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Summer Vacation. Chapter 27
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Lottie giggled, “I supposed not …”
“Anyway, my friends were as bad as I was, and were taken home in various states by well meaning seniors … I’m sure,” Jo paused, “and Alice took ‘me’ home …”
Lottie raised her eyebrow, smirking,
“Yeah right …” snorted Jo, “like I could have done a thing with half a bottle of tequila inside me … but the next morning, Sunday … and we lay in bed talking for hours until the afternoon, about books we liked, places we wanted to visit, our folks and after coffee and juice and a shower she made love to me … and it was amazing …” Jo added with a smile,
Lottie sighed, “Sounds lovely …”
“So …?” asked Jo teasingly, “how about you? … how was your first time?”
Lottie rolled herself on top of her, their sticky bodies moulding together again, getting used to the feeling of the others flesh against their own, “Oh y’know … not bad …”
“Not bad?!?!?” Jo tickled her, “not bad?”
“Okay … okay …” Lottie gasped for air, “stop … I give … it was fucking awesome, better than awesome … fucking unbelievable …”
Jo turned them over, pinning Lottie’s arms above her head, “Say it again …” she demanded, kissing her passionately,
Lottie smiled into their kiss, “Fucking unbelievable …”
“Well …” whispered Jo … “better make sure you believe it then …” she added, as her right hand snaked it’s way back down Lottie’s body,
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“Kit …?” said Tina, surprised to see her sister in law standing on the doorstep, “what are you doing here … Bette’s gone to The Planet to see you …” she added, opening the door wide to let Kit in,
“Fuck …” said Kit, following her in, “hey … Tina,” she sighed, as she gave the surprised woman a bear like hug,
Tina held her tight, “What’s going on Kit … is everything alright?”
~
“Alice …” yelled Bette across the bar, “Alice … where’s Kit?”
Alice looked up surprised, “Bette …? … what the fuck are you doing here?”
Bette watched Alice struggling with the cocktail shaker, “I could ask you the same thing,”
Alice finished with the drink she was making and slid it across the bar towards it’s owner who gave her a steely glare, unsure about it’s contents, “On the house …” muttered Alice, feeling guilty as she waved Bette in towards Kit’s office,
“Where’s Kit …?” asked Bette again, as she followed Alice down the hall,
“She went to look for you”
“She’s gone to the house?”
“Yes …”
“Why … what’s wrong … Alice … tell me … what the fuck’s going on?”
Alice pushed her inside the room, shutting the door on the din of the bar, “Bette sit down,”
“No …” replied Bette obstinately, “just tell me …”
Alice sighed, nobody liked to give bad news, least of all to Bette, she was the queen of the ‘act first think later’ school of thought and more than liable to kill the messenger,
“Alice …”
Alice paused, taking a seat out of harms way, “It’s David …”
~
“Oh my God Kit …” whispered Tina as she pulled the sobbing woman into her arms, “Kit … I’m so sorry … I … when did you find out?”
Kit spoke through her sobs, “Daddy called at the club … I …”
“Ssh …” Tina soothed, “ssh …”
“I never … he never …” Kit’s words of regret caught in the back of her throat,
Tina rocked her gently back and forth, “I know … ssh … it’s gonna be okay …”
~
Alice grabbed Bette’s hand and pulled her down next to her,
“It’s David … there’s been an accident … Bette … David and Monique … they’re both dead …”
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So enjoyable to read but the bad news is bringing us out of the daze. Thanks.
Okay, you might have gotten over the sister thing…. but i haven’t! Isn’t that weird that at the beginning of the scene, I was all bothered and blushing and going “Oh no, that’s little Lottie for God’s sake…” Well, then I guess you did a great job, especially with the tenderness and loving between the two lovebirds, cause it became bearable, then kinda hot, and in the end, I was totally enjoying the NC-17… Does that make me a pervert or are you just a hell of an awesome writer? ;) Anyway, great chapter and yeah, well done! But here comes the drama…. Thanks for the update!
I’m with jp22, I thought it would be Melvin. Poor Kit, no parent expects to leave this world before their child. I am happy for Jo and Lottie. PPS :o).
WHAT?!!! oh no. please post soon. thanks for a great chapter!
jo/lottie sexscene reminds me of my first time and what a wonderfull time young and free.now drama queen we new you where going to something and bring it on we love it.congrats on the nomintaions babe you deserved it and more for sharing your wonderfull stories with your loyal fans you rock..p.p.s. babe
?!?!?
Both of them dead god that was shocking.I thought that maybe Melvin died.Dn’t leave us hanging for log.Hot chapter by the way.
i love these one page wonders. heh. as always this was beautiful. i’m worried about the little cuties–those fragile ‘just coming out’ hearts must be well taken care of. i hope they do ok, but i’m sure you’ll tell a good story and they’ll be fine. great twist at the end! poor kit, but yay kit, she’s amazing and will shine in your next chapters. pps! xo
OH MY GOD that was harsh!!! Get your butt back here and POST!!!!! GRRRRR…. :-))
Wow, you have three very different heart wrenching acts happening in this chapter. You have Lottie and Jo consummating their relationship and then Bette and Tina continuing their love through action. Then the heart breaker with the death of David. You send our hearts soaring and then crashing landing with the loss of Kit’s son.
please do not stop writing this story sofa!! I love it even though it’s sending my water bill through the roof! LOL! Some of us readers are just a bunch of lazy gits and forget how much the comments keep the writers going. We will bo better, right guys, and you just keep posting this incredibly sexy, exciting, dramatic tale!! pretty please, with sugar on top.
just started reading your story the other day and i love it! i can’t wait to read more =) now i’m goin to start reading your other story!
Damn L&J and B&T are hot and awesome, love it. Poor Kit and Bette and the gang will help them go through this. Ok post soon please, thanks! So glad to catch up this story of your and loving it. Please post soon, thanks!
WHAT!!!!PPS
no no no no NO! You can not stop there it’s just simply impossible for you to stop there. I like it but still pleasem continue PPVS
Yeah, that was way hot, glad to see you got over the little sister thing… On the rest… I thought for sure you’d gone and killed off Melvin… poor Kit. Excellent post, sofa, thanks.
Well this story took a different turn. You need to get back here and post some more, please, pretty please.
1stl; u were born to write smut; 2nd…nasty turn of events…oooooooohhhh…..pleasz hurry with next chappy….thank u about ONLY YOU….i will try 2 write this weekend….loved the smut, lol, more now that lottie’s got the hang of it…
OH CRAPOLA!
I can not beleave you stopped there!!!!! We need more and PPVS. Thanks Great Update
Noooo poor Kit – I can’t believe you ended a FUCKING amazing post this way, you are so bad!!! I loved the Jottie part and of course the B&T part LOL – hope you post soon cos as you already know I’m addicted. Have a great Sunday :o))
… Wow… You sure know how to snap a girl out of needing a nice, long, cold shower… Hotness, sofa. Really. How am I supposed to write my paper after that?! (ps, it’s 5.30 am) Still adore Jo and Lottie… but poor Kit. Anyway, lovely as always. PPS (now that I’m caught up!), xo GG ;)