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Summer Vacation. Chapter 42
Behind them Jo and Shane danced together, both of them paying little attention to each other and a lot to the many beautiful barely dressed bodies that littered the floor, Shane couldn’t help but realise that if she were still single and Jo was too they’d make the perfect scouting partners,
“That’s right!” Alice replied, “Hi …”
The girls giggled nervously, a little older than Lottie but seemingly a lot less mature, Alice tried to be polite but looked to Lottie to guide her when it came to getting away,
Lottie smirked, watching Alice’s uncomfortableness in the spotlight, she stepped up to her side, slipping one arm around Alice’s waist,
“Everything okay baby?”
Alice choked in response, coughing hard to stop from laughing as she turned away,
Lottie played it further, fawning herself all over Alice’s side, her arms around her waist, she turned back to the two young things standing with their mouths agape, “Oh … hi there …”
They turned, faltering, and before Alice knew it they were gone, returning to the bar to watch from a safer distance,
Alice grinned at her, “You’re bad!”
Lottie chuckled, “I know …”
Spilling out time and they hung around downstage waiting for Carmen to finish up instructing the guys how to pack up her gear, she came down to meet them with a bag full of LP’s thrown over her shoulder, laughing at the state of her wife and their friends,
She kissed Shane on the cheek, “Hey baby … ew … you smell!”
Shane frowned, “I do not!”
But Carmen was right, they all had beer on their feet, sweaty flushed cheeks and that drunk smell that comes from dancing off alcohol. Carmen signalled to her friends up at the bar with her hand, asking that they call them a car.
Back at the house Alice flopped on the couch, Dana beside her as Shane went to the fridge and brought out beers for the rest of them, bypassing Dana who already looked as if she might pass out any minute,
“Times like this I really miss Bette and Tina being next door,” Shane mumbled, unable to get comfortable due to the heat indoors, “their pool’s the best for a night time swim,”
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Thankyou for keeping up with this story, I really enjoy it
Ah its fun when the girls don’t act their age and party. At least Bette didn’t call the police on them, heh.
ROFL what an enjoyable chapter,lol they are all drunk, HAHA helena and alice with chocolate frosting, hehe poor lottie… i’m sure sooner or later someone will catch her and jo. alice is soooooo funny,lol..bette sleeps thru anything, poor tina,lol.. great update!
love mama bear Tina!!! PPS!!!
Think of chocolate on Alice nipple and The reserve Helena saying I’m going to eat you up. and getting caught The older they are the cuter they become. Will Lottie see ALICES NIPPLES. while .Eating the cake?? Bette and Tina getting caught hOPE THE PARTY GOES well.
Hey sofa I know wat u mean about da feeling when u read all da posts n then realize that u have to wait. Great chapter now let da fun start with the party:)Post soon Please, thanks
baby, for you i will write any kind of story…vampires, clones, angie, you got it. i’ll read the rest of this current chapter when i’m done talking to youuuuuu;) xoxoxox
wow, sofa… What a treat with back-to-back posts! I don’t think I’ll be able to eat chocolate icing again without thinking of you… errr, your story… Fun chapter, always love the drunken gang. Poor Ang though, she’ll have plenty to discuss in her future therapy!! She’ll soon be hesitant to walk into a room without covering her eyes!
Jesus, you take a week’s vacation after waiting forever for someone to post the next chapter, which they do while you are gone (BRIEFLY!) and then you get left out of the shout outs. How soon they forget. Shuffles away with head bowed, sniffling.
Hello Sofa… ok to start off… think what you will but … hmmmmm… chocolate Icing and Helena doesn’t sound to bad… nor does vanilla or any other kind of icing… so yeah… more of that please… :P… I absolutely love this story… Everytime I read it… it feels like family… the way you weave the relationships is just magical… and just so special… I love absolutely Angie and how she wants Lottie to stay… that is just so precious… the bonding of their family is so strong that it hurts to think of them losing anyone of them… you are magical… and well I must say doing a kick ass job in the spotlight :P… hehe… lovely… love and hugs, JC
For funnyone – Lol, I missed you .. stop sniffling and get back here!!! Look, I mentioned you over on my Q&A spotlight thread and you haven’t even asked me a question yet, of that’s not love what is … pfft!!!!!
Yay!! I’m so glad this story is back…it’s one of the only ones I read ’cause I love it so much. Thanks for keeping up with it!! I always love the group of friends, & jo/lottie are super cute. Can’t wait to read about Lottie’s party!
That was fun. I really like Lottie. Looking 4 ward to the beach house. Thx & PPS.
I’ve enjoyed your stories for a long time now and am just commenting. I love your Lottie character. Anything you write is golden. Looking forward to more.
Sofa, this story is getting better and better with each chapter, please keep em comming. I feel like a littl kid waiting for the next one. Md
LOL! Tina is such a good Mom to all the girls. Poor Angie having to be woke up by the drunken Aunties, now she will have something to hold over them. I am so happy that I got to read this chapter before an emotionally taxing day ahead, thanks for the smile and laughs.
Bette and Tina are still the grown ups when it comes to the gang. Only Kit is more grown up than Bette and Tina. Loved how Angie is still freaking out about catching them enjoying one another. Hope that Lottie decides to stay longer than just the summer.
This is a story you can’t get enough of. But 4 pages…bonus, thankyou!!!
Great update! I love that…Bette sleeping through the whole swim in the middle of the night. Lucky that Tina heard them…they were all three sheets to the wind! I wouldn’t eat that cake either after seeing what Lottie did. LOL
That was funny and love it!