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Summer Vacation. Chapter 5
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Previously:
Tina grinned, ready to say more but was stopped by the sound of Angie’s bare feet running towards them. She threw herself on Lottie as Lottie hugged her tight.
“Can you read me a story?” she asked, in her best little-girl voice, knowing she hadn’t had stories read to her for a couple of years now.
Lottie smiled, “Another time Angie, It’s late and I’d better be going” she said, reaching in to her pocket and passing Tina her car keys.
“Aren’t you going to call a cab?” Tina asked, confused.
“Well actually,” Lottie answered, with a pause “I promised your friend Alice I’d go back and have a drink with her.”
Chapter Five.
Tina lay stretched out on one of the pool chairs in the mid morning sun watching Angie and her friend as they swam in the pool. Every now and then she eyed the phone laid beside her, waiting for Bette to wake up and call. She expected her to wake early, she knew after the way they left things the night before Bette would have had a restless and unfulfilled sleep …
By the time she’d got done putting an over-tired Angelica to bed Bette had already begun to get ready for her drinks meeting with the people from MOMA, putting their afternoon activities on hold until later. By the time they’d let Bette leave, several hours and several martini’s later, Tina was comforting Angelica in their bed after she threw up all the sugar and cake which Kit had fed her. Bette made sympathetic noises down the phone as it wasn’t the first time Kits need-to-feed had put the kibosh on their adult entertainment.
Tina sighed, the ringing of the phone disrupting her thoughts.
“Hello?” she said, knowing full well who it was
“Morning baby,” replied a sleepy Bette, “how is she?”
“Fine,” answered Tina, “like you wouldn’t even know” she added, watching Angelica as she leapt around the pool splashing her friend. “Sorry we didn’t get to finish what we started yesterday babe” she continued, wanting to ensure Bette knew just how much she’d appreciated the gesture.
“There’ll be another time T,” Bette assured.
“I’m counting on it.” said Tina, “although next time I’ll make better sure there wont be any interruptions.” she added, not in a hurry to go through the embarrassment of that again.
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Maybe an unknown sister
your still killing me… and if you left any clues … well i missed them… unles lottie was talking with melvin while bette was talking to tina on her cell… ok waiting for the next chapter
I think maybe Bette had a child and the father raised her, I dont believe that Melvin knows about it. Lottie is just trying to find out about her other parent. It happens all the time when the child get older. thanks
wow u’ve got me going on this one…all signs makethis Bette’s daughter BUT i have a feeling not!!!! Is Lottie’s dad, Bette’s brother through their mother, Maxine…or is Lottie Bette’s half-sister through Maxine and this mysterious dad????? I gotta know soon, pleaszzzzzzzzzzz
Give the girl a car. Everyone in LA has a car. She can affor a hotel for the summer, but no car, no realistic. Thanks for sharing!
Maybe Tina feels like Lottie is trying to take her place somehow. I’m definitely sucked in, so PPS!
You are driving your readers…me included…crazy trying to figure out how Lottie might be related to Bette. I for one give up and will just wait until you tell us.
i’m getting really worried about that lottie person, she’s bothering me a little though i don’t think she’s evil or anything but she’s seriously disturbed, sort of LOL…i hope bette gets home soon
I love this story! Bette needs to come home before Tina loses it. If that is Bette’s daughter then will this put a riff in their relationship? I mean Bette had all these years to tell Tina…and I remember you had Kit say something about Bette going to Paris when she was 19 and Melvin didn’t know where she was….oh the suspense I love it!
Who really is Lottie!
Intriguing. Can wait to see what the relationship is between Bette and Lottie. Hope this info is coming soon.
cant wait for there more and bette/lottie to meet where we can see where it leads to…p.p.s.
I feel like Tina. Who is this Lottie person? She can’t be Bette’s daughter, can she? Has Lottie patterned her life to follow Bette’s. You really have us guessing. Keep Posting.
Gotta tell you, I love this story, and the storyline, and the whole mystery around who Lottie is, etc, but honestly, what I love the most about this story (and maybe your writing in general as i hope to find out with more stories of yours) is the way you portray Bette and Tina’s relationship. There are a lot of amazing authors on this site and a lot of them have done a fantastic job in describing the life-long relationship that B&T indeed have in our favorite fanfic land, but there is something very special about your B&T… They are so “together”, and real life-partners at so many levels. I mean, the very fact that you start this story with them both on opposite sides of the country and still make them appear closer and more in love than ever is simply amazing, and so addictive may I add! I really love your style and some the tiny details you integrate here and there… like this feeling of Bette that Tina gets everytime she enters one of Bette’s galleries… Tiny detail, but oh so meaningful! Thanks, and please post soon!
damn whooooooo is Lottie?????????????????????????????