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Summer Vacation. Chapter 32
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“Helena …” Alice breathed, as Helena pulled her lips gently away,
Helena smiled, “I’ve been wanting to do that for ages,”
Alice glanced around, “Me too … what time do you think she’ll be back?” she asked of Lottie,
Helena shrugged, “Maybe she wont, maybe she’ll stay there …”
“Really?”
Helena shrugged, “Does it matter?”
“Nope.”
Alice grinned, taking Helena’s glass from her hand, she placed her own down on the table beside it, draining it of its contents first. Helena smirked, her heart pounding in anticipation of what was about to happen,
She ran her fingers lightly down the side of Helena’s face, so gently that it caused them both to tremble. It seemed like such a long time since they’d been there, and Alice was worried, that once they started, all those fears from before that they’d dated amongst the group already and been burnt by it’s after effects would return.
“This feels different,” Helena whispered,
Alice nodded, “Very,”
They leant closer, lips almost touching as hot breath mingled, creating a misty sea before their very eyes which dampened the edges of everything around them. Suddenly Helena began to worry that they would be interrupted,
“Let’s go upstairs,” she whispered,
Alice chuckled, her eyes widening, of coursed she’d stayed with Helena there before, even slept with her in her bed, as friends do, but the prospect of Helena inviting her upstairs for something else was thrilling,
“Ok …” she replied, choked,
Helena smiled, “That was if she does come back we won’t be interrupted,”
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“I know!” Bette giggled, as they talked about Alice and Helena’s not so secret date,
“You’re both terrible,” said Tina, half-heartedly reprimanding them both, “poor Alice, and poor Helena too if they’ve got to put up with you two!”
“What?” Bette exclaimed innocently, “I’m just getting a bit of my own back,” she stated, “All those times I have to answer to Alice on what you and I get up to,”
Lottie grimaced, and the look on her face set Bette’s laughter off again,
“Me too,” said Lottie, “you’ve no idea how annoying she was when I started dating Jo,”
Upon the mention of Jo’s name they all fell silent again, waiting to see if Lottie would take it further,
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hey, i’m first! *squeals with delight* that was great hun, super duper great. i was kinda enthralled…so much so that i have neglected my work for half an hour, re-reading your story twice. ok, so helena and alice..very subtle which made it all the more yummy…i like them together, and its good to go into that “why start, we got hurt once before, blahblah” angst that everyone goes through. people avoid shit cuz of those convos and i say ‘hooey!’ so i’m glad they’re going there! and jo and lottie…lottie should call the girl. i like that you’re going into that as well–those communication subtleties that are layered and different among women…we can all play those parts, we can all be emotionally clueless…the best is when the group jumps on lottie about that. i cracked up. i also cracked up at dana’s preggers breast fetish…hilarious…keep up the story, i furkin’ love it:) xo, pps, when you get some time off work darlin’
Very nice! I really liked that lunchtime round table discussion. Re: Jo, As hb said, Lottie needs to just pick up the phone. Al + Hels, I still like! And I wonder what trouble is coming from Mr. Lottie’s Dad. (can’t remember their last name?) Glad you had the time to post, more when you can, sofa, ta!
YAY YOU’RE BACK AND I HOPE YOUR PRESENCE WILL ONCE AGAIN BE A REGULAR ONE!!! I had forgotten about this story, however now I am truly happy to be reminded about it once again. Lottie’s dad..hmm drama to come I feel the winds changing. Jo and Lottie have gotta to make up, with both of them meeting half way, cause as I see it neither of them is wrong. NC17 with Al and H to come, (prefer NC17’s with B & T any day though). I love how Tina comes in and reprimands them from there fights and such, its cute. PPRS!!!!!
I can’t wait to see how Lottie’s father behaves. It seems like so much of her life is clothed in mystery. PPS!
Well this chapter surely had Lottie at the center of a lot of drama. Entertaining all around. Love the scene at the planet as they all ganged up on Lottie. Can’t wait to see Lottie’s dad’s reaction to her new life.
Yeah, Lottie’s avoidance lost her her chance to have some control over her situation (with her father and Jo) and now the shit is hitting the fan at the same time as her father is knocking on the door. It remains to be seen if his presence will be as traumatic as Lottie feared. Also remains to be seen if Jo or Lottie will step up to the plate (an Americanism) in regards to their issue(s). I like to use parentheses and you like asteriks. To each his (or her) own.
oooo! This should be good! I am thoroughly enjoying your story, especially the new characters you have created! One request: Can you write a scene with Sharmen? Post soon!
Hey there Sofa! Brilliant chapter. Always love the group scenes… can just imagine Dana drooling over the baby breasts! Your dialogue is so much better than what the show provides. Interested to see the fallout over the arrival of Lottie’s father… I sense drama in the works. By the way, if it’s positive reinforcement you desire, I am only too obliged to beg for chapters!!
Me too Sofa, I’ll beg, I love this story, you just suck up into being one of the family. Thanks good job, can’t wait for next chappy, please do so soon, there is weekend coming up. Md
Perfect!!!!! Great!!!!! and the cliffhanger!!!!! u better hurry up and post the follow up….
So Lottie’s dad has graced his daughter’s life. I hope that he will not freak out while in Bette and Tina’s home. When he sees Bette will he see her mother in her as he see her in Lottie? I love Alice and Helena together. Besides Bette and Tina I would like to see those two together in the upcoming season.
That was awesome!
Sofa your story and storytelling just gets better and better. I love the subtle parallels between Lottie and Bette, they are sisters afterall, right?! You have the dynamics of these characters down so well that the dialog and their interactions, their quirks (pregnant breasts?! LOL) come totally to life on the page. i hope you never get tired of giving us your version of the girls, I don’t know if I’d survive!! LOL. PPS