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Summer Vacation. Chapter 16
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“That bedroom has a cocktail bar …” Tina said, stunned as she opened the last door along the corridor and found herself back in the entrance hallway with Lottie,
Lottie looked up, lifting her head from her hands, “Huh?”
“This place is incredible …” Tina said again with a little laugh, “thank you for doing this,”
Lottie sighed, “I didn’t do anything … I never do …”
Tina wasn’t so caught up in the excitement that she didn’t notice the tone in Lottie’s voice, softly she approached her, “Hey … what’s the matter …?”
Lottie looked up, her eyes filled with tears, tiredness and her emotions were controlling her now, “Nothing …” she muttered, blatantly lying, “just that nobody listens to me anymore …”
Tina crouched in front of her, “Who doesn’t listen?”
“Anyone … everyone … people like Roger, people who think they know what’s best for me …” Lottie said, her voice getting smaller and smaller,
“What do you mean?” Tina asked confused,
Lottie sighed, tapping her toes nervously against the hardwood floor, “I said for them not to do this …” she said, gesturing at the beautiful suite around them,
“But this is lovely …” replied Tina, “don’t you like it?”
A slow tear fell it’s path down Lottie’s cheek, falling into her lap, “I liked being able to make my own decisions more …” she stressed to Tina,
Tina sat forwards on her knees in front of her, slowly beginning to understand that although this was all for Lottie, it hadn’t been her choice, she recalled the look on Lottie’s face at the airport when the men-in-black … or rather grey, had appeared to collect them, the way she hung back at the hotel, hiding behind her sunglasses in the hope that everything would wash past her, she was hiding, Tina understood that …
“Does it matter?” Tina asked, “if they tell us where we ought to stay …?”
“When it’s just a hotel room … No … but you’ve seen my room in LA” Lottie added, looking at Tina in earnest, “it’s hardly palatial …”
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Yay…another great chapter, love this story! BUT PLEASE DON’T LET LOTTIE AND ALICE HOOK UP – Lottie and Jo is much better, they just need to talk :o)) Hope Bette can help Lottie about these jerks who are running her life – nobody tells a Porter what to do!!! LOL. Oh and have a great weekend, it sounds like something exciting is happening :o))
Lottie and Alice… hopefully they’re just feeling a good friendship blossoming. Whoa, how rich *is* their mother’s family? I’m starting to wonder if Bette was never notified cos they cut their mother out after she married Melvin… hmmm. I love this story, sofa, one-pagers or not, post soon!
This is some story: always amazed where this is taking us. Just bright in designing the characters with love and emotion. Post soon because this is very addictive.
u say scary and u will find me saying….interesting!!!! NPP!!!!
also…is the families money drug related????
Another awesome chapter. Can’t wait to find out what the deal is with the family. PPS
Another GREAT chapter…p.p.s.
Ok, so, I actually feel badly for Lottie… And I will never see a fraction of what she has. As for Bette and Tina, no one needs to worry about them; I think Bette’s got enough alpha to kick anyone’s @$$, and Tina’s ferocious in her own right. Great stuff!
wow .. that turned out as one scarily long page …
Lol @ vam … I’m english! he’s just one person, and he happens to be pompous, promise to rectify it ….
I love this story – but what’s with anti-English vibe in “his pompous English ass”? It’s bad enough that Hollywood always characterises us as the “bad guy”!
Great story, and yep was a long page but great writing looking forward to what happens next.
Sofa, You can bust with more “one scarily long pages” as far as I’m concerned. this story has be so intrigued! Can you give us one more before the weekend? Please!
Poor Lottie, rich and unhappy. Those two words should never go together. Bette needs to step in a get these trustee under control instead of having them trying to control her and Lottie. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
I LOVE this story, and I LOVE how you write. I don’t want this to end and I’ve already got plans for you to continue writing whatever you need. Cause I’m totally hooked on reading!!!
Okay, i’m not gonna even start on what I think about your writing of B&T… Let’s just say that you’re doing the best job ever to actually put into words that a-fucking-mazing chemistry of theirs!!! We feel it in every single little bit you write about them… from the tiniest touch or glance to the most intense and passionate love encounter! Chemistry and togetherness… It’s all there! Oh, and I have a hunch that now that Bette is in the game, Lottie’s worries about that “no control” thing are about to see an end. To Bette no liking to be told what to do, add the fact she’s very very protective of her loved ones, and that now includes Lottie. Can’t wait to see Bette in action (with a behind the scene Tina, of course…)… Oh, and about that 4-poster bed…!!! ;)
I always look forward to this story. Can’t wait to see what Roger has in store for the sisters and how this is going to effect Tina and Angelica. Tina is so understanding and she is showing Lottie that. This is what makes Bette and Tina such a wonderful couple. They compliment each other.
Yes! Bring AlphaBette on! I can’t wait to read about the dinner and Bette taking charge and taking care of Roger…PPS!!
Excellent chapter but it was one page that never seemed to end. But that was good.PPS.
Bette and Tina could handle the Queen of England So Roger might have his had full with Bette. She is not a country Hick If her says anything to Tina his a** is grass and Bette will be the mower. Lottie is a little young but she will get so lessons fron one Ms Idont take any shit fron anyone PORTER Thanks so much for posting
great great story but there’s some big grey thing blotting out a couple of important conversations so I don’t understand what happpened…help???? soon please
Good chapter. Poor Lottie!
Angelica is adorable.
Lottie is lovely.
I love how you have Tina and Angel dealing with Bette who they both obviously adore and she them.
Enjoying the ride and looking forward to where you are taking me!