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Summer Vacation. Chapter 28
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“You’re totally not listening …” said Alice, after throwing a scrunched up piece of notepaper at Lottie’s forehead,
Lottie said nothing, she was too busy watching Tina as she got up and got ready to leave, at just a little after 1pm that was odd in itself, there weren’t any patients for an hour or more and lunch breaks had got longer and longer without Kit there to chivvy them all back to their respective jobs,
“I have some things to pick up,” said Tina flatly, catching Lottie’s eye as she studied her movements carefully,
Lottie shrugged, “Okay, shall I see you back at work then?”
Tina gathered her things and nodded, “Sure,” she paused, “If I’m late just start going through some of the paperwork with the new client, okay?”
A whole bunch of ‘okay’s’ … Lottie wondered what was so important and secretive that Tina had to go off in her lunch to get it done,
“This is weird …” said Lottie to Alice as Tina closed the door to The Planet behind her,
“Of course it’s weird, everything’s weird,” Alice noted, with the air of someone who’s world had been truly shaken,
Her eyes said it all; Kit and Bette were like the two steadfast rocks in their bizarre and complicated world of family existence, especially Bette. When something hit one of them hard, or even worse, both of them, then everything … it seemed, turned on its head,
“No … I just meant Tina,” mumbled Lottie, “Tina’s being weird, she’s been like this all week, at dinner last night she was on the phone to the Principal of Angie’s school for almost an hour, I recognised the name, but when I asked her about it, she said it was Bette …”
Alice looked at her waiting for the punch line, not getting the significance of anything which had already been said, not in terms of routine and how the previous week had been running,
“So …” continued Lottie decisively, “Bette *never* calls without speaking to Angie, not in the evening, and besides …” she added, pausing for effect, “Bette then called about ten minutes later and it was obvious that she hadn’t called before,”
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yay for you! this chapter is a major accomplishment…not only because it is so very long and took you so very long to post and not only cuz i was there and can attest to the latter point, but because you’ve been genuinely innovative within an already innovative storyline. i love how this story is evolving and moving forward. very cool! helena’s development is a lovely subthreadplot, and as always, i’m loving your willingness to give kit more than a passing ‘mofo’ comment. che’s additions to the story are going to be something to look forward to! pps:)
YEEEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!!! … WOW, just saw that you posted and HAD to leave this cry of JOY before I went off to read!!! THANKS THANKS THANKS so much for posting!!! Yayyyyyy!
I am so glad you are posting again. I know how hard it is to write sometimes when the real world calls. I love this story. I can’t wait for the next chapter. PPS
I guess I’ll have to keep reading even if I’m lost.
Well I’ll be cow-kicked. And here I’d thought you’d given up writing and gone off to split your time betwixt pastures helebettian and the working world. Hell, I’m glad to see you back, sofa. And now that you are, please, DON’T EVER LEAVE AGAIN. Mkay? Ta, sofa. Ta. Anyhow, loved the chapter, loved the twist, missed the story, and now that I’ve been a greedy fool and read it all at once, I still have two hours to kill ’til I can go get Potty. Wait, I already am. Anyway, I regret nothing. Post soon!
Welcome back. I though David had a child, but then I though maybe that was just another story I read. Could still be a different story (lol). Anyway, glad you’re back to continue this story. Great update.
So why do I get a sense that Tina is not all that happy about this new addition to their family, or I assume to their family….tks for finally updating..love it!!
HUGE comeback sofa!!!! Great indepth, tense, all the way to the end…I thought for a minute that maybe David had relented and left sperm behind for Tina or something miraculous like a child, so well done, at least Kit and Melvin have a part of David with them…terrific…yes its flooding in the North Island and snowing heavy in the South Is of NZ…that’s the reason so many of you Britishers come here to live; u like the similarity (Lol) so I know what u mean by staying in to write, me too!!! Its too damned dangerous on the roads. Plz don’t be a stranger with your posts as u well know I’m loving ‘Lottie’ and the whole family, I adore me some Helena, has she got a nice woman yet? (I forget?)…Who is Lara with? Its been so long kiddo and I don’t want to have to reread the entire story so just tell me in your comments back Huh??? Like I said …great story…
Yippee!!! Sofa is back in town! I was so happy to see your post and enjoyed it as always! I hope Lottie doesn’t start to neglect Jo, as they are such a good thing! Hope Tina is not becoming overwhelmed with Bette’s family… first came Lottie and the foundation issues, now Che…one thought… why doesn’t Lottie want to live alone? She can obviously afford it?…..
Welcome back Sofa!! Seeing you had posted made my day. I am now comfortably in my happy place even though the post was a bit somber – but I loved it. You write these characters so well, all of them, and I’ll be glad for whatever updating you can give us. You’ve been missed! Good luck on the awards and congrats on finishing up school.
So Glad to see you back Sofa!!! You made my Friday!
First of all, welcome back. I am soooo glad that you are back and writing. I have missed your stories immensely. Next, I had a feeling that a child was left behind. The fact that David’s wife’s parnets and family had nothing to do with them struck me as odd until you nammed the child. It hit me then, Che is bi-racial child. It sounds like he is Asian-Afican-American (like Tiger Woods).
I’ve been missing this story and am so happy to see your post. Interesting twist… anxious to read where they go from here.
Hey I read one of ur stories and loved the way u write.So I visited ur page and ended up reading all ur stories. I loved this story in particular and can’t wait for ur next post:)PPS
Good chapter!