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Sun Salutations: Chapter 18
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When the two made it back to Tina’s, a huge vase of tall, bright sunflowers patiently waited beside the front door. “*****.*****.*****” Tina thought. “*****.” This is all I need she told herself. “*****.” Tina shunned flowers like vampires shun the light of day. To her they just yelled expectation and promise. And those were dirty words as far as Tina was concerned. That is, until Bette Porter came along. The exception for flowers was of course, if they were given in the spirit of true friendship or love. Those acts were very few and far between. Alternatively, if they were flowers that she, herself planted or even purchased, then Tina adored the perfect creations more than anything. And now with her beautiful Bette trekking up the few steps right behind her, she didn’t want any misunderstandings or additional conversations to be had. All she wanted to do was to get in the house and make passionate love to the woman who had her on the verge of a whopping ***** all day long. She could taste Bette’s incredible sweetness on the tip of her tongue and was going insane from desire. “*****.” Tina thought again. The very sight of the statuesque arrangement made the former ladies lady stumble backwards slightly.
When Bette’s eyes spotted the humungous arrangement, she said, “Whoa. Ode to a sunflower huh baby?”
Tina smiled. At least her girlfriend was taking this lightly. Well, initially anyway. She only hoped it would continue. “Would you like me to read the card for you T?” Bette asked. Tina couldn’t help but smile at this. She liked when Bette took charge. Although, this request was surprisingly subtle for Bette. “Yes, would you please?” Tina replied. The curious woman removed the card from the clear, plastic pitchfork stuck amidst the tall flowers and opened it.
Tina, How about another round of cranberry juice? My offer still stands. Call me anytime, day or night. SmoochesCatherine.
Bette laughed when she finished reading. Smooches? What is she?
“Spoiled.” Tina replied flatly.
“Well, I think I’m going to take a shower baby.” Bette smiled. “Where are you going to put these?”
“I’m not keeping them.” Tina quickly replied. “Any flowers that I’ve received do not enter my house and are given away. So, how about we take them to work and place them on the front desk in the lobby?”
“Sounds great baby.” Bette smiled, relieved that Tina wasn’t keeping the breathtaking arrangement. “That way everyone at the gym will get to enjoy them. What a wonderful welcome to those entering the front door.” Bette offered, smiling.
Tina felt lighter now since her well behaved woman didn’t freak out. But she still expected a lecture or something, she just didn’t know what. The tired and relieved yoga guru entered her house after her girlfriend and gently closed the door behind them. She returned her thoughts to what she wanted to do to Bette. I can’t wait to plunge my tongue into her sweet pu
“Tina?”
“*****.*****.*****.” Here we go. Here we ***** goThe frustrated blonde thought. “Yes beautiful?” Tina sweetly replied.
“May I speak to you for a minute? We need to reach an understanding.” Upon hearing these words, Tina closed her eyes briefly, tried to collect and compose herself, quietly recited a mantra for calmness and walked over to Bette. Her heart was in the pit of her stomach. Bette held Tina’s stare for a few minutes before speaking. “Tina, if I happen to give you flowers, will you promise to let them enter your home and not donate them to a good cause?”
“Of course Bette.” Tina sighed.
“Good. Thank you.” Bette replied through a crooked grin and headed for the shower.
“T?” Bette turned around again to face the woman who was now at her wit’s end.
“Yeah babe?” Tina asked, wondering when this would end.
“It seems that you’re a little tense. Why don’t you just relax for a little while. Would you like me to get you something to drink? I think we have cranberry juice.” Bette laughed and skedaddled to the shower.
Tina shook her head and chuckled softly to herself. “God, I love that woman.” she said aloud, to no one.
TBC
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Yay, the perfect day for B&T!! They definitely deserve it. I’m so glad that they’re both so comfortable and trusting with each other. I love your teasing interactions with them greentea. Thank you!
hey greentea . i simply adore this story . they way in which u have these two evolving (emotionally, spiritually, and sexually) is priceless. what a talent you possess . maybe you should forward this to IC – the show could surely use this level of creativity and depth. From one mind seeker to another . have a great day and i am holding my breath until you unleash your next chapter!
Your writing is so good that it makes me want to take up Yoga, breathe properly, sit up straighter, quit swearing (that could be a tough one:) But there is no way I’ll give up my Captain Crunch! I remember when I was a kid, I’d go grocery shopping with my Dad and the first thing in the basket was Captain Crunch. Thirty years later, yep, still love the Captain!
Oh ya, I’m absolutely taken with this story.
Do you sleep ? I ask merely because you write in such depth and in such a cohesive cathartic way, I imagine it must take you hours, ….. or have you mastered running and writing ! I judge you against my slow writing speed I am sure.
But there is a rich element to your story I cant quite put my finger on yet. You honour us with your fantastic prose, I do thank you. It is a very great pleasure to read your work.
Perfect as usual.. everything about this story and your writing is just wonderful. You are so talented. Thank you for making my night a little bit brighter :) Can’t wait for more
Helena, Hel, Headache… you can see how truly LOVED she is!
Poor woman. I decided I can feel sorry for her as long as she keeps her distance from Bette ~.^
These Bette and Tina should give lectures at the “Reprise” series about how to maintain a healthy relationship *lol* Not that I don’t love the endless drama, but it’s good to breathe sometimes without feeling like your heart sinking. Thank God in this fic they seem to know ALL about good breathing techniques =P
That was some huge step they took there, with the not-freaking-out-about-Helena or anyone else. Kudos! It’s really comforting to see them making so much progress. In fact, it feels so good right now that I can’t help but wonder what kind of disaster awaits them in NYC…
I think stories like yours have had a good impact on my life. I don’t know, sometimes I think that in the past if I could change something about me I’d want to be “cooler”, you know.. and now I catch myself just trying to be “kinder”… like Tina and Tara… or maybe I’m just finally growing up =D
I definitely picked up on the “word thingee” thingee. So much that when I’m not paying attention and I let it slip people think I’m insane. Though I consider it more like “quirky” =P
I am totally in awe of you. Your writing is so eloquent. Loving the way you put the “messy” stuff out there and then had them each react in a positive manner. They have both looked, listened, lived and learned to love each other better. They have definately met the challenge of becoming a team – depending on each other and working quite well together. I am once again having to remind myself to breathe while inhaling your story. More please.
I was saddened when I hit the “next post” to see that I have read all I could read. All I can say is “Wow!”
Ahh love B&T, they are so cute!
Thank you for such a long post. I go into withdrawal if I don’t get my Sun Salutations fix. You’re versions of Bette & Tina are fantastic and the story is adorable. Please post again soon!
This Bette has great taste. From Captain Crunch to spring rolls the woman can choose my menu anytime. Yummy. The ladies made it through a whole date with no arguments. I’m not surprised Tina does not want Bette to travel alone to NYC, but I was shocked that Bette was open to the idea. Thanks for the late night read.
This Bette has great taste. From Captain Crunch to spring rolls the woman can choose my menu anytime. Yummy. The ladies made it through a whole date with no arguments. I’m not surprised Tina does not want Bette to travel alone to NYC, but I was shocked that Bette was open to the idea. Thanks for the late night read.
abs of steel – sounds like a rated XXX I may have in my collection.
“Your body will thank you.” Tina added.
“Will your body thank me too?” Bette asked seductively.
“It already does baby.” Tina retorted without missing a beat. “As a matter of fact, it’s thanking you as we speak, and I can’t wait for you to receive my overflowing gratitude. It flows abundantly you know.”
“Yes baby, I do know.” They smiled at each other, each aware of their own rising heat.
Yes Lawdddddddd ~ my temperature was rising too just from this little exchange ~ quite seductive!!
Bette laughed loudly because she knew if Tina had just a smidgen of room available, she would cop a yoga pose faster than anyone could chant ‘Om’.
Ohhhhhhhhhh, my sides are aching ~ too funny.
She noticed Tina’s use of the word ‘we’…..Hearing that prompted her to increase the voltage of her existing 10k watt smile.
Hasn’t anyone learned by now that her smile will blind you?
Each one more electric than the last, yet all were super-charged and full of power.
Sounds like you’re describing Bette’s smile again instead of an erect nipple…LOL
…..the web of Tina
said the spider to the fly.
“You see baby, I’m slick …and juicy…and sticky…and so very hot.”….. Have you ever been like that before Bette?”….. “Oh, strike that question because I’m sure you haven’t.
Mofo P-R-I-C-E-L-E-S-S!!! I just knew Tina was going to say have!! Good one GTea; this was one I will always remember.
a quiet, low-speaking waiter with too much eye contact… “I-Spy” the waiter…
ROFLMAO!!
Page 4, 1st paragraph…..caused me to run sit right in front of my air conditioner.
As an aside ~ snQQpy – Yup, you called the return of Bette to art a while back. And perhaps you need to join her with your vibrant use of color in your glowing feedback. I see you’re displaying your talent here. (smile) Loving it. I’m happy you appreciated those warped lines in the story. I can tell you like to laugh like I do. How’d it go with your Captain Crunch? Did it make you giddy? If not, we can always go back to peaches! Thank you for continuing to read and comment. Surely appreciate it.
Bette doing art for the CAC is not what I had in mind…LOL. I have to use these vibrant colors to match Bette’s smile. CapCrunch ~ I just got a Pekingese who apparently likes it too +_+ ~ neither one of us were giddy though.
I am also an addict of your story. It is one of my fav’s!
Lead. pipe cinch.
How does that grab you, baby?
SnQQpy: You gonna get theHTML turned off, and then we gonna be reading this whole site in rich text.
Girl!
Damn.
I’m on page 3. Phil & Co. are chanting in the background.
Tina is whispering in Bette’s ear: “Sticky…so hot..”
…Damn…
What a fantastic update. It was so nice to finally have those two actually talking and listening to each other. Being one step ahead of each other. Just when you thought here we go again, not. Love it, Bette ask to go see Helena in N.Y. does Tina mind, Tina asks can she go. That’s exactly how you do it. Love that Bette is driving Tina right too the edge and then reels her back in, teasing all the time. Way to go.
Another great chapter greentea always puts a smile on my face when i see you have posted!!!!!!
so happy u r back!! still luv it!! lets c if Tina joins B in the shower???????
“Her heart beat loudly throughout her body, and the shocked sun goddess wanted to ask anyone remotely nearby to see how beautiful and alive her Bette was.”
That’s it – gotta detour to I-Tunes to download ‘Sun Goddess’ as a soundtrack for the rest of this reading session.
Which version…hummmmmmmmmmm
oops. i hit the button when i wasnt done. to much to drink tonight, sorry.
“bette was starting to drift into oblivion and needed to end this trip before it began if she wanted to maintain her dignity in a restaurant she loved.” i’ll take mine togo. “im really pickyh about certain things.” really. whoda thunk.
“an ever so slight whimper escaped the aroused and breathless woman as she planted her elbow on the table in front of her and allowed her fingers to support her wobbly head. ” thats the only thing wobbling. my whole body is. and im by myself. heehee “fuck. tina.” please.
“and you know who much i enjoy eating.” oh my god. there is a god, who loves me and wants me to be happy.
“i never thought i’d have another perfect day evedr agian and here it is.: thats cuz you are writng this. honey, you are good.
smooches yuck
im giddy and your the reason. im so feeling ya. can you feel it.
greenie i love you. really i do. i hate repeating myself or others but dayum girl how good are you.
“im so glad i tried you.” do i hear a witness. Yes, i hear it.
“so she said beside bette like a bump on a log tyring with all her might to suppress her desire to scream in elation.” well i was screaming in joyous release. heehee
“tina was having a difficult time staying seated. she ws bursting with childlike eagerness…i need to calm down for a second.” only a second. it takes me lots longer.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!So EFFIN gooooood!! I was doin a happy dance after every page seeing that I still had 5 or 4 or 3 more to read. What a fantabulous way to start the day.:-D
I gotta go and calm down and when i come back I got tons of comments to the storys content. Yay! lol
I drug this all the hell out because I wasn’t breathing, because I was waiting for all hell to break loose at various points, and because I didn’t want it to end. Thank you for their perfect drama-free day.
Tina is so simple, so open, so direct. I love her. (“Why don’t you marry her then?” as my baby niece would taunt me.)
Maybe I will. In a parallel fanfic universe, after we get back from New York and visiting Helena.
Bitch better not touch Bette while they’re there. She’ll draw back a nub…
First of all..i heart you now and forever Greenie..u said the magic word. Thats it…you got me wrapped now. And no the magic word is not (yellow) peach ;-)…the magic word is peanut sauce. Im known to always talk bout food in this my comments if I have the chance..lol and you are giving me plenty of that..*hehe* Seriously tho..peanut sauce is THE most orgasmic saucy treat ever(*LOL*)and with pickin that you made me a)happy and b)crave some (peanut sauce that is *haha*). I cannot believe that Tina didnt try this before…is she crazyyyyyy?How can you be missing out like that? Well…Bette shows her whats good..;-)
Since we are on food..Im not hating on any other peaches than yellow ones. Well to be honest, I AM hating and I feel no shame. Thats like people tellin me peaches and nectarines are the same…hell they are frikkin NOT. *lol*
Btw..I will be happily waiting for the return on the peach in ya story..fire away missy.
Anyways, absolutely great chappy. They talked, they were happily spending time with eachother,enjoying their presence of everyday life, revelling seein happiness in what the other did. It felt right and appropriate to see them together that way…thanks. :-D
““It already does baby.” Tina retorted without missing a beat. “As a matter of fact, it’s thanking you as we speak, and I can’t wait for you to receive my overflowing gratitude. It flows abundantly you know.””–LMAO!I love their verbal rallies back and forth trying to outwit eachother with words and of course the innuendos in it…too funny.
Oh and your knack for details is killin me..”“Can I get you ladies anything else?” a quiet, low-speaking waiter with too much eye contact queried.”–I can soo picture exactly how he appraoched and looked at them. Greatness..btw, lol @ ‘I-Spy’.
Their control games are crazy, they drive even the most innocent hearted (like me..LOL) out of their mind Your Tina is the bestest..as Ive said before. She is just so daring and naughty and goes for her prey(in this case Bette) and she loves the mindfuck…funny shit. Oh and she definitely knows how to go for the reaction she desires ““You see baby, I’m slick …and juicy…and sticky…and so very hot.”–HOT DAMN!!!!!!*gasps*
And then Bette usually turns it right round on her at another point. Reverses the role and takes back her control to lay it right smack on Tina…like she does in the end. They just got this back and forth down so well..excellent fit.
Oh and Greenie..”All of a sudden, I’m feeling very hungry again T…. and you know how much I enjoy eating.”—See, Bette enjoys eating too. Tho she is refering to different kind of eat here..still, she luvs her food. LOL So bare with me and my troubles..*hehe* winks…
The last bit with those sunflowers had me in stitches..of slight panic and lost of laughter. “Smooches? What is she?”—LMFAO! smooches *hahahaha* shakes head…
““It seems that you’re a little tense. Why don’t you just relax for a little while. Would you like me to get you something to drink? I think we have cranberry juice.” –No matter what, Bette definitely had the last word. Sooo feisty!! Mmmmmmm…..
Tina, its time to whip out the peach now…*LOL*
Thanks for another great reading Greenie…goodness i LUVED it.
6 pages! – I love you!
Not reading this in the bath – I would get wrinkly!
Great this lets me put off doing some real work a bit longer – off to get a fresh coffee & then reading it
The beautiful images you conjure up are deliciously addictive.
Well my coffee was forgotten & went cold somewhere in page 2. Tin is wicked turning Bette on like that while shes trying to enjoy her meal:-)
& there i was anticipating Helena getting B drunk & seducing her in NY – until you had Tina come along. I know its just kinky isn’t it!
LOL
Thanks for the update, I was not disappointed.
aaaahhhhh, I am enjoying their progress. The ability to communicate with your partner is essential.
I am feeling like you are setting me up for the 1, 2 punch. First, NY and Helena then LA and Carmen or Catherine, hell pick one.
I loved the way that you have them supporting, encouraging, and now integrating (at some level) themselves into each others passions.
I love Bette as an artist.
I hope they get a little more momentum behind their open and honest communication, before they (or just Bette, who knows something may come up keeping Tina in LA) heads to NY to see Helena.
Looking forward to the next installment.
GT sorry for my neglect but sometimes work does take over all my time, if I didn’t need to eat and sleep I’d work through that time as well! I really need to get better balance…maybe your ‘sun goddess’ could give me some pointers?? :)
Anyway, I’m loving the story. I love this stage of their relationship. I feel happy for Bette that she is once again confident and secure in herself and I’m happy that Tina has such a positive effect on her. But what I love most of all is both their confidence in their love for each other. Sudden? Yeah, but it’s not about the quantity of time you spend together before you fall in-love, it’s the quality. And they both gave to the other that much need boost of unconditonal faith, acceptance, love, forgiveness and that list can run on. (Though I know B still has her trust issues – she’ll work it out)
But what makes them even cuter is that neither is sure of themself, but they’re so sure of the other. So, they’re like 2 poor puppies when left to their own devices and as soon as they’re back together again it’s like “YAY!”
Hope all’s well and keep the balance you have between them… Tina is the agressor but Bette still rules!
Greens, I love how these two have verbal foreplay and try to one up each other. When they click they are so damn good together. This chapter was sexy and funny yet it continued to cover their relationship issues/fears. Well done! I’m off to find a spring roll and of course a peach for dessert.
another first down! LOL. You never disappoint me green. I am so tired but I had to read your chapter before going to bed. thanks sweety. I think the trip to NY will be very interesting. hmmmm. as always I look forward to the next installment of your highly addictive story.
A person never feels robbed when they read one of your chapters..you give them to us often and they are of such length that we don’t tend to whine about that…quite refreshing actually…6 whole wonderful pages of story!!!!! more pls..
first! yeah! brb!
i cant tell u how hopelessly addicted i am to your fantastic story! cant wait for the next one *sly wink* LOL keep up the great writing!
Ahhhh greentea thank you for the football reference. It put a smile on my face. I have enjoyed every chapter of your story and this one was no different. Please continue the wonderful writing.
hey greentea love your Vince quote. i am a big packer fan lol. love your story B&T are so great together and so fun
Have you been laid and paid yet? …for this amazing collection of words??? ““I’m more than wet for this woman”…“You see baby, I’m slick …and juicy…and sticky…and so very hot.”” …..I certainly hope so..you REALLY deserve to be well cared for in every way…Take care Beautiful….
It’s so refreshing to see an entire chapter dedicated to love and happiness . .with no drama. Thank you! Please post again soon, I love this story!
Hey Greentea, the chemistry of Bette and Tina just flows from page to page hell dare i say it they have more chemistry than the Chemical Elements that is the Periodic Table…lol…
Loved the teasing, Tina breaking out to be a rebel for a little while with the sauce, Bette’s abs of steel, the list goes on and on how do you come up with this stuff? its amazing it really is….and of course the peaches, we must never forget about them, OMG, I really, really love this story.
Thank you.
Very well dome GT, I agree with Chasmenow this chapter covered all of the bases and was Sooooooooo well done, please continue. I am so proud of how B&T handles themselves here.
Ok Im forever late but i remembered that i had to add something else…
I just wanted to say that u mentioning the peanut sauce is not the only reason i heart you..i would do it anyways. BUT the peanutsauce is just the icing on the cake of my hearting you. Yes, Im that easy. LOL
On another tip…this bit made me cringe:
““Your form is wonderful Bette. I would like you to concentrate on sitting up straight though. It’ll help you breathe better and allow for more efficient circulation within your body.”—why?? cause a certain someone will forever be on my case about my sitting pose too and instead of tellin me…randomly either poke or ram their finger into my back, right on my spine to make me sit up straight. Can I just say that i find it FRIKKIN annoying! LOL So dont try that method…ever *haha*
Thank you for a beautiful update greenie…just been doing some catching up on your story here…sorry for the lack of commenting on the last couple of posts…but I have been busy…can´t wait to read more and do post soon…are we in for an NC-17 next???