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Summer Vacation. Chapter 27
“Yeah …?”
“Yeah”
“You liked that?” Bette asked, drawing herself in close towards Tina’s naked body, their lips hovered together, barely apart but not yet touching,
“God yeah …” Tina exhaled breathlessly,
Bette grinned, “Did you still want to talk?”
Tina pulled on the tie of Bette’s robe, allowing the sides to fall open, “Not so much …”
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Lottie lay on top of her, Jo’s arms encircling her as she ran her fingers lightly over the contours of Jo’s face, seeing her so close. She’d kissed the lips which were marked with her own arousal, groaning as Jo murmured about her taste, wanting to share in it, allowing herself to be explored as Jo’s fingers caressed her curves and dips, finding the points which made her chuckle and laugh out loud,
Jo grinned, “So you’re ticklish, huh?”
Lottie giggled, “Uh huh … hmn …” Jo’s fingers ran gently across the crease of her ass, cupping her cheeks as she spread her legs just slightly, allowing Lottie fall down between them,
She hid her face, nervously against Jo’s chest,
“What?” asked Jo,
Lottie shook her head, refusing to look up,
Jo grinned, running her fingers up Lottie’s sides again until she hit the spot which made her giggle and squirm, trying to get away,
“Hey … no fair!”
Jo smiled, “What’s the problem?”
“Nothing … I’m nervous … I … what if I don’t know what to do, what if you don’t like it?”
Jo smiled, “I’ll like it?”
“How do you know?”
“Because I like you …”
Lottie smiled, she lay her body down, letting Jo feel her full weight as her fingers cupped Jo’s face, kissing her deeply, she slid her tongue inside Jo’s mouth, knowing that she wanted to explore slowly, learn the places to touch and lick, know her rhythms and the speeds she liked, know how to make her cry out with ecstasy,
She ran her tongue across Jo’s lips, kissing down her cheek and to the long lean line of her neck which she already loved to spend time kissing, overcome by the sweet smell of Jo. It was comforting, like the scent she remembered from hugging her, the smell which lingered on her pillow after she’d spent the night, a mixture of her perfume and her shampoo mixed together, delicious,
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(63 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
So enjoyable to read but the bad news is bringing us out of the daze. Thanks.
Okay, you might have gotten over the sister thing…. but i haven’t! Isn’t that weird that at the beginning of the scene, I was all bothered and blushing and going “Oh no, that’s little Lottie for God’s sake…” Well, then I guess you did a great job, especially with the tenderness and loving between the two lovebirds, cause it became bearable, then kinda hot, and in the end, I was totally enjoying the NC-17… Does that make me a pervert or are you just a hell of an awesome writer? ;) Anyway, great chapter and yeah, well done! But here comes the drama…. Thanks for the update!
I’m with jp22, I thought it would be Melvin. Poor Kit, no parent expects to leave this world before their child. I am happy for Jo and Lottie. PPS :o).
WHAT?!!! oh no. please post soon. thanks for a great chapter!
jo/lottie sexscene reminds me of my first time and what a wonderfull time young and free.now drama queen we new you where going to something and bring it on we love it.congrats on the nomintaions babe you deserved it and more for sharing your wonderfull stories with your loyal fans you rock..p.p.s. babe
?!?!?
Both of them dead god that was shocking.I thought that maybe Melvin died.Dn’t leave us hanging for log.Hot chapter by the way.
i love these one page wonders. heh. as always this was beautiful. i’m worried about the little cuties–those fragile ‘just coming out’ hearts must be well taken care of. i hope they do ok, but i’m sure you’ll tell a good story and they’ll be fine. great twist at the end! poor kit, but yay kit, she’s amazing and will shine in your next chapters. pps! xo
OH MY GOD that was harsh!!! Get your butt back here and POST!!!!! GRRRRR…. :-))
Wow, you have three very different heart wrenching acts happening in this chapter. You have Lottie and Jo consummating their relationship and then Bette and Tina continuing their love through action. Then the heart breaker with the death of David. You send our hearts soaring and then crashing landing with the loss of Kit’s son.
please do not stop writing this story sofa!! I love it even though it’s sending my water bill through the roof! LOL! Some of us readers are just a bunch of lazy gits and forget how much the comments keep the writers going. We will bo better, right guys, and you just keep posting this incredibly sexy, exciting, dramatic tale!! pretty please, with sugar on top.
just started reading your story the other day and i love it! i can’t wait to read more =) now i’m goin to start reading your other story!
Damn L&J and B&T are hot and awesome, love it. Poor Kit and Bette and the gang will help them go through this. Ok post soon please, thanks! So glad to catch up this story of your and loving it. Please post soon, thanks!
WHAT!!!!PPS
no no no no NO! You can not stop there it’s just simply impossible for you to stop there. I like it but still pleasem continue PPVS
Yeah, that was way hot, glad to see you got over the little sister thing… On the rest… I thought for sure you’d gone and killed off Melvin… poor Kit. Excellent post, sofa, thanks.
Well this story took a different turn. You need to get back here and post some more, please, pretty please.
1stl; u were born to write smut; 2nd…nasty turn of events…oooooooohhhh…..pleasz hurry with next chappy….thank u about ONLY YOU….i will try 2 write this weekend….loved the smut, lol, more now that lottie’s got the hang of it…
OH CRAPOLA!
I can not beleave you stopped there!!!!! We need more and PPVS. Thanks Great Update
Noooo poor Kit – I can’t believe you ended a FUCKING amazing post this way, you are so bad!!! I loved the Jottie part and of course the B&T part LOL – hope you post soon cos as you already know I’m addicted. Have a great Sunday :o))
… Wow… You sure know how to snap a girl out of needing a nice, long, cold shower… Hotness, sofa. Really. How am I supposed to write my paper after that?! (ps, it’s 5.30 am) Still adore Jo and Lottie… but poor Kit. Anyway, lovely as always. PPS (now that I’m caught up!), xo GG ;)