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Survival: Chapter 3
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Without giving herself enough time to second-guess either herself or the moment they found themselves in, Dana leaned forward and brushed her lips softly against Alice’s. She felt Alice breath in sharply in surprise, but she soon responded to the light pressure of Dana’s lips. The kiss was tentative, and Dana pulled away after a few seconds, suddenly uncertain about what she was doing.
“Sorry, Alice,” Dana murmured apologetically, her head swimming with a series of confused thoughts. On the one hand, she felt like no time had passed since they had sat exactly like this on that Sunday afternoon months ago when they were still together. Back then, Dana wouldn’t have thought twice about enveloping Alice in her arms, forgetting about everything else and pulling her onto the couch. But, things were different between them now, and she couldn’t expect Alice to just forget about all the pain they had caused each other since then.
With these dark thoughts going through her mind, Dana was caught off-guard by Alice’s soft reply. “Don’t be sorry,” she said shyly. Glancing up in surprise, Dana met Alice’s eyes questioningly. Alice returned her gaze as she slid her hand to the back of Dana’s neck, before leaning forward to bring their lips together again, this time with more assurance. Dana shifted her legs apart so that Alice could slide forward on the floor to press their bodies together, and moaned softly when she felt Alice’s tongue moving lightly across her lips. In response, she deepened the kiss, drawing an answering sigh out of Alice. Wrapping their arms tightly around each other, they allowed themselves to express all of their unspoken thoughts and feelings through their kiss. Both women were surprised to find how natural it felt to be back in each other’s arms; it was as though the past few months had only been a minor blip in their relationship.
But, after a few minutes, Alice pulled away, drawing a breathless protest from Dana. “Sorry,” she murmured, looking up at Dana shyly, her face flushed from the effects of their embrace. “It’s just that… I’m not sure this is the best idea right now. I mean, with everything that’s happened lately, I’m worried that this could get really confusing really quickly – for both of us. Maybe we should put this on hold for awhile, ok?”
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A&D think too much, they need to as Shane put it get over thier stubborness…This is good…PPS
this was such a could chapter we had Dana and Alice kissing and then we had drama.
These two need their heads knocking together – everyone knows they belong together except themselves. PPS
Yay for updates! I was wondering whether/hoping that Miss Lara would come into the picture somehow-you know how I ‘heart’ her as a character, with Dana OR with Alice, so the interaction with her and Danish will take some getting used to for me, even though I know everyone and their dog loves Danish;) So, I was glad to see how you’re weaving Lara in. I feel so bad for her, really. But I like how you have Dana remaining steadfast about expectations–very believable. (Hmmm, Lara just needs to have her world rocked by someone else, no?) All said, I look forward to seeing how you continue developing the story and I’m digging the way you are unravelling Danish. It’s such a refreshing change to the end of S3/all of S4, haha. Aww, you’re sweet, I’m doing well, and some day somewhere down the long road I may get enough time and confidence to write something on my own, we’ll see…you and Gold are tough acts to follow;) Looking forward to the next update!
Love this story. Always wished someone would write a storyline picking up from S3 (minus the dana-dying, of course). Thank you for doing it justice. PPS!!
argh – communication has always been such a problem with these two and you obviously captured that perfectly. but what a great chapter. i like the jenny with a thick skin comment. oh how true! post soon.
This 3rd chapter was a great way to spend part of my lunch hour! Now you’ve got the right mix going….nothing like a little added drama with Lara’s return…I was wondering if she’d some into the picture at some point. I loved that Dana wanted a danish by the way! You’re very good at building the tension between two characters by the way- I was very sad when the kissing scene come to an end. Also, had to laugh aloud when Jenny mentioned she had thick skin and could handle negative reviews! Good stuff again, blue! have a good weekend…
what!!!! nooooo… ahhh. my little heart is breaking with dana’s.i love your story, please post soon. it’s beyond amazing to read such a riveting ‘update’ on dana and alice… um, since… yeah. that whole, .. dead thing. and then the.. ghost… thing. what the fuck. okay. yes. i just want you to know i love this and appreciate it so so much, you fucking rule.
oh, ps.. cute on the planet ‘danishes’ and jenny’s ‘thick skin’ notes
i really love this story. so much so that i was late to class b/c i didnt want to stop reading it! you write the characters so well, can’t wait for more.
ouch. poor dana :S hope lara’s comeback makes danish realise what they have. i agree, you know how to build the tension between them. keep the writing :]
hey i read this a while ago but didn’t comment..i really like this story and loving the drama please continue and soon lol :)