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Summer Vacation. Chapter 13
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“Hey …” replied Bette, smiling, “I brought chinese, I hope that’s okay?”
“Yeah …” said Lottie, thinking how long it felt since lunch, “I’m starving … sit down I’ll get the plates”
They sat together on the small sofa, exactly where Lottie and Tina had sat the day before, setting out the food on the coffee table in front of them. Lottie laughed at how much food Bette had bought, obviously unsure of what she would like. They ate quietly, with random inserts of conversation about their day, diverging occasionally to cover Angelica or the topic of Lisa and Alice’s break-up,
“I brought back the folder …” said Bette, after a while, as they had both finished eating and she got up to retrieve it from her bag as Lottie rose simultaneously to pour them both a coffee,
“Thanks” mumbled Lottie, “although a lot of the stuff in there is either yours … or for you …” she added,
Bette looked at her confused as Lottie passed her a coffee, returning to sit back down,
“I just mean that a lot of those photos are really yours” Lottie explained, setting her coffee cup down on the table before it burnt her hand, “they’re *your* photos, *you’re* the one in them …” she stressed, “not me …”
“Thank you …” said Bette, not knowing of a better response,
“This is hard …” whispered Lottie, saying aloud what was on both of their minds,
Bette nodded,
“Why don’t you just ask me some stuff …” suggested Lottie, suddenly feeling as though she could answer direct questions easier than she could formulate her own confounded speech … “anything you want” she added, “and if I can answer it, I will …”
Bette smiled at her, amused because it sounded so much like the exact sort of thing she herself would say, ever practical she would have searched too for a way to drive the conversation forwards,
“Okay …” said Bette, leaning back against the sofa with her coffee held tightly in her hands, “do you know how she met your father?”
“What did you say again Al?” checked Tina, her pulse racing,
“I told Lottie that she should talk to you about it …” answered Alice, very matter of fact, quite unsure as to what she appeared to have done wrong,
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What does he need to talk to Bette. I’m guessing that is has to do with Lottie and Bette and her inheiring some thing from her Mother. If its picture her Mother Painted or just pictures of Bette when she was a baby with her Mother Just post soon. Waiting is hard thanks
This is so good. Very detailed and interesting. I like the way you go back and forth developing all the sub stories. PPS.
Damn this is a good story. I wonder if Melvin knew? That would be some shit! Post soon!
Wow, this is getting very interesting. So Bette’s and Lottie’s mom was an artist. I wonder what is in store for both Bette and Lottie in the things left them by their mother.
Heat, a bit of humor, intrigue… this chapter had a bit of everything. Delightful story, and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks!
Man that was alot…but I want more…they have alot to talk about.
OMG you can’t stop there. This story is so Good. PPS
Hey there I am so into this more soon huh? haven’t been driven in the past week..had a virus knock me down…remember, more soon
Please further write fast. I can hardly wait as the conversation goes on between Bette and Lotti. Around whether Bette flies to the lawyer to Virginia. And what has to say to it. PPS
Ok, this was nice and long, but I still need answers. Write faster, please (but no pressure).
This is such a touching story. Can’t wait for the following up. Thanks.
A wonderful story, you know just when to cut it off w/out giving us too much angst…I’m impatiently waiting for the next chapter….
im sooo glad you posted tonite! sweet jesus she told bette… getting really good MORE-MORE!anytime for a nc-17..lol p.p.s.
caught up on the story….and love it
God, this story is so intense, it’s kind of draining… I mean that in the best way possible… Incredible. Thank you.
Oooo this story keeps getting better and better, really great post…and you’re right, I’m not complaining about the NC-17’s LOL!! Tina should know Alice by now, so I’m a bit surprised she couldn’t fool her – it should have been Bette and Lottie telling Alice about this, but apart from that I really loves this story. So post more and very soon please :o))
Oh forgot to say….what is Jo up to, who was that girl she was dancing with and why didn’t she call sweet Lottie back??? I hope they can become a couple soon, they’re sweet and good together.
This is so good and cant wait to see more!