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Summer Vacation. Chapter 26
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Tina wove her way slowly in and out of the jam packed tables through to the back of The Planet, with Lottie tailing her close behind,
“You’re here …” she said, relieved to lay her eyes on Alice and Shane, Alice had her laptop out and was typing away, mumbling to herself and Shane as she edited the words on the screen. Shane, who was clearly not listening, sat with her feet up on the chair opposite and her cap pulled low to meet the top of her shades, the table top was littered with the remains of her morning espresso’s.
“Jesus …” said Lottie, counting up nine empty cups between them, “how long have you guys been here …?”
“A *long* time” replied Shane, shifting her feet so one of them could sit down,
Tina tapped against the top of Alice’s laptop, “Hey … hello!”
“Oh … hi” muttered Alice, not tearing her eyes away from her work, “sorry, it’s just I have to get this article in and I’m still 150 words down …”
“Don’t talk to her …” suggested Shane, “she’s been like that all morning”
“Have you seen Kit?” Lottie asked, looking around for any sign of her,
Shane shook her head, “No … why?”
Lottie pulled the fliers out of her bag, showing them to Tina and Shane, “I wanted her to put one of these up … I’m looking for a room”
“You’re moving out of the hotel?” Tina asked, concerned, “when did you decide that …?”
“This morning … Jo and I were …” Lottie paused, realising even Alice had torn her eyes away from her computer at the mention of Jo’s name,
“Yes?” said Tina, smiling, “you and Jo were …?”
“Nothing …” Lottie blushed horrendously and Tina kicked Alice’s leg under the table to stop her from making it worse, knowing that she’d be dying to, “anyway …” Lottie continued, “I’ve decided to look for somewhere a bit more ‘normal’ …”
Shane grinned across at Tina, their looks both agreeing that there was nothing like the possibility of a new relationship to make you rethink how ‘cool’ it was to be living in a hotel … “Well … um … maybe we could ask around … y’know, find something for you …” Shane offered,
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sofa!you so deserve the nominations you received women,and you trully are a wonderful writer and we the fans love your stories and really feel lucky that you share them with us,and i wanted to say thank you for that.im glad lottie talk to bette maybe it can start happening more now.tina needs to make up with alice somehow.jo/lottie reminds be of tibette first time.wink keep up the great work lady,before school gets too heavy.lol p.p.s.
okie dokie then. Cold shower may be needed.
I’m waiting for the next chapter, like now! That was great! I really love this story!
You certainly deserve the nomination for this story. This was anothEr great chapter. I can understand Alice’s outburst, but she can’t be too surprised that thE gang would think it would strange for Lottie to live with her, or Kit for that matter. I totally forgot that Lottie planned on being her for a short-time. It seems her relationship with Jo is heating up and she is already thinking about making LA her home. It also looks like Angie will be following in Lottie and Bette’s footsteps. And the tormented Barbie is too funny. I never did like those dolls growing up! Nice cliffhanger and I can see why you said you’ll have a hard time with the next chapter. No worries about the TiBette interaction, we know its still there, but I like Jo and Lottie also. PPS.
why did u stop there? That’s cruel. Can’t wait for the next one. PPS
OMG the ending was so great I almost forgot about the Barbie comments. They were over the top! Tormenting Barbie is just too much. It made me remember my younger days of tormenting my sisters
OMG the ending was so great I almost forgot about the Barbie comments. They were over the top! Tormenting Barbie is just too much. It made me remember my younger days of tormenting my sisters
You’re a superb writer. The way you describe their love and desire unfolding is sensual and tender. Just delicious. PPS.
ok, that was….AB FAB. it really was. i only have to objections: 1. boxing reduces length in your torso and 2. carbs after 4pm. hehe, joking! ok, half joking. anyway, a friend once told me that desire was a good thing–this, after all of our mutual friends converted to buddhism and decided that desire was evil. what you did, was prove with this story that desire is fantabulous–lotti and jo’s struggles with wanting MORE more more of a good thing, are just so poignant and so well written that i could feel it as i read. as always, pps!
Yeah, sofa, I know what you mean about the little sister thing. I’ve grown quite fond of Jo and Lottie, but at the same time, I feel a little like I should look away? It’s conflicting… kind of an “awww, they’re so cute!/whoa, that’s not cute, that’s hot!/wait a minute, this is *Lottie*, she’s not meant to be having S-E-X” dynamic going there. But that being said, I love the whole thing. I said it before, and I’ll say it again: every nom you got, you deserved. Thanks for the post, write when you can, sofa. [I won’t nag you to do the other thing you know you have to do. You know what I mean. *wags finger* ;) ] Cheers!
With Lottie you see a young Bette Porter. You see her interact with others around her as I would think how Bette started out as. I wonder if Bette was like Lottie the first time she made love to a woman. They both hide their insecurities from others. In other ways Lottie reminds me of Tina with Bette being her first woman. Bette treated Tina with the utmost respect and it seems Jo is doing the same with Lottie. Watching Lottie is like watching Bette all over again.
wow
I know for sure I want more too, cos I’m addicted to this sweet story :o)) Thanks for your words in the author note, means a lot :o)) Post soon please…
Damn this is getting hot hot hot!
OMG no you didn’t stop there. I hope that they remember to turn the stove off because it would seem that it will be awhile before they return to the kitchen, and we don’t the place to catch on fire or for them to be destrubed by the smoke detector going off. GREAT chapter, PPS :o).
AND WHAT??? u left us there!!!! bad to the bone!!!!congrats on the nominations, u write so well…so write more, this was just getting good…for L and J.
although it’s mainly jo/lottie i found myself enjoying this much. Thanks also for giving us some b/t loving!
… Sorry about that. The B/T relationship remains my favorite, you write them so well… And those everyday loving “moments” are my fav’! Thanks Sofa!
Awwww… nice stuff coming…! I know what you mean about writing about “little sister” Lottie though… I’ll never get tired of this amazing B&T writing of yours… Don’t we all wish to wake up like that? That morning moment was so well done, thank you! Oh, and I think that this jealousy of Bette about the Alice/Lottie relationship is awfully cute! “She told *me*, not Alice…”… So cute! You’re planting the premices of a very sweet sisterly relationship between Bette and Lottie, and it’s working really well. That “talk” at the Gallery was a nice exemple of that, and it’s great to see Bette in that role. But the B/T relationship re
Sofa, you deserve the nominations you got. Thisa Chapter was Great!!! I am glad Bette and Lottie are really getting to know each other. Thanks PPS