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Summer Vacation. Chapter 25
Previously:
Tina muttered silent curses at Bette, pulling the sheet up over her head to hide her frustration,
Twenty minutes later she was just about to fall into restful sleep when the phone on the bedside table rang,
“Hey … it’s me …” said Bette, slightly breathless, “she’s not at the hotel and she’s not answering her phone,” she paused, moving on again before Tina had a chance to rouse herself and speak, “do we know where Jo Parkes lives?” Bette asked,
Tina rubbed her eyes sleepily, “No … um … I don’t know, I don’t think so,”
“Fuck!” said Bette,
“Maybe Alice knows?” Tina suggested, “they hang out don’t they …?”
“Already tried her …” said Bette, clearly back in the car and driving again, “she’s not picking up?”
Tina sighed, “Bette come home, you can talk to her tomorrow, I want to go to sleep”
“I will …” said Bette, “I am … I’m just gonna call by Al’s first and see if she’s heard from her”
Tina groaned, “Argh …”
Bette stood in the dark corridor of Alice’s apartment block, letting herself in that far with her own key, she knocked on the door sharply, hoping to be loud enough that an irritated Alice would get out of bed but not so loud that her neighbours would wake up,
She knocked again, louder this time,
“Alright, alright …” came Alice’s voice from inside, “Jesus … Bette …? … what the fuck?”
“You’re not in bed?” said Bette, surprised by Alice’s normal dress,
Alice shook her head, “And?” … she looked at Bette, amused, “are we the bedtime police now?”
Bette frowned, “I called you, I’m looking for Lottie …” she paused, glancing at the floor, “I think we had a fight, she left, I wanted to make sure she’s okay but she’s not at the hotel and I don’t know where Jo lives …” she said, running all her words together quickly,
Alice stepped aside, “Bette … calm down, she’s here …”
Chapter Twenty Five.
Tina turned on her side as she felt Bette crawl back into the bed, she shuffled towards the middle, waiting for Bette to meet her there and wrap her arms around her,
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(38 votes, average: 3.58 out of 5)
two a day. thanks for this
ok so am waiting…when’s the next one gonna b up…huh..huh??? this one was sweet, got all the basis covered. for a while there I thought that u’d have someone at Jo’s apartment. *wipes forehead* NPP!!!
Lottie and Jo really are adorable… thank the stars Bette and Lottie finally got together and found some common ground and had a *real* talk. I hope this is the start of them becoming really close. Well as close as they can be, with the age gap. …Oh to have been a fly on the wall when Melvin walked in on Miss Pieszecki… I get the giggles just thinking about that. Great chapter, sofa, thanks!
2for2 love it…im glad bette comin around with lottie..p.p.s.
I get so into your writing….I hate to scroll down and come to the end, but, alas! there is always the anticipation of more… Love how Lottie is slowly, but surely getting the family she so clearly wants, but doesn’t everyone… wonderful….
Awesome. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Something tells me Bette isn’t going to let her little sister remain in a premed program. I loved it. PPS
What a great story. FResh and delicious.
I so love this story!!!! Bette and Lottie are so alike its funny. But I am glad they are becomming close. Thank you PPS
The second coming of Bette and Tina starring Lottie and Jo as the star crossed lovers. Alice is still Alice. You know that she will always be there for you. I like how you have written Melvin and how he has mellowed. The whole extended family is what I would strife to have in my own life.
Hey, let them think whatever they want, PC. Awesome and totally sweet, as always.
I love love this story, you know that don’t you…all the characters are great including Melvin-what a surprise???? My fav is Lottie; my fav couple?…well, thats not hard but Lottie and Jo are shaping up to give em a run for their money huh??? Catch you next week.
i READ this and i loved it, and then i skipped to another story of yours–and forgot to comment. your nc17 is faaaantastic. heh;) you make me LIKE tina and bette together which is a HUGE feat my friend. good work, and keep it up. very cute…
Oh BTW, forgot to say – don’t skip the night, wanna read about Lottie/Jo :o))
Awww I love this story – loved the Bette/Lottie talk which was needed, love your Tina and looove Lottie/Jo – so fucking cute :o)) More, more, more of this story, pleeeaaaase (okay I just begged I think LOL)
Love this, love this, love this! Even better without the sniffing and all those tissues around!… “Promise me this will never stop”… such a great line…. I’m glad that Bette and Lottie finally “really” talked. I think that Bette should offer Tina her mother’s ring. It would be symbolic and right the wrong…. Anyway, thanks for this chapter, I just came back from a vacation and found it… It was a great surprise! ;)
That was wonderful!