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Summer Vacation. Chapter 17
“Bette …” said Tina, “Bette … wake up for God’s sake!”
Out in the corridor Angie gave Lottie a high five before they scuttled off in the direction of their bedroom …
“You’re not ready …” said Bette crossly as she wandered into the sitting room looking for the two girls, Tina followed close behind her, fiddling with a stray curl of hair as it continued to fall out of place … “I can’t believe it …” Bette continued, eyeing up Angie’s outfit of faded blue jeans and pink DKNY shirt … “do I have to do everything …” she added, exasperated,
“What’s the matter …” mumbled Tina, answering her own question when she saw that Angie wasn’t yet dressed … and then she saw Lottie too … curled up on the couch in her jeans and a sweater, with both of their jackets slung across her arm …
“We’re going out …” said Lottie, getting up, “Angie and I thought we’d go see a movie,”
Bette’s expression grew darker, “No way …” she stated firmly, her voice full of authority and power, “there’s no way Tina and I are going to dinner with him alone,”
“That’s right …” agreed Lottie, stepping cautiously closer, she stifled a laugh, amused by Bette’s intense annoyed expression, “you’re not … but you are going to dinner alone …” she added, leaning forwards to kiss Bette lightly on the cheek,
Bette stood there dumbfounded, “What?”
“We ordered you room service …” explained Lottie, indicating the table by the window which was now fully laid with a white linen table cloth,
Bette gasped, neither of them had noticed … but it looked superb … and Lottie had taken the bottle of champagne from the fridge, placing it on ice along with a couple of glasses,
“It should be here in a little bit …” Lottie continued, “We’re going to watch a movie and then get pizza … we’ll be gone for a few hours …” she added,
Bette smiled, stunned,
Tina grinned, taking Bette’s hand gently, “Thank you …” she said to Lottie, beckoning for Angie to come over and give them a hug,
“Do you like it Mom?” Angie asked Bette,
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(41 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
I so love this story… insomnia rocks if it means there’s something this good to pass the time. Why did Maxine not acknowledge Bette in her will? I don’t get that… aside from the obvious… And I can see Bette and Roger clashing even more. I hope Lottie can handle them both. Ack, I hope you’re updating this story soon, sofa, I need answers! Thanks for the post!
I love your Bette and Tina..they are so real! the dialogue is dead-on.. love Lottie and Angie’s interactions.. please continue, your’re doing an admirable job…Thanks
It made my day when I saw that you had posted. Seems like Bette and Tina have a very interesting night ahead of them. PPS
bout time you updated….never too soon 4 an update of this story. Gotta love Bette’s reaction to Lottie’s announcement, and Tina’s response, now that was GOOD!!!! PPS!!!!!
How long will Bette put up with Roger?? Not long if we know our Bette. Let him get a little rude with Angie or Tina and he will Feel the Alpha Bette up his snobbish butt. I do believe that Bette is tired of how he treats Lottie. Let him call her Elizebeth again and we will find out. the girls were so sweet to give the time alone. thanks
YES! she knows,and doesnt care.bette needs to chew roger up and spit him out,or bitch slap him or something? love this! p.p.s.
Romantic! PPS.
great, great, great
Yes, yes where were we? Continue soon please.
Ummmm, B&T had been dancing and Lottie knocked on the door. Their hands were all over each other, that is where they were before the knock. I am a tad lost. It is Lottie who is bringing in her sister as the second person, but why? Also, if Maxine knew where Bette was why did she not include her in one of her wills? Did she feel like she had to hide Bette or did she feel that Bette was better off without the knowledge that Maxine still cared about her?
Its kinda sad that Maxine didn’t remeber bette in her will. Any reason for that?
i love this story… i can’t believe her mom left her out… but i’m glad lottie wants her to be part of it with her… i like this kid… PPS
u just made my horrible hayfever day!!!!! great stuff, love the humour, more
I looooooooooooove it!!!!! … God, Sofa, this story is just great!!! It’s like reading a nice book with a very interesting intrigue, and the whole wrapped in fluffy marshmallow!!! You manage the B&T loving and chemistry so well, it just makes the whole thing amazing. But, hey if I can dare one request (not that I should have any given this is pure delight…), I’m really really hoping for the next chapter to start at “Now… where were we?”… ;)
excellent!
Damn love B&T!