Bette doing the math, giving her the space and time to do so. She’d done the exact same thing herself, wondering initially if their mother had left Bette’s father for her own, but there were many years in between, years spanning greater than a decade where as far as Lottie knew their mother had lived a reclusive artists life alone in Virginia, producing works of art which she would never come to sell …
Bette stayed quiet, forcing herself to think about the one person she had put from her life for so long,
“What happened to her …?” asked Bette quietly, knowing from Tina that Lottie’s mother had passed away, “tell me what happened?”
“Tina …” prompted Alice, concerned for her friends silence, “Tina … what the fuck’s happening …?”
Tina sighed, she’d fucked up, obviously Alice didn’t know … but had somehow innocently advised Lottie to talk to Bette or Tina about her problems. Tina laughed to herself, ironic that Lottie’s problems were centred around Bette, ironic that it had been Bette’s best friend who’d picked up on this …
“Lottie is Bette’s sister …” Tina told Alice quietly, resignation at having given up their secret evident in her voice,
Alice was stunned, her silence allowing space for Tina to continue … “she told us a couple of days ago … Bette’s gone round to talk with her …” Tina continued, “but you can’t tell ANYONE Al, I meant it, *no one*, cos even Kit doesn’t know yet …”
“Fuck …!” said Alice slowly,
“I know …” mumbled Tina
“Fuck …” Alice sighed, “Is Bette okay …? wait a minute …” Alice paused, “is she Melvin’s … I mean … she can’t be … she’s white …?” Alice added, confused,
“No … not Melvin …” said Tina, desperate to avoid too many details, which with Alice was always impossible, “Bette’s mother …” Tina explained, after a second,
“Fuck …!” stated Alice, knowing Bette well enough and long enough to know that the subject of her mother was a no-go area …
Lottie sat huddled into her corner of the sofa, her knees pulled up close to her chest as Bette’s eyes surveyed her, watching the girl as she processed Bette’s latest question,
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What does he need to talk to Bette. I’m guessing that is has to do with Lottie and Bette and her inheiring some thing from her Mother. If its picture her Mother Painted or just pictures of Bette when she was a baby with her Mother Just post soon. Waiting is hard thanks
This is so good. Very detailed and interesting. I like the way you go back and forth developing all the sub stories. PPS.
Damn this is a good story. I wonder if Melvin knew? That would be some shit! Post soon!
Wow, this is getting very interesting. So Bette’s and Lottie’s mom was an artist. I wonder what is in store for both Bette and Lottie in the things left them by their mother.
Heat, a bit of humor, intrigue… this chapter had a bit of everything. Delightful story, and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks!
Man that was alot…but I want more…they have alot to talk about.
OMG you can’t stop there. This story is so Good. PPS
Hey there I am so into this more soon huh? haven’t been driven in the past week..had a virus knock me down…remember, more soon
Please further write fast. I can hardly wait as the conversation goes on between Bette and Lotti. Around whether Bette flies to the lawyer to Virginia. And what has to say to it. PPS
Ok, this was nice and long, but I still need answers. Write faster, please (but no pressure).
This is such a touching story. Can’t wait for the following up. Thanks.
A wonderful story, you know just when to cut it off w/out giving us too much angst…I’m impatiently waiting for the next chapter….
im sooo glad you posted tonite! sweet jesus she told bette… getting really good MORE-MORE!anytime for a nc-17..lol p.p.s.
caught up on the story….and love it
God, this story is so intense, it’s kind of draining… I mean that in the best way possible… Incredible. Thank you.
Oooo this story keeps getting better and better, really great post…and you’re right, I’m not complaining about the NC-17’s LOL!! Tina should know Alice by now, so I’m a bit surprised she couldn’t fool her – it should have been Bette and Lottie telling Alice about this, but apart from that I really loves this story. So post more and very soon please :o))
Oh forgot to say….what is Jo up to, who was that girl she was dancing with and why didn’t she call sweet Lottie back??? I hope they can become a couple soon, they’re sweet and good together.
This is so good and cant wait to see more!