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Survival: Chapter 3
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“Perfect, Shane!” Jenny responded, clapping her hands enthusiastically.
“It’d better be,” Shane said, sticking her end of the sign onto the wall with a grunt of effort. Jumping down from the chair she’d been standing on, she took a few steps back to scrutinise their work.
“That looks great, guys,” Bette said, entering the café carrying Angelica in her arms. “You and Jenny should go into the sign-making business together,” she added with a grin at Shane.
“Yeah, right,” Shane retorted. “It took us three hours to come up with the brilliant slogan ‘Welcome back, Dana’ and to decide on a colour scheme. I think we’d kill each other if we had to make banners fulltime.”
“It wasn’t that bad, Shane,” Jenny argued, greeting Angelica with a little wave. “Plus, Dana will love it, I’m sure, so it will be worth the effort.”
“I think it’s a great idea, girls,” Kit agreed from behind the front counter. “And, you’re just in time,” she added, looking through one of the large front windows to see Alice’s mini pulling up to the café. “It looks like she and Alice are here.”
“So, what’s going on between Alice and Dana?” Bette asked, lowering her voice for some conspiratorial gossip before the women came inside. “Are they back together, or what?”
“Well, hasn’t Alice basically moved in with Dana to take care of her?” Jenny asked, turning to Shane questioningly. “That must mean something.”
“Oh, who knows,” Shane answered in obvious frustration. “Neither of them will admit to anything, but it’s obvious that something’s going on. Of course, if they actually get over their stubbornness long enough to be honest with each other, it will be the shock of the century – hey, guys!” Seamlessly switching her tone from quiet whispering to cheerful welcoming, Shane waved to Alice and Dana as they walked inside The Planet.
“What’s all this?” Dana asked, noticing the banner with a moved smile.
“Shane and I made it!” Jenny proclaimed, greeting Dana with a hug.
“Thanks, guys,” Dana said, pulling Shane into a grateful hug. “That’s really sweet.”
“Welcome back, Dane,” Shane said, as the rest of the group came forward to say hello.
“Wow, how artistic,” Alice said, looking closely at the banner. “I had no idea you guys had so much talent.”
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A&D think too much, they need to as Shane put it get over thier stubborness…This is good…PPS
this was such a could chapter we had Dana and Alice kissing and then we had drama.
These two need their heads knocking together – everyone knows they belong together except themselves. PPS
Yay for updates! I was wondering whether/hoping that Miss Lara would come into the picture somehow-you know how I ‘heart’ her as a character, with Dana OR with Alice, so the interaction with her and Danish will take some getting used to for me, even though I know everyone and their dog loves Danish;) So, I was glad to see how you’re weaving Lara in. I feel so bad for her, really. But I like how you have Dana remaining steadfast about expectations–very believable. (Hmmm, Lara just needs to have her world rocked by someone else, no?) All said, I look forward to seeing how you continue developing the story and I’m digging the way you are unravelling Danish. It’s such a refreshing change to the end of S3/all of S4, haha. Aww, you’re sweet, I’m doing well, and some day somewhere down the long road I may get enough time and confidence to write something on my own, we’ll see…you and Gold are tough acts to follow;) Looking forward to the next update!
Love this story. Always wished someone would write a storyline picking up from S3 (minus the dana-dying, of course). Thank you for doing it justice. PPS!!
argh – communication has always been such a problem with these two and you obviously captured that perfectly. but what a great chapter. i like the jenny with a thick skin comment. oh how true! post soon.
This 3rd chapter was a great way to spend part of my lunch hour! Now you’ve got the right mix going….nothing like a little added drama with Lara’s return…I was wondering if she’d some into the picture at some point. I loved that Dana wanted a danish by the way! You’re very good at building the tension between two characters by the way- I was very sad when the kissing scene come to an end. Also, had to laugh aloud when Jenny mentioned she had thick skin and could handle negative reviews! Good stuff again, blue! have a good weekend…
what!!!! nooooo… ahhh. my little heart is breaking with dana’s.i love your story, please post soon. it’s beyond amazing to read such a riveting ‘update’ on dana and alice… um, since… yeah. that whole, .. dead thing. and then the.. ghost… thing. what the fuck. okay. yes. i just want you to know i love this and appreciate it so so much, you fucking rule.
oh, ps.. cute on the planet ‘danishes’ and jenny’s ‘thick skin’ notes
i really love this story. so much so that i was late to class b/c i didnt want to stop reading it! you write the characters so well, can’t wait for more.
ouch. poor dana :S hope lara’s comeback makes danish realise what they have. i agree, you know how to build the tension between them. keep the writing :]
hey i read this a while ago but didn’t comment..i really like this story and loving the drama please continue and soon lol :)