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Summer Vacation. Chapter 27
Jo wriggled out of them, as Lottie watched. Legs which she’d seen before in shorts or in a skirt, they looked different somehow, longer, leaner and smoother, all the more enticing because they lead somewhere she’d not been to before. Jo smiled, watching her eyes as they travelled the length of her pins, making their way back up to the tiny yellow bow,
She held her hands out to the sides, knowing it was important for Lottie that she took her time,
Lottie grinned, “You’re beautiful …”
Jo pushed her back against the covers of the bed, assaulting her lips and her neck again. She cupped Lottie’s breasts with her hands, running the flat of her palm across nipples which were already peaked and firm. Lottie felt her body responding, her back arched and her hips rolled high against Jo’s thigh pressed firmly against her centre as she pushed them both further and further up the bed,
Jo cupped her ass through her jeans and Lottie giggled, realising there were so many places to touch, her mind was overwhelmed, her hands torn between Jo’s breasts and hair, and the soft cool skin of her back or her ass, released from the confines of those jeans,
Jo pulled up, resting back on her knees, she grabbed hold of Lottie’s ankle as she lay there giggling, smiling to herself as she threw it across her shoulder before making her way to the zip,
Lottie stopped giggling, her smile remained and a look of wonder took over as Jo undid her pants slowly, sliding her hands inside to push the material away, she left behind the skimpy black underwear, lacy all the way around. Jo could smell her arousal, the scent of it turned her on, urging her forwards, knowing the Lottie’s body wanted her and wanted to make love to her and be released by her, she whimpered slightly, causing Lottie to look up at her, concerned,
They spoke little as Jo pulled Lottie’s pants off elegantly, one leg first and then the other, holding the last one high by her ankle as she began to kiss her way slowly down, making the trip from Lottie’s foot to her thigh as her body squirmed beneath her,
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(63 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
So enjoyable to read but the bad news is bringing us out of the daze. Thanks.
Okay, you might have gotten over the sister thing…. but i haven’t! Isn’t that weird that at the beginning of the scene, I was all bothered and blushing and going “Oh no, that’s little Lottie for God’s sake…” Well, then I guess you did a great job, especially with the tenderness and loving between the two lovebirds, cause it became bearable, then kinda hot, and in the end, I was totally enjoying the NC-17… Does that make me a pervert or are you just a hell of an awesome writer? ;) Anyway, great chapter and yeah, well done! But here comes the drama…. Thanks for the update!
I’m with jp22, I thought it would be Melvin. Poor Kit, no parent expects to leave this world before their child. I am happy for Jo and Lottie. PPS :o).
WHAT?!!! oh no. please post soon. thanks for a great chapter!
jo/lottie sexscene reminds me of my first time and what a wonderfull time young and free.now drama queen we new you where going to something and bring it on we love it.congrats on the nomintaions babe you deserved it and more for sharing your wonderfull stories with your loyal fans you rock..p.p.s. babe
?!?!?
Both of them dead god that was shocking.I thought that maybe Melvin died.Dn’t leave us hanging for log.Hot chapter by the way.
i love these one page wonders. heh. as always this was beautiful. i’m worried about the little cuties–those fragile ‘just coming out’ hearts must be well taken care of. i hope they do ok, but i’m sure you’ll tell a good story and they’ll be fine. great twist at the end! poor kit, but yay kit, she’s amazing and will shine in your next chapters. pps! xo
OH MY GOD that was harsh!!! Get your butt back here and POST!!!!! GRRRRR…. :-))
Wow, you have three very different heart wrenching acts happening in this chapter. You have Lottie and Jo consummating their relationship and then Bette and Tina continuing their love through action. Then the heart breaker with the death of David. You send our hearts soaring and then crashing landing with the loss of Kit’s son.
please do not stop writing this story sofa!! I love it even though it’s sending my water bill through the roof! LOL! Some of us readers are just a bunch of lazy gits and forget how much the comments keep the writers going. We will bo better, right guys, and you just keep posting this incredibly sexy, exciting, dramatic tale!! pretty please, with sugar on top.
just started reading your story the other day and i love it! i can’t wait to read more =) now i’m goin to start reading your other story!
Damn L&J and B&T are hot and awesome, love it. Poor Kit and Bette and the gang will help them go through this. Ok post soon please, thanks! So glad to catch up this story of your and loving it. Please post soon, thanks!
WHAT!!!!PPS
no no no no NO! You can not stop there it’s just simply impossible for you to stop there. I like it but still pleasem continue PPVS
Yeah, that was way hot, glad to see you got over the little sister thing… On the rest… I thought for sure you’d gone and killed off Melvin… poor Kit. Excellent post, sofa, thanks.
Well this story took a different turn. You need to get back here and post some more, please, pretty please.
1stl; u were born to write smut; 2nd…nasty turn of events…oooooooohhhh…..pleasz hurry with next chappy….thank u about ONLY YOU….i will try 2 write this weekend….loved the smut, lol, more now that lottie’s got the hang of it…
OH CRAPOLA!
I can not beleave you stopped there!!!!! We need more and PPVS. Thanks Great Update
Noooo poor Kit – I can’t believe you ended a FUCKING amazing post this way, you are so bad!!! I loved the Jottie part and of course the B&T part LOL – hope you post soon cos as you already know I’m addicted. Have a great Sunday :o))
… Wow… You sure know how to snap a girl out of needing a nice, long, cold shower… Hotness, sofa. Really. How am I supposed to write my paper after that?! (ps, it’s 5.30 am) Still adore Jo and Lottie… but poor Kit. Anyway, lovely as always. PPS (now that I’m caught up!), xo GG ;)