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Survival: Chapter 3
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“For what, drinking tea and sitting around all afternoon gossiping?” Dana teased. “I think I’ll be able to manage that. Besides, I’ve been craving one of those Danishes at The Planet for weeks now.”
“Ok, ok,” Alice relented. She was pleased to see that Dana was almost fully back to her old self again, but she wanted to make sure she didn’t push it. Alice had been a firsthand witness to just how precarious Dana’s health was now, and the last thing she wanted was for her to have a relapse. At the same time, she didn’t want Dana to feel like a sick person all the time; she knew how important it was for her to get out and live her life.
“Oh, spring rolls!” Dana exclaimed, interrupting Alice’s thoughts. She reached over with her chopsticks to steal one off Alice’s plate. “I didn’t even see those on the counter.”
“Hey, get your own spring rolls!” Alice protested with a laugh.
“Too late,” Dana teased, taking a big bite of the roll with a triumphant grin. “You can’t get angry, Alice – I’m sick, remember? Everyone is supposed to let the sick person get her way.”
“We’ll see about that,” Alice said threateningly. Quickly, she got on her knees in front of the couch, and before Dana could stop her, she grabbed her hand and stole the other half of the spring roll from between the chopsticks with her teeth.
“Hey, that’s not fair!” Dana yelled with a laugh, which grew louder when she saw the mess Alice had made of both of them in her haste to steal the spring roll. Pieces of cabbage and batter had fallen into her lap, and Alice had a smear of chilli sauce on the side of her mouth.
“Look at you,” Dana laughed, with a fond look at Alice’s face. “You’re a mess.” With her thumb, she reached forward and wiped away the sauce from Alice’s cheek. Letting her hand linger for a moment against the side of Alice’s face, she felt her eyes moving down almost against her will to Alice’s inviting lips.
Suddenly, she felt very aware of Alice’s proximity and the fact that she still hadn’t moved her hands off Dana’s legs as she kneeled on the floor in front of the couch. Dana bit her bottom lip softly as she remembered with perfect clarity the feeling of Alice mouth against her own. It was a feeling she had missed over the past few months, though she was only starting to realise just how much.
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A&D think too much, they need to as Shane put it get over thier stubborness…This is good…PPS
this was such a could chapter we had Dana and Alice kissing and then we had drama.
These two need their heads knocking together – everyone knows they belong together except themselves. PPS
Yay for updates! I was wondering whether/hoping that Miss Lara would come into the picture somehow-you know how I ‘heart’ her as a character, with Dana OR with Alice, so the interaction with her and Danish will take some getting used to for me, even though I know everyone and their dog loves Danish;) So, I was glad to see how you’re weaving Lara in. I feel so bad for her, really. But I like how you have Dana remaining steadfast about expectations–very believable. (Hmmm, Lara just needs to have her world rocked by someone else, no?) All said, I look forward to seeing how you continue developing the story and I’m digging the way you are unravelling Danish. It’s such a refreshing change to the end of S3/all of S4, haha. Aww, you’re sweet, I’m doing well, and some day somewhere down the long road I may get enough time and confidence to write something on my own, we’ll see…you and Gold are tough acts to follow;) Looking forward to the next update!
Love this story. Always wished someone would write a storyline picking up from S3 (minus the dana-dying, of course). Thank you for doing it justice. PPS!!
argh – communication has always been such a problem with these two and you obviously captured that perfectly. but what a great chapter. i like the jenny with a thick skin comment. oh how true! post soon.
This 3rd chapter was a great way to spend part of my lunch hour! Now you’ve got the right mix going….nothing like a little added drama with Lara’s return…I was wondering if she’d some into the picture at some point. I loved that Dana wanted a danish by the way! You’re very good at building the tension between two characters by the way- I was very sad when the kissing scene come to an end. Also, had to laugh aloud when Jenny mentioned she had thick skin and could handle negative reviews! Good stuff again, blue! have a good weekend…
what!!!! nooooo… ahhh. my little heart is breaking with dana’s.i love your story, please post soon. it’s beyond amazing to read such a riveting ‘update’ on dana and alice… um, since… yeah. that whole, .. dead thing. and then the.. ghost… thing. what the fuck. okay. yes. i just want you to know i love this and appreciate it so so much, you fucking rule.
oh, ps.. cute on the planet ‘danishes’ and jenny’s ‘thick skin’ notes
i really love this story. so much so that i was late to class b/c i didnt want to stop reading it! you write the characters so well, can’t wait for more.
ouch. poor dana :S hope lara’s comeback makes danish realise what they have. i agree, you know how to build the tension between them. keep the writing :]
hey i read this a while ago but didn’t comment..i really like this story and loving the drama please continue and soon lol :)