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Summer Vacation. Chapter 25
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“Hang on …” came the voice from inside, “just a minute …”
Lottie stood patiently, anxiously twirling her thumbs around the strap on her purse, whatever it was, it was taking ages, she heard the sound of Banjo scrabbling around inside and began to wonder what the hell was going on,
“Jo …?”
“Hold on … hold on,”
Lottie grinned as the doorknob wriggled back and forth and Jo opened up slowly, using her leg to keep Banjo back from carrying out his enthusiastic greeting of their visitor at the door,
“Hey …” said Lottie, bending down to rub the dogs ears,
Jo smiled, “Hey … do you make a habit of turning up at people’s apartments at ten o’clock at night?”
Lottie chuckled, “Only people I like,” she peered inside, Jo was wearing the most ridiculous pair of denim dungarees and her blonde hair was splattered with flecks of green and white paint, Lottie stared at her confused, “do you make a habit of painting last thing at night?”
Jo’s face gave way to a welcoming smile and she opened the front door a little further, “The bathroom …” she explained, “I got fed up with the orange paint falling off the walls,” she leant against the doorframe, “is everything okay?”
“Yeah … great … things with me and Bette kind of worked themselves out,” Lottie paused, fighting the urge to wipe the smudge of green paint from Jo’s chin,
Jo caught her looking, “What?”
“Nothing …” Lottie shook her head, “just … um … you have a little bit of …” she gestured to her own chin,
Jo used her sleeve to wipe it away, spreading the paint further, “What … there …? … did I get it?”
Lottie giggled, “No … er …” she stepped in a little closer, bringing her hand up to wipe the paint away, “there …”
“So … were you just in the neighbourhood?” asked Jo,
“No … I came to see you …”
“Really?”
Lottie nodded, “Uh huh …”
Banjo began to whine, “and Banj of course …” Lottie added, patting his head affectionately,
Lottie thought of all the lines she’s knew, all three of them, not knowing if any of were right to use when standing on a girls doorstep, waiting for an invite in. She was desperate for it not to be Jo always making all the moves, wanting to try, wanting to find a non-clichéd line that didn’t sound in her head like it totally sucked,
Jo chuckled, watching the internal conflict that was written all over her face, knowing that no matter what crap she came out with she’d still not be leaving that night,
“Oh for fucksake … come in” said Jo, grabbing her by the arm and pulling her into the flat,
Lottie giggled, “I’m sorry … I’m bad at this,”
Jo slipped her fingers into the belt loops of Lottie’s jeans, pulling her even closer, “You’re not half as bad as you think you are …” she whispered, before placing a firm, slightly paint covered kiss on Lottie’s lips,
Lottie grinned, “Mmn … tastes like …”
“Paint?” Jo finished for her,
Lottie checked again … “Yup … paint”
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two a day. thanks for this
ok so am waiting…when’s the next one gonna b up…huh..huh??? this one was sweet, got all the basis covered. for a while there I thought that u’d have someone at Jo’s apartment. *wipes forehead* NPP!!!
Lottie and Jo really are adorable… thank the stars Bette and Lottie finally got together and found some common ground and had a *real* talk. I hope this is the start of them becoming really close. Well as close as they can be, with the age gap. …Oh to have been a fly on the wall when Melvin walked in on Miss Pieszecki… I get the giggles just thinking about that. Great chapter, sofa, thanks!
2for2 love it…im glad bette comin around with lottie..p.p.s.
I get so into your writing….I hate to scroll down and come to the end, but, alas! there is always the anticipation of more… Love how Lottie is slowly, but surely getting the family she so clearly wants, but doesn’t everyone… wonderful….
Awesome. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Something tells me Bette isn’t going to let her little sister remain in a premed program. I loved it. PPS
What a great story. FResh and delicious.
I so love this story!!!! Bette and Lottie are so alike its funny. But I am glad they are becomming close. Thank you PPS
The second coming of Bette and Tina starring Lottie and Jo as the star crossed lovers. Alice is still Alice. You know that she will always be there for you. I like how you have written Melvin and how he has mellowed. The whole extended family is what I would strife to have in my own life.
Hey, let them think whatever they want, PC. Awesome and totally sweet, as always.
I love love this story, you know that don’t you…all the characters are great including Melvin-what a surprise???? My fav is Lottie; my fav couple?…well, thats not hard but Lottie and Jo are shaping up to give em a run for their money huh??? Catch you next week.
i READ this and i loved it, and then i skipped to another story of yours–and forgot to comment. your nc17 is faaaantastic. heh;) you make me LIKE tina and bette together which is a HUGE feat my friend. good work, and keep it up. very cute…
Oh BTW, forgot to say – don’t skip the night, wanna read about Lottie/Jo :o))
Awww I love this story – loved the Bette/Lottie talk which was needed, love your Tina and looove Lottie/Jo – so fucking cute :o)) More, more, more of this story, pleeeaaaase (okay I just begged I think LOL)
Love this, love this, love this! Even better without the sniffing and all those tissues around!… “Promise me this will never stop”… such a great line…. I’m glad that Bette and Lottie finally “really” talked. I think that Bette should offer Tina her mother’s ring. It would be symbolic and right the wrong…. Anyway, thanks for this chapter, I just came back from a vacation and found it… It was a great surprise! ;)
That was wonderful!