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Summer Vacation. Chapter 16
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Lottie sobbed into Tina’s shoulder, her tiredness making it impossible to see that any good could come out of this weekend, all that would happen was that they would find out more and more. Bette would have to meet all these pompous people who would annoy her as they tried to run her life just like they had Lottie’s, she sobbed harder, feeling Tina’s arms circle her tighter as she whispered convincingly that everything would be fine,
Bette pushed open the door to their suite, examining the scene before her, she held on to Angelica tightly by her shoulders … Angie felt her mothers presence and felt that it wasn’t the right time to speak …
“Are you okay?” Tina asked Lottie, pulling away as Lottie’s tears began to subside,
“Yeah …” Lottie mumbled, a tiny hint of a smile slowly returning to her face,
“Hey there …” said Bette, not wishing to be caught out in silent observation,
“Hey …” replied Tina, handing Lottie a tissue from her pocket as she jumped up to greet them …
“Can I go and look around …?” Angie squealed … noticing all the open doors from Tina’s earlier exploration,
“Sure …” Tina agreed, “but don’t touch anything … okay …” she added sternly,
“Is everything alright?” Bette asked quietly, her eyes glancing over Lottie,
“Yeah …” said Tina, leaning in for a quick kiss, “everything’s fine … babe you should see this place it’s amazing …” Tina gushed, her eyes alight and dancing,
Bette couldn’t help grinning at her enthusiasm, “I’m sure Angel will take me on a tour when she gets back!” Bette joked,
“I’m going to take a nap …” mumbled Lottie, getting up quickly, “Arthur said the car will be back for us at seven …” she added, grabbing her phone before she disappeared through the door to the bedrooms and out of sight,
“What was that all about …?” Bette asked, holding Tina close as she pushed the hair gently from her face,
Tina shrugged, “I think she thought I’d be upset because they changed our booking”
Bette looked puzzled, “Okay … … … I suppose they aren’t the kind of people you say no to …” she added after a pause,
Tina grimaced, Bette was never very good with people trying to tell her what to do … the evenings dinner could be interesting, Bette was liable to tell Roger precisely where he could stick his pompous English ass …
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Yay…another great chapter, love this story! BUT PLEASE DON’T LET LOTTIE AND ALICE HOOK UP – Lottie and Jo is much better, they just need to talk :o)) Hope Bette can help Lottie about these jerks who are running her life – nobody tells a Porter what to do!!! LOL. Oh and have a great weekend, it sounds like something exciting is happening :o))
Lottie and Alice… hopefully they’re just feeling a good friendship blossoming. Whoa, how rich *is* their mother’s family? I’m starting to wonder if Bette was never notified cos they cut their mother out after she married Melvin… hmmm. I love this story, sofa, one-pagers or not, post soon!
This is some story: always amazed where this is taking us. Just bright in designing the characters with love and emotion. Post soon because this is very addictive.
u say scary and u will find me saying….interesting!!!! NPP!!!!
also…is the families money drug related????
Another awesome chapter. Can’t wait to find out what the deal is with the family. PPS
Another GREAT chapter…p.p.s.
Ok, so, I actually feel badly for Lottie… And I will never see a fraction of what she has. As for Bette and Tina, no one needs to worry about them; I think Bette’s got enough alpha to kick anyone’s @$$, and Tina’s ferocious in her own right. Great stuff!
wow .. that turned out as one scarily long page …
Lol @ vam … I’m english! he’s just one person, and he happens to be pompous, promise to rectify it ….
I love this story – but what’s with anti-English vibe in “his pompous English ass”? It’s bad enough that Hollywood always characterises us as the “bad guy”!
Great story, and yep was a long page but great writing looking forward to what happens next.
Sofa, You can bust with more “one scarily long pages” as far as I’m concerned. this story has be so intrigued! Can you give us one more before the weekend? Please!
Poor Lottie, rich and unhappy. Those two words should never go together. Bette needs to step in a get these trustee under control instead of having them trying to control her and Lottie. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
I LOVE this story, and I LOVE how you write. I don’t want this to end and I’ve already got plans for you to continue writing whatever you need. Cause I’m totally hooked on reading!!!
Okay, i’m not gonna even start on what I think about your writing of B&T… Let’s just say that you’re doing the best job ever to actually put into words that a-fucking-mazing chemistry of theirs!!! We feel it in every single little bit you write about them… from the tiniest touch or glance to the most intense and passionate love encounter! Chemistry and togetherness… It’s all there! Oh, and I have a hunch that now that Bette is in the game, Lottie’s worries about that “no control” thing are about to see an end. To Bette no liking to be told what to do, add the fact she’s very very protective of her loved ones, and that now includes Lottie. Can’t wait to see Bette in action (with a behind the scene Tina, of course…)… Oh, and about that 4-poster bed…!!! ;)
I always look forward to this story. Can’t wait to see what Roger has in store for the sisters and how this is going to effect Tina and Angelica. Tina is so understanding and she is showing Lottie that. This is what makes Bette and Tina such a wonderful couple. They compliment each other.
Yes! Bring AlphaBette on! I can’t wait to read about the dinner and Bette taking charge and taking care of Roger…PPS!!
Excellent chapter but it was one page that never seemed to end. But that was good.PPS.
Bette and Tina could handle the Queen of England So Roger might have his had full with Bette. She is not a country Hick If her says anything to Tina his a** is grass and Bette will be the mower. Lottie is a little young but she will get so lessons fron one Ms Idont take any shit fron anyone PORTER Thanks so much for posting
great great story but there’s some big grey thing blotting out a couple of important conversations so I don’t understand what happpened…help???? soon please
Good chapter. Poor Lottie!
Angelica is adorable.
Lottie is lovely.
I love how you have Tina and Angel dealing with Bette who they both obviously adore and she them.
Enjoying the ride and looking forward to where you are taking me!