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Summer Vacation. Chapter 27
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Kit shook her head, “They’re probably sleeping, it can wait until morning”
“Can it?”
Kit’s eyes began to tear and Alice moved around the counter gently, pulling Kit away from the bar and back towards her office, she lay her head on Alice’s shoulder, sobbing gently,
“Ssh …” whispered Alice, “why don’t you let me drive you round there, you know Bette wont care if you wake her up …”
“No …” Kit mumbled, “you stay here, there’s only juniors on tonight”
“Close it …” urged Alice, “Kit … this is so much more important”
Kit shook her head stubbornly, “I’m not letting people down!”
Alice watched her take her jacket and keys, praying to God that Bette and Tina weren’t so caught up in the middle of something that they’d choose not to answer the door as well,
She flipped her cell open and hit the number for Bette’s mobile one last time, not sure what she’d say if Bette did answer,
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“It was Kit …” said Bette as she played out the message on the machine,
“Hey Bette …” came Kit’s voice, a little wobbly and distressed, “I really need to speak to you it’s urgent, I know it’s late and you’re probably sleeping but I’m at The Planet can you call me back”
Tina slid her hands around Bette’s waist, dipping inside the waistband of her pants, “What do you think she wants …?”
Bette shrugged, picking up the handset to return the call,
Alice heard it ring, but the bar was six-people deep as the sets on stage had just changed over and she was finding herself more of a hindrance than a help as she tried to mix margaritas,
“Jesus!” scolded Matilda as Alice free poured the tequila, “are you trying to put Kit out of business,”
Alice groaned, knowing she ought to answer the phone, “Fuck!!!”
“No answer,” sighed Bette, “this is weird …” she turned to Tina, “I think I’m just gonna go down there, check everything’s okay?”
Tina nodded, “Okay … are sure babe … it’s late?”
Bette kissed her on the nose, pulling a tatty old Yale sweatshirt off the back of her office chair, she slipped on her running shoes, “Sure … it’s probably nothing, I’ll get there and she’ll have seen someone she wanted to tell me about or something” said Bette, trying to ease the churning feeling that was growing in her stomach,
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So enjoyable to read but the bad news is bringing us out of the daze. Thanks.
Okay, you might have gotten over the sister thing…. but i haven’t! Isn’t that weird that at the beginning of the scene, I was all bothered and blushing and going “Oh no, that’s little Lottie for God’s sake…” Well, then I guess you did a great job, especially with the tenderness and loving between the two lovebirds, cause it became bearable, then kinda hot, and in the end, I was totally enjoying the NC-17… Does that make me a pervert or are you just a hell of an awesome writer? ;) Anyway, great chapter and yeah, well done! But here comes the drama…. Thanks for the update!
I’m with jp22, I thought it would be Melvin. Poor Kit, no parent expects to leave this world before their child. I am happy for Jo and Lottie. PPS :o).
WHAT?!!! oh no. please post soon. thanks for a great chapter!
jo/lottie sexscene reminds me of my first time and what a wonderfull time young and free.now drama queen we new you where going to something and bring it on we love it.congrats on the nomintaions babe you deserved it and more for sharing your wonderfull stories with your loyal fans you rock..p.p.s. babe
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Both of them dead god that was shocking.I thought that maybe Melvin died.Dn’t leave us hanging for log.Hot chapter by the way.
i love these one page wonders. heh. as always this was beautiful. i’m worried about the little cuties–those fragile ‘just coming out’ hearts must be well taken care of. i hope they do ok, but i’m sure you’ll tell a good story and they’ll be fine. great twist at the end! poor kit, but yay kit, she’s amazing and will shine in your next chapters. pps! xo
OH MY GOD that was harsh!!! Get your butt back here and POST!!!!! GRRRRR…. :-))
Wow, you have three very different heart wrenching acts happening in this chapter. You have Lottie and Jo consummating their relationship and then Bette and Tina continuing their love through action. Then the heart breaker with the death of David. You send our hearts soaring and then crashing landing with the loss of Kit’s son.
please do not stop writing this story sofa!! I love it even though it’s sending my water bill through the roof! LOL! Some of us readers are just a bunch of lazy gits and forget how much the comments keep the writers going. We will bo better, right guys, and you just keep posting this incredibly sexy, exciting, dramatic tale!! pretty please, with sugar on top.
just started reading your story the other day and i love it! i can’t wait to read more =) now i’m goin to start reading your other story!
Damn L&J and B&T are hot and awesome, love it. Poor Kit and Bette and the gang will help them go through this. Ok post soon please, thanks! So glad to catch up this story of your and loving it. Please post soon, thanks!
WHAT!!!!PPS
no no no no NO! You can not stop there it’s just simply impossible for you to stop there. I like it but still pleasem continue PPVS
Yeah, that was way hot, glad to see you got over the little sister thing… On the rest… I thought for sure you’d gone and killed off Melvin… poor Kit. Excellent post, sofa, thanks.
Well this story took a different turn. You need to get back here and post some more, please, pretty please.
1stl; u were born to write smut; 2nd…nasty turn of events…oooooooohhhh…..pleasz hurry with next chappy….thank u about ONLY YOU….i will try 2 write this weekend….loved the smut, lol, more now that lottie’s got the hang of it…
OH CRAPOLA!
I can not beleave you stopped there!!!!! We need more and PPVS. Thanks Great Update
Noooo poor Kit – I can’t believe you ended a FUCKING amazing post this way, you are so bad!!! I loved the Jottie part and of course the B&T part LOL – hope you post soon cos as you already know I’m addicted. Have a great Sunday :o))
… Wow… You sure know how to snap a girl out of needing a nice, long, cold shower… Hotness, sofa. Really. How am I supposed to write my paper after that?! (ps, it’s 5.30 am) Still adore Jo and Lottie… but poor Kit. Anyway, lovely as always. PPS (now that I’m caught up!), xo GG ;)