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Summer Vacation. Chapter 32
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“You could call her now?” she suggested, “invite her to lunch, make it up to her,”
Lottie glanced at her watch, shaking her head, “Classes start again in about ten minutes,”
“Play rehearsals then?” Tina suggested, not giving up,
Lottie felt the odd unnatural sense of heat as ten pairs of eyes all looked upon her, even Che was staring at her expectantly,
“I was … maybe I’ll give it a miss today,” she replied quietly, waiting for the furore to start,
“You can’t just not go!” exclaimed Alice, as Helena let her speak and then followed up with, “You have to go,”
“Angie expects you to go!” Bette added, “she chose you over me so now you *have* to go!”
Tina nodded, “You have to go Lottie,”
Defeated, Lottie looked up, met by a stream of nodding admonishing faces, “Fine, I’ll go.”
“And you’ll talk to your dad too?” Bette added, running with it,
Lottie folded her arms, “Fine,”
“What’s the matter?” asked Helena, noticing Lottie’s sullen face,
Alice threw her arm around her, “Cheer up chuck, you’ll sort things out with Jo,”
Lottie scowled, “I feel … bullied,” she stated petulantly, sticking out her tongue for effect,
The table erupted into laughter, if anything only to show that it was only through caring so much that they’d come down a little harsh on her,
Shane leant across the table, her laughter noticeably absent, “Don’t worry,” she whispered with a smile, “you’ll get used to it,”
“How’s Angie?” Lara asked, changing the subject,
“Miserable,” Bette replied, “she didn’t get a lot of sleep last night and then this morning she learnt just how difficult it is doing things for yourself with one arm in a sling!”
“I put her cast in a plastic bag so she could take a shower,” Tina added, “but she wasn’t amused,”
They all sighed and generally murmured in agreement that it was bad luck for Angie to have had that happen. When Lottie looked up Bette was smiling directly at her, letting her know that it was just talk and everything was sill ok,
“Poor Angie,” Alice cooed, she turned to Lottie, who it had evidently decided would be going to her play rehearsals after all, adding, “give her a hug from me,”
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hey, i’m first! *squeals with delight* that was great hun, super duper great. i was kinda enthralled…so much so that i have neglected my work for half an hour, re-reading your story twice. ok, so helena and alice..very subtle which made it all the more yummy…i like them together, and its good to go into that “why start, we got hurt once before, blahblah” angst that everyone goes through. people avoid shit cuz of those convos and i say ‘hooey!’ so i’m glad they’re going there! and jo and lottie…lottie should call the girl. i like that you’re going into that as well–those communication subtleties that are layered and different among women…we can all play those parts, we can all be emotionally clueless…the best is when the group jumps on lottie about that. i cracked up. i also cracked up at dana’s preggers breast fetish…hilarious…keep up the story, i furkin’ love it:) xo, pps, when you get some time off work darlin’
Very nice! I really liked that lunchtime round table discussion. Re: Jo, As hb said, Lottie needs to just pick up the phone. Al + Hels, I still like! And I wonder what trouble is coming from Mr. Lottie’s Dad. (can’t remember their last name?) Glad you had the time to post, more when you can, sofa, ta!
YAY YOU’RE BACK AND I HOPE YOUR PRESENCE WILL ONCE AGAIN BE A REGULAR ONE!!! I had forgotten about this story, however now I am truly happy to be reminded about it once again. Lottie’s dad..hmm drama to come I feel the winds changing. Jo and Lottie have gotta to make up, with both of them meeting half way, cause as I see it neither of them is wrong. NC17 with Al and H to come, (prefer NC17’s with B & T any day though). I love how Tina comes in and reprimands them from there fights and such, its cute. PPRS!!!!!
I can’t wait to see how Lottie’s father behaves. It seems like so much of her life is clothed in mystery. PPS!
Well this chapter surely had Lottie at the center of a lot of drama. Entertaining all around. Love the scene at the planet as they all ganged up on Lottie. Can’t wait to see Lottie’s dad’s reaction to her new life.
Yeah, Lottie’s avoidance lost her her chance to have some control over her situation (with her father and Jo) and now the shit is hitting the fan at the same time as her father is knocking on the door. It remains to be seen if his presence will be as traumatic as Lottie feared. Also remains to be seen if Jo or Lottie will step up to the plate (an Americanism) in regards to their issue(s). I like to use parentheses and you like asteriks. To each his (or her) own.
oooo! This should be good! I am thoroughly enjoying your story, especially the new characters you have created! One request: Can you write a scene with Sharmen? Post soon!
Hey there Sofa! Brilliant chapter. Always love the group scenes… can just imagine Dana drooling over the baby breasts! Your dialogue is so much better than what the show provides. Interested to see the fallout over the arrival of Lottie’s father… I sense drama in the works. By the way, if it’s positive reinforcement you desire, I am only too obliged to beg for chapters!!
Me too Sofa, I’ll beg, I love this story, you just suck up into being one of the family. Thanks good job, can’t wait for next chappy, please do so soon, there is weekend coming up. Md
Perfect!!!!! Great!!!!! and the cliffhanger!!!!! u better hurry up and post the follow up….
So Lottie’s dad has graced his daughter’s life. I hope that he will not freak out while in Bette and Tina’s home. When he sees Bette will he see her mother in her as he see her in Lottie? I love Alice and Helena together. Besides Bette and Tina I would like to see those two together in the upcoming season.
That was awesome!
Sofa your story and storytelling just gets better and better. I love the subtle parallels between Lottie and Bette, they are sisters afterall, right?! You have the dynamics of these characters down so well that the dialog and their interactions, their quirks (pregnant breasts?! LOL) come totally to life on the page. i hope you never get tired of giving us your version of the girls, I don’t know if I’d survive!! LOL. PPS