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Summer Vacation. Chapter 28
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“Good,” replied Alice, still a little stunned from Lottie’s outburst, “I’m starving,”
Dana shook her head, “You’re always thinking about food aren’t you …”
Moments later Tina walked in, alone, Lottie wondered for a second if she had really come alone and was coming to tell them all what she’d suspected all along, that Kit and Bette both wanted time by themselves to grieve, that everyone else would have to put their own needs aside for a while and allow them to be, but she was wrong,
“Bette and Kit are just coming,” said Tina wearily as she sat herself down on a barstool and began picking at the chips in front of her,
“Are you sure you’re okay with this?” Bette asked, after helping Kit out from the backseat of the car,
They exchanged a look of ‘now or never’ and Kit nodded, “Best get it over with … right? … that way everyone can go insane and then things will get back to normal a whole lot quicker,”
Bette nodded silently in agreement, they’d sat on their surprise secret for long enough but back in LA it was pointless,
“Come along then,” whispered Bette, offering her hand, “let’s go …”
“Heyyyyy” said Kit, in her usual fashion as she pushed open the door, Lottie watched with interest as Tina pulled Angie towards her, wanting to avoid the moment where Angie would typically fling herself at her Mom after she’d been away,
“Hey,” said Helena, first to greet them as she’d been stood right by the door,
Everyone gathered round, even Lara appeared from the kitchen for a moment, where she was running things with only Dana to help her in order to keep things nice and private,
“Let me get you something to drink …” said Helena, playing the hostess and heading towards the bar,
“In a minute …” said Kit, pausing, she scanned the room and the faces of their family, Bette hovered behind in the doorway, still quite out of sight, “there’s someone I’d like you to meet first …”
Seven faces trained on the doorway, able to see only Kit and then Bette standing behind, only Tina, who had come with them, was not surprised,
“Who?” asked Helena, stating the obvious that no one else seemed capable of,
Kit stepped aside and from in between them Bette pushed forwards a small boy of around four or five, his skin olive and his hair jet black and bushy, similar to Angie’s and he wore a shy but impish smile,
“Everyone,” said Bette, “this is Che, David’s son,” as she knelt down beside the small boy, “Che … this is everyone we’ve been telling you about,”
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yay for you! this chapter is a major accomplishment…not only because it is so very long and took you so very long to post and not only cuz i was there and can attest to the latter point, but because you’ve been genuinely innovative within an already innovative storyline. i love how this story is evolving and moving forward. very cool! helena’s development is a lovely subthreadplot, and as always, i’m loving your willingness to give kit more than a passing ‘mofo’ comment. che’s additions to the story are going to be something to look forward to! pps:)
YEEEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!!! … WOW, just saw that you posted and HAD to leave this cry of JOY before I went off to read!!! THANKS THANKS THANKS so much for posting!!! Yayyyyyy!
I am so glad you are posting again. I know how hard it is to write sometimes when the real world calls. I love this story. I can’t wait for the next chapter. PPS
I guess I’ll have to keep reading even if I’m lost.
Well I’ll be cow-kicked. And here I’d thought you’d given up writing and gone off to split your time betwixt pastures helebettian and the working world. Hell, I’m glad to see you back, sofa. And now that you are, please, DON’T EVER LEAVE AGAIN. Mkay? Ta, sofa. Ta. Anyhow, loved the chapter, loved the twist, missed the story, and now that I’ve been a greedy fool and read it all at once, I still have two hours to kill ’til I can go get Potty. Wait, I already am. Anyway, I regret nothing. Post soon!
Welcome back. I though David had a child, but then I though maybe that was just another story I read. Could still be a different story (lol). Anyway, glad you’re back to continue this story. Great update.
So why do I get a sense that Tina is not all that happy about this new addition to their family, or I assume to their family….tks for finally updating..love it!!
HUGE comeback sofa!!!! Great indepth, tense, all the way to the end…I thought for a minute that maybe David had relented and left sperm behind for Tina or something miraculous like a child, so well done, at least Kit and Melvin have a part of David with them…terrific…yes its flooding in the North Island and snowing heavy in the South Is of NZ…that’s the reason so many of you Britishers come here to live; u like the similarity (Lol) so I know what u mean by staying in to write, me too!!! Its too damned dangerous on the roads. Plz don’t be a stranger with your posts as u well know I’m loving ‘Lottie’ and the whole family, I adore me some Helena, has she got a nice woman yet? (I forget?)…Who is Lara with? Its been so long kiddo and I don’t want to have to reread the entire story so just tell me in your comments back Huh??? Like I said …great story…
Yippee!!! Sofa is back in town! I was so happy to see your post and enjoyed it as always! I hope Lottie doesn’t start to neglect Jo, as they are such a good thing! Hope Tina is not becoming overwhelmed with Bette’s family… first came Lottie and the foundation issues, now Che…one thought… why doesn’t Lottie want to live alone? She can obviously afford it?…..
Welcome back Sofa!! Seeing you had posted made my day. I am now comfortably in my happy place even though the post was a bit somber – but I loved it. You write these characters so well, all of them, and I’ll be glad for whatever updating you can give us. You’ve been missed! Good luck on the awards and congrats on finishing up school.
So Glad to see you back Sofa!!! You made my Friday!
First of all, welcome back. I am soooo glad that you are back and writing. I have missed your stories immensely. Next, I had a feeling that a child was left behind. The fact that David’s wife’s parnets and family had nothing to do with them struck me as odd until you nammed the child. It hit me then, Che is bi-racial child. It sounds like he is Asian-Afican-American (like Tiger Woods).
I’ve been missing this story and am so happy to see your post. Interesting twist… anxious to read where they go from here.
Hey I read one of ur stories and loved the way u write.So I visited ur page and ended up reading all ur stories. I loved this story in particular and can’t wait for ur next post:)PPS
Good chapter!