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Sun Salutations: Chapter 9
“Yes”
Small, wet kisses followed the path blazed by the peach on Bette’s trembling thighs. Tina knew her time was running out. Bette was fading fast. “Bette, look in the mirror.” As she struggled to focus her eyes on the mirror, she shuddered at the unmistakable sight of Tina kneeling between her legs.
“I can’t wait to taste you baby”
“***** Tina.” Bette said loudly. “*****.” she bolted even louder.
“Is your ***** as sweet as the rest of you? Tina softly questioned. “Bette, I’m talking to you baby. May I taste you? I need to taste the origin of your sweetness baby. May I?”
Almost in tears, Bette muttered a barely audible “Yes”
“Thank you. I know you taste so good. *****.” Tina was losing her mind as well. “Promise me you’ll tell me how you feel while I’m enjoying you baby.”
“Um.” Bette had to concentrate on forming any words that attempted to depart her mouth. And right now, at this particular moment, her mind and mouth were not communicating at all. She was drifting through time and space rapidly approaching the point of no return.
Tina smiled as she tilted her head to the side and started her visual inventory of the treasure between Bette’s legs. She planted a wet kiss directly on Bette’s center and used her thumbs to part Bette’s slick lips. “Damn baby. So beautiful Bette. I just want to kiss, suck and lick you until you can’t take anymore. Would that be okay baby?”
“Yes. ***** Tina” Bette whimpered.
Tina patiently explored Bette’s pleasure zone and as her mouth kissed, sucked and licked as promised, Bette expressed her gratitude to Tina with screams of pleasure and naughty words of appreciation.
Bette grabbed the crown of Tina’s hair, held on for dear life and rode Tina’s tongue until the goodness she had been focusing on all night sweetly and powerfully flowed out. Tina had never tasted anything sweeter.
Tears trickled down Bette’s face as she slowly returned to earth, to
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Morning found Bette lazily sprawled across Tina’s bed with her right leg partially covered by the soft beige cotton sheet. Tina had already done her morning Sun Salutations and was finishing up a round of stretching on the floor of her haven. Bette slowly opened her eyes to see Tina’s back to her as she sat with her legs spread apart reaching over touching her toes. Her perfectly aligned head and upper body lay flat on her left leg as both hands gripped her left foot extending her stretch. Bette got out of bed and sat closely behind Tina with her legs outstretched as well. Tina received a tight squeeze around the base of her stomach.
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(31 votes, average: 4.87 out of 5)
That was mind blowing.
ugh.. i need a cold shower!
That was F****** hot..
Loved it.
wow..wow…I knew that you were going to do this NC17 like this, you are a totally amazing picture painter!!! Too Hot, and again I love how they flip/flop between being the boss and the bitch…It’s going to be interesting to see what Helena has to say after she actually see’s bette in person, no way to hide that face…..just fucked!!! Go Girl
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my computer is burned up now i need a new one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok bad idea to read this one at work. *sweating* Hot, scrumptious, and sensuous chapter. Whew…keep up the great writing.
WOW!!!!!!!!!
One of the most erotic, passionate, and extremely well written love scenes I have ever read. Excellent work.
That was beautifully written….OMG.
I need some water to cool down.
Thank you.
Worth the wait! Yeehaaa!
jesus christ…that was so so so so hot!!! luv it tea continue soon!!!
OK! I am going to enroll in Yoga now! Daaaa-yyyyyuuumnnn! That was HOTTER than HOT! Sh*t! My computer is smokin! I love the dirty talking. That is definitely a turn-on! Talk about SEXY!… I am going to have to read this chapter again. =) My cheeks are aching from smiling so much while reading thiS. I guess I should tell you, “I F*CKING LOVE IT!”
hey sweet cheeks. lol before i get into OMFG. i thought id just about laughed myself silly with “jumping up and down with arms flailing everywhere.” priceless.
jesus greenie, where the hell do you live. i need to come and buy you a drink. the seesawing between the 2 of them on whos the boss. dayum girl hot. im so glad i havent showered. its more than 100 degrees here. shit ive never read anything like that before. thanks and do that again real soon. im honored to be your first.
Holy nylons catwoman, this story is the hottest thing I’ve ever read…more…please
Girl, I think this story may get you laid and paid! :)
love the story, actually I think I need lots of cold showers. Tina as a free-spirited alternative yoga spiritual controlling the mighty Bette Porter is without question one of the most refreshing ways Tina has been described. So please keep up the goog work and post soon.
damn..that was fucking HOT!! wow and wow hehe
SPEECHLESS!!!!
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I know now that I do have self-control cos in my mind i passed out at least 5 times reading this but I made it through without havin to pick myself up of the floor. In the process tho my jaw broke crashin on the floor. HOT DAYUMMMMMMMMM!!! I have no words…that was just delciously executed and to die for.
I luved Bette takin over the power role from tina..oooweee, she didnt see it coming.
Oh and i was crackin up at the cursing in the haven.Thats the most hilarious bit ive read..I hope Bette will never leave Tina off the hook for that one..*hahaha*
Okay..when i have regained my senses I will see whether I can write more but just one thing..peaches will never be the same to me. Oh MY GOD!!! *thud*
OMFG that was HOT.
OMFG – I need a cold shower.
Holy flying monkeys Batman! This was completely amazing! Whew, cold shower and some water! Please continue the wonderful work!
That was out of this world!! So hot and beautiful! Wow wow wow!! I think I need a cold shower! I’m actually going to the gym with my friend and now I’m going to be disappointed cuz Bette & Tina don’t work there lol Can’t wait for more!
oh my fucking god.
In the immortal words of one Bette Porter….Oh my fuckin’ god!
G, you made the passion so visual that I had waves of pleasure just reading it. Oh my fuckin’ god; I need to call my g/f right NOW!
And the talkin’ dirty…I loved every second of it!
Tina the playa, protecting her haven
The picture you paint – each other they’re cravin’
Full of passion and lust, blindness you inspire
The words flow seamlessly, a portrait of wanton desire
Your efforts as you spill the words onto the page
Make me think Helena’s set for a right f*n rage!
I leave this verse now, my hope is to praise
Your words on which I have meandered my gaze
I thank you so much for taking the time
To honour us with your writing, I think it’s simply divine
So now Bette is trying to top a top? the power exchange between these two could be interesting – please mistress can we have some more?
I always thought Tina is a sensual woman. And she is in this story. Thank you for that.
I am in complete loss of words… this chapter has just left me in awe! I don’t know what to say… You not only are keeping me happy… I am ectatic!! I wanna scream and jump up and down like Tina wanted… I F****G LOVE YOUR STORY!!!
That was Fucken Hot! I like how Bette took controle of Tina, each theire turn. Excellent post real soon
“Sex… is a joy to the joyful, healthful to the healthy, illuminating to those who seek illumination. As in everything else, as ye seek, so shall ye find.” http://www.kundalini-yoga.com
OMG, I just caught up with this story, and may mistake was doing it at work. Yeah I can concentrate. This last chapter, fantastic, my god I don’t think even a cold shower would do it. Just love how you reversed the roles and Tina is the agressor with the reputation. Though it does look like our Ms. Bette is turning things just a bit. Totally awesome, don’t know if you can top this chapter, and if you do, I don’t know if we can handle it.
OMFG…that was mind blowing….I need a cold shower right now….just give me a minute here…fuck…………
Just been doing some catching up on your story here greentea and I must say the last chapter took me by storm….OMG..that was so hot green my computer almost crashed. Loving it loving it…post soon….that was excellent work soooo real.
D-A-M-N!!
Blow kisses, and take a bow, cause that was incredible.
Damn so fucking hottttttttttttt!
ok damn, you should warn people LMAO
just got home from school, and OMG it’s midnight and well I was trying to go to bed but I think I’m going to be up for a little while. I’m really craving some sex right about now. Look what your doing to me. LOL I just don’t know if I can read your story and not comment about it. The next time my roommate asks me to come do yoga with her I’m going to her your story in my head.
Hot. Sweet. Tasteful. So well written!!!!
that was do f****** erotic! I love how Bette flipped the script on Tina. excellent story. Pls continue asap!
Ok, so I’m reading this a little bit late…Tuesday morn.
Now, I’ve been told that drinking tea helps to calm and soothe you but, JESUS girl!…you know what is all worked up! Nobody better come in my office anytime soon otherwise I’m not sure I’d be able to control my behaviour! Girl that was too hot! Lord…Tina and her tongue…Bette and the pussy talk…Wow it was just so gosh dang erotic! Forget NC-17 that my friend was XXX!!! As for bringing Hels back….4get that! We definitely want more of that dirty talk between the two!
Two very strong will,beautiful sexy ladies. Lets see if Bette Porter can tame the player. Are did Tina open a can of worms in Bette will she be a player also, Thanks
oh god…we are all insane now… fucking hot…
I’m rereading classic stories and damn woman, you wrote the hell out of this one. It’s still incredible.