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Summer Vacation. Chapter 42
“What are you looking at?” Jo screeched, reappearing with a couple of beers as she and Dana fought their way back from the bar,
“Nothing,” Lottie shook her head, accepting the beer, “thanks,”
They stood to the edge, finding it difficult to talk but not feeling drunk enough to get dancing yet, Alice buzzed around happily, thoroughly in her element as she and Shane caught up with everyone they knew,
“Does she *have* to be so damn popular,” Dana moaned, always a little envious of Alice’s ability to meet and greet,
Jo and Lottie smiled and took her by one arm each side, leading her away to a surprisingly vacant table,
A little while later and Alice flopped herself down in the empty seat, Shane virtually falling on top of her whilst trying to steady a tray of drinks,
“Slippery Nipples!” Alice exclaimed, “Bette just said no tequila …” she added, turning to Lottie who looked particularly dubious, “she didn’t say anything about these,”
Lottie groaned, but took it anyway, casting Jo a sideways glance,
Before they drank Alice stopped her, taking firm hold of her hand, “Now … you promise me you took your meds …?”
Lottie nodded,
“And you promise me you won’t drink ten of them …?”
Lottie nodded again,
“Right then,” Alice released her hand, “down the hatch!”
A couple more beers, a couple more slippery nipples and they were out on the dance floor, getting sweaty and crammed in by the front so they could wave and screech at Carmen who grew more amused as their leering and taunts grew more vocal, like a Richter scale of how many drinks they’d had. Lottie and Jo danced close for a while before Alice pulled Lottie away, declaring they didn’t bring them along so they could pretend to be Bette and Tina,
Pouting, Lottie started dancing with Alice just to shut her up, giving Alice a run for her money as she danced real close, grinding along with her and a couple of other twenty-something’s who were trying to get close enough on the off-chance Alice might be there working for the magazine,
“You’re Alice Pieszecki?” one of them called out, casting Lottie a dubious smile,
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Thankyou for keeping up with this story, I really enjoy it
Ah its fun when the girls don’t act their age and party. At least Bette didn’t call the police on them, heh.
ROFL what an enjoyable chapter,lol they are all drunk, HAHA helena and alice with chocolate frosting, hehe poor lottie… i’m sure sooner or later someone will catch her and jo. alice is soooooo funny,lol..bette sleeps thru anything, poor tina,lol.. great update!
love mama bear Tina!!! PPS!!!
Think of chocolate on Alice nipple and The reserve Helena saying I’m going to eat you up. and getting caught The older they are the cuter they become. Will Lottie see ALICES NIPPLES. while .Eating the cake?? Bette and Tina getting caught hOPE THE PARTY GOES well.
Hey sofa I know wat u mean about da feeling when u read all da posts n then realize that u have to wait. Great chapter now let da fun start with the party:)Post soon Please, thanks
baby, for you i will write any kind of story…vampires, clones, angie, you got it. i’ll read the rest of this current chapter when i’m done talking to youuuuuu;) xoxoxox
wow, sofa… What a treat with back-to-back posts! I don’t think I’ll be able to eat chocolate icing again without thinking of you… errr, your story… Fun chapter, always love the drunken gang. Poor Ang though, she’ll have plenty to discuss in her future therapy!! She’ll soon be hesitant to walk into a room without covering her eyes!
Jesus, you take a week’s vacation after waiting forever for someone to post the next chapter, which they do while you are gone (BRIEFLY!) and then you get left out of the shout outs. How soon they forget. Shuffles away with head bowed, sniffling.
Hello Sofa… ok to start off… think what you will but … hmmmmm… chocolate Icing and Helena doesn’t sound to bad… nor does vanilla or any other kind of icing… so yeah… more of that please… :P… I absolutely love this story… Everytime I read it… it feels like family… the way you weave the relationships is just magical… and just so special… I love absolutely Angie and how she wants Lottie to stay… that is just so precious… the bonding of their family is so strong that it hurts to think of them losing anyone of them… you are magical… and well I must say doing a kick ass job in the spotlight :P… hehe… lovely… love and hugs, JC
For funnyone – Lol, I missed you .. stop sniffling and get back here!!! Look, I mentioned you over on my Q&A spotlight thread and you haven’t even asked me a question yet, of that’s not love what is … pfft!!!!!
Yay!! I’m so glad this story is back…it’s one of the only ones I read ’cause I love it so much. Thanks for keeping up with it!! I always love the group of friends, & jo/lottie are super cute. Can’t wait to read about Lottie’s party!
That was fun. I really like Lottie. Looking 4 ward to the beach house. Thx & PPS.
I’ve enjoyed your stories for a long time now and am just commenting. I love your Lottie character. Anything you write is golden. Looking forward to more.
Sofa, this story is getting better and better with each chapter, please keep em comming. I feel like a littl kid waiting for the next one. Md
LOL! Tina is such a good Mom to all the girls. Poor Angie having to be woke up by the drunken Aunties, now she will have something to hold over them. I am so happy that I got to read this chapter before an emotionally taxing day ahead, thanks for the smile and laughs.
Bette and Tina are still the grown ups when it comes to the gang. Only Kit is more grown up than Bette and Tina. Loved how Angie is still freaking out about catching them enjoying one another. Hope that Lottie decides to stay longer than just the summer.
This is a story you can’t get enough of. But 4 pages…bonus, thankyou!!!
Great update! I love that…Bette sleeping through the whole swim in the middle of the night. Lucky that Tina heard them…they were all three sheets to the wind! I wouldn’t eat that cake either after seeing what Lottie did. LOL
That was funny and love it!