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Summer Vacation. Chapter 41
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“Yeah …” Shane’s voice trailed away, “it’s a big undertaking,”
“Yeah …”
They watched in silence as Carmen and Lara took their seats, heads bent together in discussion over something whilst Dana queued at the drinks table for water,
“Hey, Bette tells me Tom left the warehouse keys with her this morning,” Shane said enthusiastically,
Lottie grinned, “Yeah, I mean it’s not ours, not yet, but he said we could keep the spare set to let the builders in,”
Shane nodded, “Think you’re gonna do much with it?”
“Not much,” Lottie paused, “we wont cause too much disruption, I hope,”
“Never mind about that,” Shane assured, “it’s exciting, aren’t you happy about it?”
“Yeah,” Lottie stalled, “yeah, I am, really it’s just …” her eyes scanned the room to ensure Angelica wasn’t within earshot, “it’s just another thing to plan for and there’s so many plans at the moment it all gets a little overwhelming,”
Shane nodded, “I bet,” she downed her water including the small melted ice cubes in the bottom, before crunching them loudly, “what plans?”
Lottie grinned a little, aware that Shane, unlike Tina, had methods of getting people to talk in ways they wouldn’t even realise until she’d done it, “The warehouse, Paris, the Trust, school …” she paused, “Angie hugged me today and told me she doesn’t want me to leave,”
Shane twiddled the empty glass in her hand, “Well I don’t think any of us ‘want’ you to leave …”
“No?”
Shane didn’t answer her,
Lottie shrugged, “What about Bette? … sometimes I wonder what she really thinks, I mean, I just turned up here and now what? … she’s stuck with me?” she cast her eyes down towards her feet before finishing the rest of the sentence in a mumble, “it’s not as if we’ve ever talked about me sticking around here forever, she might not want that?”
Shane shrugged in return, “Well have you tried asking her?”
Aware that it was such a terribly sensible response, Lottie stuck out her tongue in reply, “No …!”
“Well then maybe you should,” Shane suggested, giving her a friendly shove,
“You have to come help …” Jo panted, running out from backstage to drag Lottie back by her arm, “please …” she turned to Shane, “sorry Shane … gotta take her!”
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Please don’t stop, I totally adore your story! I love that the characters have challenges but ultimately love one another and want whats best. I was crackin’ up at Angie and then Lottie catching Bette and Tina. :) LMAO! Great job!
It weird to a child to catch your parents.thanks goodness Bette didnt undress completely. Don’t stop this to much is happenion to leave us hanging
”very keen to get something posted before next week, when I’m up in the spotlight ” …Nice!… (btw, Where is the ‘spotlight’? – I’m clueless – never participated in it before.) Date?/Link?
Hey Sofa, great chapter, please do not stop I love this story and as long as write I will read no matter how long it takes u to post. Plus I spend two days reading this story from start just a few months ago and so don’t let my reading go waste by not continuing the story:)PPS
I have been a silent reader on this site for some time but, I really, really like this story. So glad to see you posting and hope that you will be able to post often. jinjur
Don’t stop this story, LOL at the bette and tina for getting caught by angie… :)
Hey all, thanks, I’m not stopping, no way … don’t get me wrong, it’s just after chronic writers block I always get super edgy/anxious before posting again … anyway … for Nanc, the link to the spotlight on the main discussions board is http://discussion.l-word.com/viewforum.php?f=73 I hope that works, it starts new each week on a Sunday :-D, I’ll reply to comments properly next post … and it won’t be weeks and weeks I promise! Sofa x
Sofa, I’m really glad your back with this story, I’v really missed it. I love reading about how the whole family interacts and can’t wait for Lotties’ party. Thank you. Md
What a pleasant surprise to find this chapter tonight! I still love this story Sofa and I’ll keep reading if you keep writing! B&T caught out by Angie…LMAO!
You know that I love this story. I can never get enough of it. I can picture Bette and Tina enjoying a little time to themselves and relaxing after the little excersie session. I can also see Angie’s reaction after catching her moms in the relaxation mode after the exercise session.
great to have u back Sofa. Looking forward to lots and lots of CONSTANT updates. lol with TONS AND TONS OF NC17’S!!!! B & T THAT IS!!!
I love the way you weave together an emotional maturity, psychological insight and beautiful love making. This is my favorite paragraph.”Bette cleared the plates from the table, leaving Tina to sit and think, the summer time was like a role reversal for them, with Tina the one working the most hours and Bette mostly off during the day, it gave them time to switch roles and remember that sitting so firmly in ideas of who they were based on jobs and money was the thing that almost killed them in the first place.”
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the b-day bash!
*runs by yelling ‘sofa is a hottttie!’ whoowhoo!*
Please don’t stop. I like your story. I always wait for another chapter.
Yeah, don’t stop. I LOVE your story. It’s really great and I would love to hear how it’s going on with the girls…
oh plz u have to post the NEXT chapter soon!!!! That was seriously funny that Bette and Tina were caught at it!!!
hey baby, i told you liked this chapter, and you didn’t dissapoint with the rest:) hahahaha, tina and bette got caught…thats funny. i hope it never happens to me…well anyway, i’m just saying, locks are good! and thankx for being realistic about the one issue we’re all always avoiding–these people are parents and i know that i often write their kids ‘away at a babysitter’ which makes me laugh that no one ever calls me a fool for doing it. anyhoo, great chapter, i’m thrilled you posted, and yeah…hehe…you’re the cutest. xo
HAHAHA! Bette & Tina caught red-handed by their own daughter. Funny and embarrassing as hell! Welcome back, sofa!!! I’m glad you’ve come around that dreaded Writer’s Block. And I don’t see myself getting tired of reading updates on this story anytime soon. I hope you’ll get on a roll again but if not, don’t worry and pressure yourself. We’re patient, we’ll just wait for your next post whenever it comes. Thank you!!! ;>
So happy to see you back, sofa! Very glad to hear you’re not thinking of stopping ’cause this just gets better every chapter. Love Angie’s gross reaction and look forward to Lottie’s birthday bash. Enjoy the spotlight and I may drop by for that hot chocolate…mmmm.
That was great, love B&T so hot!