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Sun Salutations: Chapter 9
Tina wanted to scream with excitement. She was on a mission to provide as much pleasure to Bette as the law would allow. The anxious blonde was just like a kid in a candy store, and had she not forced herself to remain calm at this moment, she would have been eagerly jumping up and down in place with arms flailing everywhere.
Bette watched as Tina moved her hands slowly up and down the curves of her body. She watched her every move moaning softly, thrilled at what played across the mirror before her. It wasn’t until now that she noticed her shirt had been removed somewhere along the way. Tina kissed the side of Bette’s neck passionately causing both of her dark brown eyes to close.
“Are you watching Bette?” Tina asked as she slid one hand down the front of Bette’s thong and caressed her left nipple with the other. “Please look in the mirror. Do you like what you see?”
“Yes” Bette panted, realizing her air supply was totally gone.
“You’re so beautiful Bette. Do you know that?” Tina didn’t let Bette even attempt to answer. She had other pressing questions on her mind. “May I see if you’re wet baby? I just need to see. Please let me” Tina couldn’t finish.
“Yes” Bette whispered.
Tina parted the soft, downy hair between Bette’s legs finding what she had been dreaming about for what seemed like forever. She began trembling as her fingers were warmly greeted by Bette’s abundant wetness.
She slowly stroked Bette’s hard, swollen ***** up and down repeatedly with a feather light touch. Slowly up and downcirclingspreading escaped liquid around her lips. Bette whimpered and gasped slightly, unable to form any words. As much as she wanted to express her feelings about the wonderful pleasure she was experiencing, the dazed damsel couldn’t.
“Bette, look at yourself in the mirror and see how beautiful you are.” Tina’s other hand continued to roll Bette’s nipple slowly between her thumb and forefinger. She persisted stroking Bette’s ***** up and down gently and ever so slowly. Bette rocked her hips back and forth following the rhythm that Tina set. She sharply inhaled through her teeth as Tina gently entered her with one finger.
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(31 votes, average: 4.87 out of 5)
That was mind blowing.
ugh.. i need a cold shower!
That was F****** hot..
Loved it.
wow..wow…I knew that you were going to do this NC17 like this, you are a totally amazing picture painter!!! Too Hot, and again I love how they flip/flop between being the boss and the bitch…It’s going to be interesting to see what Helena has to say after she actually see’s bette in person, no way to hide that face…..just fucked!!! Go Girl
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my computer is burned up now i need a new one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok bad idea to read this one at work. *sweating* Hot, scrumptious, and sensuous chapter. Whew…keep up the great writing.
WOW!!!!!!!!!
One of the most erotic, passionate, and extremely well written love scenes I have ever read. Excellent work.
That was beautifully written….OMG.
I need some water to cool down.
Thank you.
Worth the wait! Yeehaaa!
jesus christ…that was so so so so hot!!! luv it tea continue soon!!!
OK! I am going to enroll in Yoga now! Daaaa-yyyyyuuumnnn! That was HOTTER than HOT! Sh*t! My computer is smokin! I love the dirty talking. That is definitely a turn-on! Talk about SEXY!… I am going to have to read this chapter again. =) My cheeks are aching from smiling so much while reading thiS. I guess I should tell you, “I F*CKING LOVE IT!”
hey sweet cheeks. lol before i get into OMFG. i thought id just about laughed myself silly with “jumping up and down with arms flailing everywhere.” priceless.
jesus greenie, where the hell do you live. i need to come and buy you a drink. the seesawing between the 2 of them on whos the boss. dayum girl hot. im so glad i havent showered. its more than 100 degrees here. shit ive never read anything like that before. thanks and do that again real soon. im honored to be your first.
Holy nylons catwoman, this story is the hottest thing I’ve ever read…more…please
Girl, I think this story may get you laid and paid! :)
love the story, actually I think I need lots of cold showers. Tina as a free-spirited alternative yoga spiritual controlling the mighty Bette Porter is without question one of the most refreshing ways Tina has been described. So please keep up the goog work and post soon.
damn..that was fucking HOT!! wow and wow hehe
SPEECHLESS!!!!
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I know now that I do have self-control cos in my mind i passed out at least 5 times reading this but I made it through without havin to pick myself up of the floor. In the process tho my jaw broke crashin on the floor. HOT DAYUMMMMMMMMM!!! I have no words…that was just delciously executed and to die for.
I luved Bette takin over the power role from tina..oooweee, she didnt see it coming.
Oh and i was crackin up at the cursing in the haven.Thats the most hilarious bit ive read..I hope Bette will never leave Tina off the hook for that one..*hahaha*
Okay..when i have regained my senses I will see whether I can write more but just one thing..peaches will never be the same to me. Oh MY GOD!!! *thud*
OMFG that was HOT.
OMFG – I need a cold shower.
Holy flying monkeys Batman! This was completely amazing! Whew, cold shower and some water! Please continue the wonderful work!
That was out of this world!! So hot and beautiful! Wow wow wow!! I think I need a cold shower! I’m actually going to the gym with my friend and now I’m going to be disappointed cuz Bette & Tina don’t work there lol Can’t wait for more!
oh my fucking god.
In the immortal words of one Bette Porter….Oh my fuckin’ god!
G, you made the passion so visual that I had waves of pleasure just reading it. Oh my fuckin’ god; I need to call my g/f right NOW!
And the talkin’ dirty…I loved every second of it!
Tina the playa, protecting her haven
The picture you paint – each other they’re cravin’
Full of passion and lust, blindness you inspire
The words flow seamlessly, a portrait of wanton desire
Your efforts as you spill the words onto the page
Make me think Helena’s set for a right f*n rage!
I leave this verse now, my hope is to praise
Your words on which I have meandered my gaze
I thank you so much for taking the time
To honour us with your writing, I think it’s simply divine
So now Bette is trying to top a top? the power exchange between these two could be interesting – please mistress can we have some more?
I always thought Tina is a sensual woman. And she is in this story. Thank you for that.
I am in complete loss of words… this chapter has just left me in awe! I don’t know what to say… You not only are keeping me happy… I am ectatic!! I wanna scream and jump up and down like Tina wanted… I F****G LOVE YOUR STORY!!!
That was Fucken Hot! I like how Bette took controle of Tina, each theire turn. Excellent post real soon
“Sex… is a joy to the joyful, healthful to the healthy, illuminating to those who seek illumination. As in everything else, as ye seek, so shall ye find.” http://www.kundalini-yoga.com
OMG, I just caught up with this story, and may mistake was doing it at work. Yeah I can concentrate. This last chapter, fantastic, my god I don’t think even a cold shower would do it. Just love how you reversed the roles and Tina is the agressor with the reputation. Though it does look like our Ms. Bette is turning things just a bit. Totally awesome, don’t know if you can top this chapter, and if you do, I don’t know if we can handle it.
OMFG…that was mind blowing….I need a cold shower right now….just give me a minute here…fuck…………
Just been doing some catching up on your story here greentea and I must say the last chapter took me by storm….OMG..that was so hot green my computer almost crashed. Loving it loving it…post soon….that was excellent work soooo real.
D-A-M-N!!
Blow kisses, and take a bow, cause that was incredible.
Damn so fucking hottttttttttttt!
ok damn, you should warn people LMAO
just got home from school, and OMG it’s midnight and well I was trying to go to bed but I think I’m going to be up for a little while. I’m really craving some sex right about now. Look what your doing to me. LOL I just don’t know if I can read your story and not comment about it. The next time my roommate asks me to come do yoga with her I’m going to her your story in my head.
Hot. Sweet. Tasteful. So well written!!!!
that was do f****** erotic! I love how Bette flipped the script on Tina. excellent story. Pls continue asap!
Ok, so I’m reading this a little bit late…Tuesday morn.
Now, I’ve been told that drinking tea helps to calm and soothe you but, JESUS girl!…you know what is all worked up! Nobody better come in my office anytime soon otherwise I’m not sure I’d be able to control my behaviour! Girl that was too hot! Lord…Tina and her tongue…Bette and the pussy talk…Wow it was just so gosh dang erotic! Forget NC-17 that my friend was XXX!!! As for bringing Hels back….4get that! We definitely want more of that dirty talk between the two!
Two very strong will,beautiful sexy ladies. Lets see if Bette Porter can tame the player. Are did Tina open a can of worms in Bette will she be a player also, Thanks
oh god…we are all insane now… fucking hot…
I’m rereading classic stories and damn woman, you wrote the hell out of this one. It’s still incredible.