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Sun Salutations: Chapter 25
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Tina’s expression remained unchanged. “Let’s get out of here.”
Just like so many times before, Tina Kennard had spoken. That’s itthe end of the conversation. Do not pass go. Unless of course you don’t value your life.
“Yeah, let’s go.” Carmen sighed. Thoughts of her newly acquired anger management strategies filled her mind. She was silently practicing one of them and to her surprise, it worked. The two attractive women were silent most of the short, rainy walk back to the resort.
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Bette’s nap nearly lasted the entire afternoon. As she walked along the damp asphalt path through the marvelous landscape, her doubting eyes saw Tina and Carmen stroll by hand-in-hand. Her stomach dropped to her feet and she toppled backwards a few steps, almost losing her balance. Unable to move, a dazed Bette remained planted with imaginary roots firmly securing her in place. Her heart raced and its strong unpredictable beat flung her into pandemonium.
The rain had taken another break from the all-day dousing while Tina attended a sunset yoga class on the beach. She remained there long after her class was over and transformed into a series of poses in an effort to increase her degree of mindfulness. She stood completely still with eyes closed, hands extended to the sky and her right foot placed at the top of her left inner thigh.
The tree pose was one of Tina’s favorites to easily attain a sense of balance and become one with herself & all that surrounded her. Gradually increasing her upward stretch, Tina mentally dug her foot into the earth in an attempt to become physically grounded like the tree she modeled. The mental grounding was a little harder to achieve. The focused blonde was startled by warm hands settling on her narrow hips.
“I don’t want to see you Bette” the uprooted yogi defiantly stated.
“I know you don’t T. I wouldn’t want to see me either if I were you. That’s why I’m behind you. I want to see you though.” the composed voice whispered. Bette wasn’t aware of the length of time she had remained on the path after seeing Tina & Carmen walking, but she tried with everything she had to get herself together.
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i’m at work, so i’m reading really fast, but i’ll comment for real when i get back home and read it again really slow to enjoy every word and every turn
wow, every time you write it keeps getting better…although that Carmen needs to get a life…and I like seeing Tina make Bette grovel..it’s good for her, although Tina could use a little as well…another full chapter..sigh!!! more pls I’m still hungry
loved it…be back later LOL
*sighs* Could you have made me any happier posting this now? Clear answer: NO! This chapter made me soo happy and confused and unsettled and settled..damn. The torn Tina, the relentless Bette..the imagery and Bettes guts. The zanyness as always. *beams smiling* Just all the good stuff.Fuckin excellent you..;-)Oh and of course we are cool…I might even go back to write a dissertation but I cant have that word mentioned to me right now without irkin me out..lolSo Ill be back!! :-D
wow, another amazing chappy, Green. The emotions of these two from page to page leaves me dizzy and confused as hell. The pain of heartbreak, the courage to start to forgive, the dreaded ex that wants to be there, only to want to get into pants. Whew. poor B&T. i can only wait for them to truly find their way back to each other.
damn. you’re good.
And just when I was preparing for the 12 step program for Sun Salutations Junkies, lol…You come and give me my fix. I’m beginning to raise my expectations but you consistently raise your level of imagination and talent. Thank you and Congratulations on the award!
I was near death with this post I really think your trying to kill me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and the you bring me back to life at the end thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My god, my response was audible as I read the last line – it simply escaped from my lips. Thankful that they’ve isolated me at work from the rest, otherwise, I don’t know what they’d think. You’re driving, eh? We could get a car – meet me at the W – gin, it is…seriously, green, this story is so fabulous, so over the top, so you? I really try to read your posts slowly to cut back on the disappointment when I reach the end. It doesn’t work! Ah, but the smile on my face does always last for quite some time! Thanks…awesome!
Wow! I just realized I could have said ditto to luvrgirl’s comment and saved you the reading……..NOT! lol
This story just keeps getting better! My only complaint is that you don’t post more often! Thanks for continuing this and I look forward to your next chapter.
Excellent chapter Gtea well worth waiting for. I wish Bette would come by my place an apologize. If Carmen is watching from her balcony I hope she puts her anger management class to good use and doesn’t jump off.
Your story is so worth the wait. Thanks so much for posting…the end of this chapter was fuckin hot! It’s know wonder u got an award…Congradulation u deserve it. Post soon please.
Greentea, what do I have to say to you this time? Well let’s start with thank you for the gift of your posting. I am enjoying our journey (even when you have me feeling unsettled). I need to say that I am starting to take it personal that you have been laughing at me in the last few comments. I am considering witholding my thoughts from you as a result – *grimacing at you* Congratulations!!!! on the Best Sex Award it was well deserved. I start getting that tingling sensation when I see the NC-17 rating. I may become liberal with my vaginal gifts where you’re concerned. Don’t worry my girlfriend isn’t looking, let’s have some fun (tee hee). On with my comments for this installment. Well, Carmen is putting her best foot forward and I can’t blame her at all. Tina is a prized peach. However, Carmen can still work on speaking-up where Tina is concerned. Bette is gutsy and I can appreciate that. She is going after what she wants and using everything in her toolkit to achieve the desired result. Fortunately for her, she has love on her side. Tina and Bette have a lot to work on, I know. I don’t want to get to ‘settled’ because this could simply be a sexual encounter and they can get their rocks off and still not resolve their relationship woes. I am interested to see what you have in store next for us. Until the next time……….
GT, what a romantic you are – your words are intense – I loved it. Keep writing and post soon. Your gf is a lucky lady.
Almost forgot GT, congratulations on the BEST SEX AWARD! No one close to you in that department in my opinion. Thanks for sharing with the rest of us.
Gods, I love your story! Please keep writing – I can’t get enough of these characters they way you present them. Plus your writing is soooo hot!!!
I am glad that Tina has finally come back to her mind. Yes Bette was wrong and stupid, but you don’t cut off your nose to spite your face. Bette did track her down and appologise. Most time just being right is not worth other things that you might loose. Right can not keep you warm at night, and comfort you. Carmen really needs to work on getting a life, because she still wants Tina to be more than a friend and does not value herself. If you doon’t know or reconize your worth, than no one else will. Your story is worth waiting for GT and you are doing a great job. Please hurry back and post the next chapter.
Wow Greentea, first congrates if I was a judge you would have gotten my first and last vote. Well deserved and earned today’s additions reminds us all what an awesome storyteller you are. Man what conviction you have given them both, Tina for not sleeping with Carmen when she was practically throwing herself at Tina and Bette for not letting what appears to be a T&C connection to interfere with what her first priority is and that’s Tina. Nicely done. Thanks
wow tea…wait let me check..ooo there it goes…my heart it almost stopped beatin thru this story!!! it was that good!! i said goddamn what a rush!! haha ill agree with honda…im still hungry too ;-)
Hey Green!! First of all CONGRATS on the award if they would have let us vote you would have had mine first! Another wonderful chapter as always keep them coming!!I can’t get through my week without my fix of greentea!!!
Congratulations on the award, great stuff!…I have so missed my Sun Salutations fix..Now are our lovely ladies in a “drama neutral zone” at the moment and are they each going to get one of “3 things you want to do before you die” wink, wink, must be something in my eye, lol…..sorry, I know I keep on saying it but I really, really love this story. Thank you for writing it.
hey greetea! in case you’ve ever wondered why I haven’t commented in sooooo long, well, it’s because I had managed to successfully “wean” myself from the incredibly addictive, alluring and often (in my case)life-sucking powers of FF. That is up until I was lulled in a trance-like state back into your stories seductive clutches. Now no thanks to you, and your evil FF writing cohorts, I’m once again held captive, a prisoner–a pathetic FF whore!!!
I don’t know whether to thank you or to kill you!
angel, ill be back. have to go and have my assed kicked by my trainer. *sigh* so looking forward to it. fist pump and saying “yes”bluesf – baby glad to see you and hear that humor of yours. fergz will be getting my order later, baby, cosmos for you????j- *waves*sweeite, cant wait to comment.
Congratulations on the award – well done – very much deserved. The inhaler was no more, but if I very nearly had to get it out again! You Bad girl!!
Wow. I’m in complete friggin’ awe at how one of your chapters can have me all sad and weepy, then hopeful and drooling…ONE CHAPTER! Of course…all of them have been great, so I shouldn’t be surprised. :) “…the Goddess wrote…and it was good…”
p.s. Good luck with the marathon stuff!
ok, the bloody work is over and i can finally comment…well, first i was like, oh no, then i was like, oh poor bette, then i was again like, oh no, then i was like, f***ing carmen, and finally i was like, yes, yes, don’t stop…you have a talent for endings and beginnings and middles and everything in between..seriously, doesn’t matter if it’s drama, or hot sex, or more drama or just fun – everything is so exquisite (crap, i can’t spell or express my feelings today), anyway, after several agonizing chapters i finally don’t have to run around, or find a strong drink, or hit my head on anything when reading this wonderful chapter, i’m actually breathing, very settled, drinking cold mix of green tea and a rapsberry, eating dark chocolate, and enjoying your story…and babe, CONGRATULATIONS on the Best Sex Award…i had no doubts in my shallow mind that you’ll get it, i’m still under that erotic spell
Congrats on your very well deserved award and another fine chapter!
Yes this makes me happy, thanks for another wonderful chapter! I’m practicing Hatha and look forward to learning more, going deeper, not just performing the poses. I think you do an excellent job of incorporating the physical and spiritual side of yoga. Plus it’s a hot story! Great work…
Hey Congratulations on your award your very great writer you deserved that Thanks!!
i went back on site to check new stories and i saw that your chapter had 666 views, so i had to go i again and change that number…so i read the chapter one more time, and it’s as great…ok, i’m turning into a stalker..sorry
i just finished reading all of your other chapters on this story and all i can say is WOW! this story and you are awesome. More Soon Please!
Hey GT…congrats on the award. Great chapter!
If I knew where you lived I would swing by often! Time after time you do this to me…yank out my heart only to put it back gently…ohhh I felt for Bette! I’m so happy she’s not a quitter or some prideful (word?) b-tch…well she is a stalker but if you can’t stalk your one true love who the hell can you stalk? You are allowed to stalk me..use your best judgement ;]I would love to have dinner with you this week but with the holiday lets push it back to Thursday, December 1st, meet me at the Melting Pot, if we get there early they may give us the both with the “privacy” curtain…you know you’ld love that…Have a great week babe! Gobble Gobble…..Next time tell me something personal, like where you live…I don’t need to know your name…yet…kisses
Yeap-I’m going to comment even though all has been stated. Simply unbelieveable; you are truly talented. The way inwhich you deliver a thought, a behavior, an action is tremendous. This story has such insight, such depth. I simply love it. I can’t (but i obviously have to) wait for your next chapter.
Well well miss Greenie….you made me smile big time with these two updates. Amazing……..your writing is so fantastic and it keeps getting better and better. Just love the story so please continue. I´ll try to catch up. Post soon
YAAAY! Will it be happiness at last? As always. . .love this story. PLEASE post again soon!
greenie..you are amazing! I am sure I have said that before. Thank you for this chapter and I sure hope you give us one very soon..like this weekend. You will be glad to know that Albeez and I only had greetea for our drink tonight..it is very cold and warmed us up. Now you just need to drag our asses to that yoga class. albeez…ready for more?
When she’s near me, I’ll kiss her,And when she leaves me woo I’ll miss herThough sometimes we’ll fight, I won’t really careAnd I’ll know it’s gonna be alright cause we’ve got so much we shareLike f_ _ ing in the rain (like f_ _ ing in the rain)And wishing on the stars (and wishing on the stars) up aboveAnd being so in love(Helena) no no she’ll never do(Ziggy) no it isn’t him tooThey would never no they’d never never ever loveF _ _ ing in the rain (like f _ _ ing in the rain)And wishing on the stars (and wishing on the stars) up aboveAnd being so in love
Yes thankfully, my computer problems have been resolved. I was so tempted to chuck it out the window, but then decided it would probably be better to pay for just a new computer instead of for a new computer and a new window. LOL I didn’t even realize that I sounded like a walking advertisement for detergent. That was pretty good, they should hire me! ;) “I hope so too.” You hope so too?! *Looks frantically toward the front of the bus. Greentea is sitting in the front seat with her feet up lazing around and relaxing.* Who’s driving us on this crazy journey?! LOL *Pumps fist into the air* Woo-hoo! I’m glad Bette’s audacity paid off. Hopefully Tina won’t regret this later. It is kind of ironic how Carmen can’t see why Tina would stay with Bette when she’s not being treated well when their relationship with each other was virtually the same. Thanks for finding the time to grace us with another chapter, greentea. And also, congrats on the Fanfic Award!!!! I was soo ecstatic to see that you had won! :D
yay! you’re back. great chapter as always. I was so glad to see Bette show up in cabo. I like the fact that Bette didn’t go off on Tina about Carmen. I guess she realized she really didn’t have to, because Carmen could never have Tina’s heart the way Bette does. And Tina knows that. loved the end of the chapter. You had me nervous for a minute. but I have come to expect the unexpected with you, and that’s what I love about your style. ps. Hey it’s good to see that the award didn’t give you a big head!! LOL. just j/k babe. you’re the coolest.
I am new to your writing. When I saw the Awards posting, I decided to check your story out. Best Sex Story, and how! One of the best overall stories, period. Props to your mad skillz. You must be a professional writer ’cause your writing is amazing. You’ve got it all woman, imagery, phrasing and storytelling…non pareil. I also enjoy that you’re chapters are longer than most on this site plus the detail and development of the S/L is exceptional. I like this twist w/T being the playa. How do you imagine this stuff? I’d love to sit at your feet and learn from the master.
oops, i was waxing poetic about miss green and forgot to leave my comment. how rude was that? *head slap* angel, there you go with the push me and pull me. i swear im getting taller from you doing this to me. heehee. sometimes you leave me so dazed and confused *sigh* but in a very good way. so what did i think. i asked and you came. i was a puddle and you scrapped me up off the ground and put me back together again, though im missing a piece out of my tricep. have you seen that? would love to put it back. wonderfully it wasnt a piece of my heart. since you have all of that and i dont want it back. does this tell you yet what i thought of this chappy? honestly, this is coming out of my mouth. if you had taken us down another path with tee still not ready to be with bette i would have had a very unsettling day but i would have trusted you on this journey. trust is such an important concept between you and us. thanks for treating us with respect.i know you are in my head but baby this was deja vuie. “he had already made his decision.. didnt inform me or his 4 kids of it. i have NEVER in my life felt so …” a very dismantling situation for us. but we survived and became so strong.carmen baby – why do i always want to wash my hands after you bring her up???? interesting how she doesn’t mind being fucked over just to be with tina????wondering while wandering – angel – do it all the time.laughing = orgasms. mwah, honey you have no idea. hmmmm. still in my head baby.my eyes were closed btw.fell down, face first into the sand with, “the sweetest moan know to woman.” you just left me there, prostrate, unable to care for myself. all those sensations blowing gently over me. yes that was me spitting out sand while trying to breathe.i think i congratulated you already, but wouldnt mind doing it again. do you want me to? l’d love to. tell me what you want?begging for more
fergz – hell yeah baby im ready for more. the greentea tea was just as delicious but not quite as the words the exceedlingly lovely greenie gave to us, her slaves. she is the mistress of her domain.
forgot to *wave* at j, blue and b&tf. dear women all.
Damn that was amazing!