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Summer Vacation. Chapter 32
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“Bette?”
Bette looked at her thoughtfully, “Do you want me to do this because I’m your sister and you want me to be a part of it or am I just doing it to help you get away from your dad’s control,”
“Because I want you to do it!” Lottie replied indignantly, “Jesus Bette what sort of question is that?”
“A perfectly reasonable one,” Bette replied, “and one I’d like an honest answer to …”
“I did answer you honestly,”
“What’s going on?” asked Tina, coming back in to the sound of raised voices,
“Nothing,”
Bette followed suit, “Nothing …”
Tina opened her mouth to mediate between them once again but the sound of the doorbell stopped her,
She looked at Bette, confused, late night callers were a rarity,
Bette shrugged, “Don’t look at me, she’s the one who’s been ignoring her girlfriend, it’s probably Jo,”
“I doubt it,” Lottie huffed,
Tina shook her head and left them to it, figuring that one of their stubborn streaks would have to give in eventually,
She wandered to the door, peering around the blind first of all as it was late, and dark and she was cautious.
A tall dark haired man stood the other side, and the second Tina saw him she knew who he was,
She sighed, opening the door, “You’d better come in,”
The stranger looked confused to receive such a knowing invite and stepped inside,
“I’m looking for Charlotte,”
Tina nodded, her arm gesturing in the direction of the lounge,
Bette and Lottie’s standoff silence was broken by the sound of a man’s quiet voice, floating though from the kitchen,
“Is she here?” he asked, confused as Tina seemed to know him so obviously when he had absolutely no idea who she was,
Tina nodded again, “Yes, she’s in there, and so is Bette,”
“I didn’t know where to go,” the man explained, “but since this is where her sister lives I thought …”
Tina nodded, fearing that his explanations were best kept for someone else, “In there,”
She followed behind him, ushering him quietly forwards, words seeming insignificant,
Lottie met them at the door, her face a mixture of apprehension and annoyance, she looked to her father in surprise,
“Hi Dad,”
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hey, i’m first! *squeals with delight* that was great hun, super duper great. i was kinda enthralled…so much so that i have neglected my work for half an hour, re-reading your story twice. ok, so helena and alice..very subtle which made it all the more yummy…i like them together, and its good to go into that “why start, we got hurt once before, blahblah” angst that everyone goes through. people avoid shit cuz of those convos and i say ‘hooey!’ so i’m glad they’re going there! and jo and lottie…lottie should call the girl. i like that you’re going into that as well–those communication subtleties that are layered and different among women…we can all play those parts, we can all be emotionally clueless…the best is when the group jumps on lottie about that. i cracked up. i also cracked up at dana’s preggers breast fetish…hilarious…keep up the story, i furkin’ love it:) xo, pps, when you get some time off work darlin’
Very nice! I really liked that lunchtime round table discussion. Re: Jo, As hb said, Lottie needs to just pick up the phone. Al + Hels, I still like! And I wonder what trouble is coming from Mr. Lottie’s Dad. (can’t remember their last name?) Glad you had the time to post, more when you can, sofa, ta!
YAY YOU’RE BACK AND I HOPE YOUR PRESENCE WILL ONCE AGAIN BE A REGULAR ONE!!! I had forgotten about this story, however now I am truly happy to be reminded about it once again. Lottie’s dad..hmm drama to come I feel the winds changing. Jo and Lottie have gotta to make up, with both of them meeting half way, cause as I see it neither of them is wrong. NC17 with Al and H to come, (prefer NC17’s with B & T any day though). I love how Tina comes in and reprimands them from there fights and such, its cute. PPRS!!!!!
I can’t wait to see how Lottie’s father behaves. It seems like so much of her life is clothed in mystery. PPS!
Well this chapter surely had Lottie at the center of a lot of drama. Entertaining all around. Love the scene at the planet as they all ganged up on Lottie. Can’t wait to see Lottie’s dad’s reaction to her new life.
Yeah, Lottie’s avoidance lost her her chance to have some control over her situation (with her father and Jo) and now the shit is hitting the fan at the same time as her father is knocking on the door. It remains to be seen if his presence will be as traumatic as Lottie feared. Also remains to be seen if Jo or Lottie will step up to the plate (an Americanism) in regards to their issue(s). I like to use parentheses and you like asteriks. To each his (or her) own.
oooo! This should be good! I am thoroughly enjoying your story, especially the new characters you have created! One request: Can you write a scene with Sharmen? Post soon!
Hey there Sofa! Brilliant chapter. Always love the group scenes… can just imagine Dana drooling over the baby breasts! Your dialogue is so much better than what the show provides. Interested to see the fallout over the arrival of Lottie’s father… I sense drama in the works. By the way, if it’s positive reinforcement you desire, I am only too obliged to beg for chapters!!
Me too Sofa, I’ll beg, I love this story, you just suck up into being one of the family. Thanks good job, can’t wait for next chappy, please do so soon, there is weekend coming up. Md
Perfect!!!!! Great!!!!! and the cliffhanger!!!!! u better hurry up and post the follow up….
So Lottie’s dad has graced his daughter’s life. I hope that he will not freak out while in Bette and Tina’s home. When he sees Bette will he see her mother in her as he see her in Lottie? I love Alice and Helena together. Besides Bette and Tina I would like to see those two together in the upcoming season.
That was awesome!
Sofa your story and storytelling just gets better and better. I love the subtle parallels between Lottie and Bette, they are sisters afterall, right?! You have the dynamics of these characters down so well that the dialog and their interactions, their quirks (pregnant breasts?! LOL) come totally to life on the page. i hope you never get tired of giving us your version of the girls, I don’t know if I’d survive!! LOL. PPS