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Summer Vacation. Chapter 41
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Bette looked up again and smiled, utterly embarrassed, “Hey,”
Lottie blushed, then grinned, then fell into Angie as she tried to pull her away and began stumbling over her words, “Hey … erm … sorry … we’re … erm … c’mon Ange, lets … erm … go …”
Angie frowned at Bette as Lottie pulled her away,
Jo caught up with them just inside, as Lottie hastily shut the patio doors behind her, she stood with her back to the garden, Angie in front of her,
Jo smiled at her, “What’s up, are they in?”
Lottie nodded, giving her a look that hopefully said further questions weren’t necessary,
Angie huffed and started walking off, “They’re being gross!”
Lottie let her go, struggling hard not to burst out laughing until she was well out of earshot,
Jo frowned, “What …?”
Lottie fell forward, laughing into Jo’s shoulder, “Oh my god …” she chuckled, “how embarrassing … I just sprung my own sister …!”
Jo pulled her back, “You what?”
“Bette and Tina …” Lottie explained, “they were … y’know!”
Jo’s eyes widened in surprise, “Oh …” she thought it over for a second, “in the backyard!?!?”
Lottie slapped her playfully, “Prude …”
They grabbed their things and made to leave, pretty sure than neither Bette nor Tina would want an audience when they came back in, Lottie chuckled to herself as they left all of Angie’s artwork and projects on the kitchen counter, finding it more funny than gross, which was probably a good thing,
“Hey …” Bette came rushing after them, fully dressed, she smiled, her cheeks still bright red with embarrassment, “hey, wait up … I just wanted to say …”
Lottie stopped her, “It’s ok Bette,”
Bette rolled her eyes, “Yeah?”
Lottie grinned, “Yeah … see you Sunday,”
Bette smiled as she let them out, “Sunday,”
“What’s happening Sunday?” Jo asked, as she heard the door click shut behind,
Lottie followed her out to the car, “Bette’s taking me up to show me their beach house,” she paused, “apparently it needs some work doing and she wants to clear it out for the summer, and since you’re taking that silly, stupid French class all day,” Lottie continued, “I thought I might as well,”
Jo smirked, knowing the real reason she’s invented that ‘silly’ French refresher course, “That’s nice,”
Lottie nodded, urging her to get in the car, “Whatever,” she leant across the roof of the car, “just as long as you speak French to me when we’re in Paris, I don’t mind,”
Jo giggled, “Oui Mademoiselle,”
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Please don’t stop, I totally adore your story! I love that the characters have challenges but ultimately love one another and want whats best. I was crackin’ up at Angie and then Lottie catching Bette and Tina. :) LMAO! Great job!
It weird to a child to catch your parents.thanks goodness Bette didnt undress completely. Don’t stop this to much is happenion to leave us hanging
”very keen to get something posted before next week, when I’m up in the spotlight ” …Nice!… (btw, Where is the ‘spotlight’? – I’m clueless – never participated in it before.) Date?/Link?
Hey Sofa, great chapter, please do not stop I love this story and as long as write I will read no matter how long it takes u to post. Plus I spend two days reading this story from start just a few months ago and so don’t let my reading go waste by not continuing the story:)PPS
I have been a silent reader on this site for some time but, I really, really like this story. So glad to see you posting and hope that you will be able to post often. jinjur
Don’t stop this story, LOL at the bette and tina for getting caught by angie… :)
Hey all, thanks, I’m not stopping, no way … don’t get me wrong, it’s just after chronic writers block I always get super edgy/anxious before posting again … anyway … for Nanc, the link to the spotlight on the main discussions board is http://discussion.l-word.com/viewforum.php?f=73 I hope that works, it starts new each week on a Sunday :-D, I’ll reply to comments properly next post … and it won’t be weeks and weeks I promise! Sofa x
Sofa, I’m really glad your back with this story, I’v really missed it. I love reading about how the whole family interacts and can’t wait for Lotties’ party. Thank you. Md
What a pleasant surprise to find this chapter tonight! I still love this story Sofa and I’ll keep reading if you keep writing! B&T caught out by Angie…LMAO!
You know that I love this story. I can never get enough of it. I can picture Bette and Tina enjoying a little time to themselves and relaxing after the little excersie session. I can also see Angie’s reaction after catching her moms in the relaxation mode after the exercise session.
great to have u back Sofa. Looking forward to lots and lots of CONSTANT updates. lol with TONS AND TONS OF NC17’S!!!! B & T THAT IS!!!
I love the way you weave together an emotional maturity, psychological insight and beautiful love making. This is my favorite paragraph.”Bette cleared the plates from the table, leaving Tina to sit and think, the summer time was like a role reversal for them, with Tina the one working the most hours and Bette mostly off during the day, it gave them time to switch roles and remember that sitting so firmly in ideas of who they were based on jobs and money was the thing that almost killed them in the first place.”
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the b-day bash!
*runs by yelling ‘sofa is a hottttie!’ whoowhoo!*
Please don’t stop. I like your story. I always wait for another chapter.
Yeah, don’t stop. I LOVE your story. It’s really great and I would love to hear how it’s going on with the girls…
oh plz u have to post the NEXT chapter soon!!!! That was seriously funny that Bette and Tina were caught at it!!!
hey baby, i told you liked this chapter, and you didn’t dissapoint with the rest:) hahahaha, tina and bette got caught…thats funny. i hope it never happens to me…well anyway, i’m just saying, locks are good! and thankx for being realistic about the one issue we’re all always avoiding–these people are parents and i know that i often write their kids ‘away at a babysitter’ which makes me laugh that no one ever calls me a fool for doing it. anyhoo, great chapter, i’m thrilled you posted, and yeah…hehe…you’re the cutest. xo
HAHAHA! Bette & Tina caught red-handed by their own daughter. Funny and embarrassing as hell! Welcome back, sofa!!! I’m glad you’ve come around that dreaded Writer’s Block. And I don’t see myself getting tired of reading updates on this story anytime soon. I hope you’ll get on a roll again but if not, don’t worry and pressure yourself. We’re patient, we’ll just wait for your next post whenever it comes. Thank you!!! ;>
So happy to see you back, sofa! Very glad to hear you’re not thinking of stopping ’cause this just gets better every chapter. Love Angie’s gross reaction and look forward to Lottie’s birthday bash. Enjoy the spotlight and I may drop by for that hot chocolate…mmmm.
That was great, love B&T so hot!