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Summer Vacation. Chapter 41
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Helena rolled her eyes and feigned sickness noises, “Gross …”
But Alice was simply watching her as she strolled away, wandering through the house setting straight things left earlier in the day, Lottie’s boots by the staircase that led down to the kitchen, Li’s schoolbag slung over the same banister since she came and went like a ghost on a Friday afternoon, stopping only long enough to say hello before heading up the beach to spend the afternoon and evening with her friends, who had a bigger TV and a much bigger pool. She picked up a note from the dresser in the hallway; hastily scribbled by Wilson telling her he’d gone to see friends downtown and wouldn’t be back till tomorrow. Helena stood in the corridor and sighed, feeling the silence,
“What?” Alice stepped up close to her,
Helena turned and smiled, passing her the note, “Nothing, just that it’s rapidly becoming apparent that they both have their own lives and don’t really need me at all …”
Alice snuggled in close to her again, “Of course they need you …” she paused before continuing, “they still need you to pay for stuff and drive them places, sign their report cards …”
Helena slapped her on the butt, “Thanks!”
“House is quiet,” Alice noted, flatly, “no kids, no Peggy,” she looked up at Helena and grinned, “Lottie and Jo won’t be back from the play for a while?”
Helena cast her eyes downwards to the panting dog laid splayed out on the wooden floor, completely spent after running up and down the beach like a mad thing, stealing frisbees from small children and running after imaginary objects Alice pretended to throw, “What about him?” Helena asked, wondering if it was acceptable to have sex in front of someone else’s pet,
Alice dragged her off upstairs, leaving Banjo where he lay, “Don’t worry about him, I’m sure he’ll be fine, I’m sure he’s seen worse!”
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“Mmn …” Bette mumbled sleepily into Tina’s chest, “mmmmmmnnnn”
Tina giggled, equally out for the count, though the sun was going down which told her it must be getting late and the chill of the evening made the hairs on her exposed limbs stand up on end,
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Please don’t stop, I totally adore your story! I love that the characters have challenges but ultimately love one another and want whats best. I was crackin’ up at Angie and then Lottie catching Bette and Tina. :) LMAO! Great job!
It weird to a child to catch your parents.thanks goodness Bette didnt undress completely. Don’t stop this to much is happenion to leave us hanging
”very keen to get something posted before next week, when I’m up in the spotlight ” …Nice!… (btw, Where is the ‘spotlight’? – I’m clueless – never participated in it before.) Date?/Link?
Hey Sofa, great chapter, please do not stop I love this story and as long as write I will read no matter how long it takes u to post. Plus I spend two days reading this story from start just a few months ago and so don’t let my reading go waste by not continuing the story:)PPS
I have been a silent reader on this site for some time but, I really, really like this story. So glad to see you posting and hope that you will be able to post often. jinjur
Don’t stop this story, LOL at the bette and tina for getting caught by angie… :)
Hey all, thanks, I’m not stopping, no way … don’t get me wrong, it’s just after chronic writers block I always get super edgy/anxious before posting again … anyway … for Nanc, the link to the spotlight on the main discussions board is http://discussion.l-word.com/viewforum.php?f=73 I hope that works, it starts new each week on a Sunday :-D, I’ll reply to comments properly next post … and it won’t be weeks and weeks I promise! Sofa x
Sofa, I’m really glad your back with this story, I’v really missed it. I love reading about how the whole family interacts and can’t wait for Lotties’ party. Thank you. Md
What a pleasant surprise to find this chapter tonight! I still love this story Sofa and I’ll keep reading if you keep writing! B&T caught out by Angie…LMAO!
You know that I love this story. I can never get enough of it. I can picture Bette and Tina enjoying a little time to themselves and relaxing after the little excersie session. I can also see Angie’s reaction after catching her moms in the relaxation mode after the exercise session.
great to have u back Sofa. Looking forward to lots and lots of CONSTANT updates. lol with TONS AND TONS OF NC17’S!!!! B & T THAT IS!!!
I love the way you weave together an emotional maturity, psychological insight and beautiful love making. This is my favorite paragraph.”Bette cleared the plates from the table, leaving Tina to sit and think, the summer time was like a role reversal for them, with Tina the one working the most hours and Bette mostly off during the day, it gave them time to switch roles and remember that sitting so firmly in ideas of who they were based on jobs and money was the thing that almost killed them in the first place.”
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the b-day bash!
*runs by yelling ‘sofa is a hottttie!’ whoowhoo!*
Please don’t stop. I like your story. I always wait for another chapter.
Yeah, don’t stop. I LOVE your story. It’s really great and I would love to hear how it’s going on with the girls…
oh plz u have to post the NEXT chapter soon!!!! That was seriously funny that Bette and Tina were caught at it!!!
hey baby, i told you liked this chapter, and you didn’t dissapoint with the rest:) hahahaha, tina and bette got caught…thats funny. i hope it never happens to me…well anyway, i’m just saying, locks are good! and thankx for being realistic about the one issue we’re all always avoiding–these people are parents and i know that i often write their kids ‘away at a babysitter’ which makes me laugh that no one ever calls me a fool for doing it. anyhoo, great chapter, i’m thrilled you posted, and yeah…hehe…you’re the cutest. xo
HAHAHA! Bette & Tina caught red-handed by their own daughter. Funny and embarrassing as hell! Welcome back, sofa!!! I’m glad you’ve come around that dreaded Writer’s Block. And I don’t see myself getting tired of reading updates on this story anytime soon. I hope you’ll get on a roll again but if not, don’t worry and pressure yourself. We’re patient, we’ll just wait for your next post whenever it comes. Thank you!!! ;>
So happy to see you back, sofa! Very glad to hear you’re not thinking of stopping ’cause this just gets better every chapter. Love Angie’s gross reaction and look forward to Lottie’s birthday bash. Enjoy the spotlight and I may drop by for that hot chocolate…mmmm.
That was great, love B&T so hot!